My Personal Manifesto...

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There was a boy who drown a few years ago in Louisville Ky... I knew him because i hired him to help my friend and I build a music studio and he was heading the construction crew...

One day I was sitting at lunch with him and I scribbled out this poem on a napkin... when he was Found it was in his pocket wallet about 2 months later...

His mother told me of how it had begun to change his life... and how it had inspired him alot and he had begun to quote it alot...

Anyway, Louis end was sad... but this poem here... I have scribbled down on a napkin for probably 10 or 20 young kids in my lifetime and I still do this day whenever I see someone who is on the brink of their own greatness...

I have shared it here before, but its so meaningful i want to share it again... Its my personal manifesto... I once held a contest for 25 bucks in my call center to anyone who could memorize it because it just does THAT MUCH GOOD! About 10 people did it! And are so Glad they did:

Rudyard Kipling
If

If you can keep your head when all about you
Are losing theirs and blaming it on you;
If you can trust yourself when all men doubt you,
But make allowance for their doubting too;

If you can wait and not be tired by waiting,
Or, being lied about, don't deal in lies,
Or, being hated, don't give way to hating,
And yet don't look too good, nor talk too wise;

If you can dream - and not make dreams your master;
If you can think - and not make thoughts your aim;
If you can meet with triumph and disaster
And treat those two imposters just the same;

If you can bear to hear the truth you've spoken
Twisted by knaves to make a trap for fools,
Or watch the things you gave your life to broken,
And stoop and build 'em up again, with wornout tools;

If you can make one heap of all your winnings
And risk it on one turn of pitch-and-toss,
And lose, and start again at your beginnings
And never breath a word about your loss;

If you can force your heart and nerve and sinew
To serve your turn long after they are gone,
And so hold on when there is nothing in you
Except the Will which says to them: "Hold on";

If you can talk with crowds and keep your virtue,
Or walk with kings - nor lose the common touch;
If neither foes nor loving friends can hurt you;
If all men count with you, but none too much;

If you can fill the unforgiving minute
With sixty seconds' worth of distance run -
Yours is the Earth and everything that's in it,
And - which is more - you'll be a Man my son!
  • Profile picture of the author money bubble
    wow... all i have to say... wow... I'm saving this poem btw. I'm glad I stopped to read
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    • Profile picture of the author jimbo13
      John

      This is a great poem and it is great that you bring poetry such as this to young people.

      For your interest, the poem is frequently quoted for major sporting events here in the UK, as well as the line:

      If you can meet with triumph and disaster
      And treat those two imposters just the same;

      being engraved into the wall above the players' entrance to Centre Court at Wimbledon.

      Regards
      Dan
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  • Profile picture of the author Sumit Menon
    It's a great poem, even though I despise Rudyard Kipling.
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    • Profile picture of the author Steven Wagenheim
      Very few people could write like Kipling.

      And this poem is living proof of it.

      John...thanks for sharing this. My memory isn't what it used to be, but I'll sure
      as hell give it a shot.
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      • Profile picture of the author Kay King
        That was one of my Grandmother's favorite poems. I've always love those words. My favorite part is

        If you can dream - and not make dreams your master;
        If you can think - and not make thoughts your aim;
        If you can meet with triumph and disaster
        And treat those two imposters just the same;
        Those four lines cover a lot of ground to me.
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        • Profile picture of the author John Durham
          Originally Posted by Kay King View Post

          That was one of my Grandmother's favorite poems. I've always love those words. My favorite part is



          Those four lines cover a lot of ground to me.
          Isnt it the truth. I think this poem covers just about everything a man/woman could face with so few words and how to confront it. Everyday, one of these lines comes up in some situation for me and reminds me, if Ill pay attention, to whats the right thing to do.

          I have seriously thought that when my boys get older (girls are grown) that when they come to me asking to borrow money... the secret pass code is gonna be showing me they can quote that poem... because if they get that down in their subconscious I know they will be fine with money and everything else.

          lol. They will be practicing and brushing up all the way to my house 20 years from now.
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  • Profile picture of the author John Durham
    BOY is memorizing this poem serving me well today!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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