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How to better word seo for prospects to understand

by Clautusoar
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Im crafting a script and need help wording this last sentence.

"Would you happen to know anyone that may need more exposure in online search results ?"

Can a business owner know what im refering to ?

I also want a shorten version.

Theirs more but thats the last sentence of my cold call script.
#prospects #seo #understand #word
  • Profile picture of the author ewenmack
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    "Would you happen to know anyone that may need more exposure in online search results ?"

    Can a business owner know what im refering to ?

    [/QUOTE]

    Yes a business owner does know what you are referring to...

    it smells of "why the heck should I refer somebody
    to you when I have no clue how good you are...
    are you crazy?"

    Go listen to this on how to be better at word choices so
    you don't make rookie mistakes like you've done...

    Best,
    Doctor E. Vile

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    • Profile picture of the author Clautusoar
      Thanks, i heard a story were you sold puma a seo service or web design ?

      I dont remember exactly,

      So yeah i want to build a sense of curiousity, i want him to ask me questions. I dont want to forcefully sell. I want to lower the dm resistance as much as possible.
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  • Profile picture of the author yukon
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    The average person doesn't have a clue about SEO or related jargon.

    Find someone offline that you know doesn't already do SEO & ask them to read your sales letter out loud to you & explain to you what each sentence means.

    There's your answer (target average people).
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