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I would like to get your opinion about a writing matter.
I'm planning on writing come content for my newsletter ahead of time, and I've recently wrote my first "article". English is not my first language, obviously, so I've ordered Proofreading on fiverr from a high rated seller (the gig included spelling, grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure check), but what I've got back is really just some spelling mistakes corrected.
So I'm going to paste a short chunk of the article, and I would like to ask some native speaker for an honest opinion: is what I write readable/good enough to post on a website/in a newsletter, or should I search for another proofreading or other kind of editing?
I'll be really greatful for some advice.
Most of us tend to completely overlook the power of enchanting and gemming at low levels. And why wouldn't we? The first time I heard I should tweak my gear at low level, I had one answer: "lol, u mad? is +2 agility really going to make a difference? get a life!" Sound like something you would say? You couldn't be more wrong! Well, it all adds up. If you compare stats of 2 players of the same class at level 50, one being fully tweaked and the other one being the cheap *******, you will see a significant difference. Not only will the first one boost his/her DPS/HPS, but also survivability--just calculate how much time you've spent running all the way to get your stinky corpse through half of the map just because you've lacked that 100 extra hp. |
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