Can you please be mean to me and critique an original song?
I wrote this song
Tell me the weak spots. Sometimes we as composers are too attached to our material, that we refuse to see improvements.
I added changing instruments, which I hope would do the trick to not bore the listener to death.
But any constructive criticism would be great.
There is a part that it sounds like I say "pee" but I really say "peach" ::puts hand over face::
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