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which advertisement do you like better

by Fitnessfreak158
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I have three new advertisement for my postcard marketing. I want to test and i'm going to test them all but would like some feed back on what you like better all them are basically advertising a classic home-based-business opportunity that makes me $80.00 on every $40.00 sale.

All of them have at the end of the card show how to get more information:

On it i have my two-minute sizzle call then my capture page then if they have any questions after they can call me.


1. <<ATTENTION>>

New Program Is Sweeping The Nation. Many Are Making $2,000 Their First Week!

Start Earning Immediately By Tapping Into My System. I Have Everything In Place For You To Succeed.



2. <<ATTENTION>>

“A Radically different approach to mail order took me from being broke to earning up to $10,000 per month, in only six months… Mailing Postcards – and I'm convinced you can copy what I'm doing, once I show you how!’’

3. How Can You Be Guaranteed An $80 Commission On Every $40 Sale?

The answer will shock you I know it sounds crazy, but it’s true! This new program only cost $40 to get started, yet pays out a whopping $80 commission on every $40 sale you refer, Paid Weekly (Every Friday) by direct deposit!

This has never been done before- I Promise You!


So out of these advertisements which do you like the best?

Need feedback all be doing all of them but want to get your option.

BTW this is not my first time doing postcards I've had success before just mixing the fonts up.

Also I'm mailing to a targeted list of opportunity buyers and get rich quick buyers.
#advertisement #offline advertising #offline maketing #postcard marketing
  • Profile picture of the author ewenmack
    Sounds like you are renting a list of biz op buyers,
    is that correct?

    If so, research what biz did they buy from.

    Get on their mailing list and see what got people to buy.

    There's going to be common themes running through
    which you can use.

    Themes like...

    Escaping the cubicle
    Can do it while working a full time job
    If you can do x, then you can do this
    You can be proud of this biz
    Big growing market

    Go with what has proven to get people to pull out their credit cards
    and buy.

    What you are doing by asking for opinions on headlines,
    is taking you off what's proven to work.

    Go found out what's worked.

    Best,
    Doctor E. Vile
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    • Profile picture of the author Oziboomer
      Originally Posted by ewenmack View Post

      Sounds like you are renting a list of biz op buyers,
      is that correct?

      If so, research what biz did they buy from.

      Get on their mailing list and see what got people to buy.

      What you are doing by asking for opinions on headlines,
      is taking you off what's proven to work.

      Go found out what's worked.
      On fire with the sound advice to look at what has "got people to buy"

      Another great example of simple use of "Uncommon" knowledge.

      When we are busy and when we get caught up in the product we sometimes fail to see the obvious....

      I wonder how may opinions will flow about the headlines?

      More I suspect than those who want to do the hard yards that discovering the "reason" reveals.
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  • Profile picture of the author Freebiequeen1999
    JMO the huge numbers look about as fake as the huge numbers shown for the wso's

    keep it more realistic

    going after opportunity seekers is a much better idea than cold mailing to the general public
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    • Profile picture of the author Fitnessfreak158
      I'm mailing to people who have bought an online MLM or Affiliate business opportunity before and they are looking to make more money not just random people.
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  • Profile picture of the author Peter Lessard
    I would dig deeper to increase conversions.

    So far what we know about your list is "I'm mailing to people who have bought an online MLM or Affiliate business opportunity before and they are looking to make more money".

    From that if you dig deeper into what those products might of been, what the likely results or frustrations might of been and the reasons they bought those products, you can come up with even more effective laser targeted ads.

    If I knew a list bought a certain product I would look at how that product was sold to them. What was the copy and the triggers. Nothing wrong with imitating success.

    Also another approach is if they bought an MLM product and what they hated about it was recruiting or training downline etc.. then you can create headlines around how your product solves that problem. If they bought a product that likely did make them a bit of money your headline could be how this offer is like that product but on steroids. The more you can define their issues and experiences the more easily your copy will flow.

    Of course all that matters is when you mail are you profitable and learning :-)
    I would NEVER recommend waiting for the perfect ad, it does not exist and this is a learning process.
    I wish you luck!
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