is this a good script?

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calling for home solar

Hi my name is _____ with (solar company) how are you today?

im calling cuz were helping people save alot of money are you interested in saving some money?

great ill stop by tomorrow to show your our proposal is that ok with you?

great what time would you like me to stop by?

sounds good ill see you tomorrow at _______


is this good? i tried to keep it as short as possible
#good #script
  • Profile picture of the author SalesGod
    lol wow that is very very very very bad
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  • Profile picture of the author Macshare
    Originally Posted by StudentOfTheGame View Post

    calling for home solar

    Hi my name is _____ with (solar company) how are you today?
    I really hate this. Even when it's a potential customer, I hate when people that I don't know call and ask me how I am doing and wait for me to respond. My answer is always an awkward "ummm, good...?" along with me having to now ask what I can do for them. WHY? Just get to the point and quit wasting my time.

    im calling cuz were helping people save alot of money are you interested in saving some money?
    Another stupid question to waste my time. This is when I would start getting sarcastic and answer you with "No".
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  • Profile picture of the author ADZ Downing
    You sound like you're gonna steal his money, not benefit him from spending it.
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  • Profile picture of the author Wi11iam
    Here are a couple of people that are great at selling the appointment:

    Brian Tracy
    Victor Antonio

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    William C. Hopkins

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  • Profile picture of the author jamesfreddyc
    OP -- please take a day or two and just read up a bit. This is one of the best starting points I could ever recommend: http://www.warriorforum.com/offline-...t-selling.html

    Jason has made huge contributions to this community and just about any advice on script building has probably already been addressed in the above resource(s).
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  • Profile picture of the author SalesGod
    yes defiantly do some research your in one of the easiest industrys to set appointments and make alot of money in. if your not setting a minimum of 5 a day something needs to change.
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    • Profile picture of the author Regional Warrior
      Originally Posted by SalesGod View Post

      yes defiantly do some research your in one of the easiest industrys to set appointments and make alot of money in. if your not setting a minimum of 5 a day something needs to change.
      Dunno SG the script would be right p your alley
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  • Profile picture of the author daniyal100
    Originally Posted by StudentOfTheGame View Post

    calling for home solar

    Hi my name is _____ with (solar company) how are you today?

    im calling cuz were helping people save alot of money are you interested in saving some money?

    great ill stop by tomorrow to show your our proposal is that ok with you?

    great what time would you like me to stop by?

    sounds good ill see you tomorrow at _______


    is this good? i tried to keep it as short as possible


    Hold on some expert gonna contact you with script writing offer for 1000$.. if you negotiate he'll easily come down to 55 bucks.

    That's the exact same thing happened to me almost a long time ago when i was new here and they thought i'm a dumb ass.

    In total i got 4 messages from all the famous super stars here but i played back and forth with 1 only otherwise im quite sure they all kind enough to come down to 50 or even 20$..
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  • Profile picture of the author SalesGod
    $1000? lol Iv already written like 10 scripts for people on here for free just cuz its fun coming up with new material for different industries.I couldve been a tenthousandaire and retired already if i wouldnt known! but yea defiantly dont pay. with that being said im not going to write you a script either. you need to study the basics first. i recommend studying the basics for free.....
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  • Profile picture of the author SalesGod
    I charge a instant 5k just for responding to your email and $100 a letter for script writing. After your good enough to get on the phone you pay me another 2k for exit fees then $20 per call you make in your Telemarketing campaigns after that for life.
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  • Profile picture of the author Kristay
    not related to the theme, so i have to say it is really bad, you should give your key point, and make the sentence easy to understand
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