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Offline Marketing Video

by vndnbrgj
9 replies
I just finished creating a video for offline marketing.
Please watch it and let me know what you think.
Honest feedback appreciated!

#clients #marketing #offline #review #video
  • Profile picture of the author parklands
    yep looks good, could be used to send to potential clients
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  • Profile picture of the author FormerWageSlave
    The video was all about online marketing. Where's the offline part?
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    grrr...

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  • Profile picture of the author akazo
    Looks ok for a slideshow based video.

    1. I would not get in front "through various forms of online marketing." I would be "leveraging multiple online marketing channels" or something to that effect.

    2. I would get a longer music clip so that I didn't have the noticeable stop and restart.

    3. I would remove the comma after 'base' on the slide with Craigslist...

    4. You spelled "different" wrong on the "as you have seen" slide

    5. On the last slide, "visit" is spelled wrong.

    HTH...
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    • Profile picture of the author vndnbrgj
      Thank you for your honest feedback.
      1. I will look into that
      2. About that music clip, yeah, it's chopped quite a bit.
      I had a hell of a time finding royalty free background music.
      3. My wife says I have a problem with commas... LOL
      4. & 5. I guess I will double check my spelling from now on.
      Serves me right for rushing through it.

      Originally Posted by akazo View Post

      Looks ok for a slideshow based video.

      1. I would not get in front "through various forms of online marketing." I would be "leveraging multiple online marketing channels" or something to that effect.

      2. I would get a longer music clip so that I didn't have the noticeable stop and restart.

      3. I would remove the comma after 'base' on the slide with Craigslist...

      4. You spelled "different" wrong on the "as you have seen" slide

      5. On the last slide, "visit" is spelled wrong.

      HTH...
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  • Profile picture of the author Tony Wagner
    I think its great your taking action. You also know you have a place you can get professional opinions before you present it to your prospects. Good Job!
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  • Profile picture of the author JamesABuckley
    Great video,although it does not display offline options and it does not give enough time per image to read your message thoroughly and yes there was some mis-spelled words.
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    • Profile picture of the author OneMoreSolution
      Great for taken action most people would take too much time thinking about it instead of doing it. My opinion would be to limited the text as much as possible, make each slide a catchy headline. You are trying to get their attention as quickly as possible and spark a little curiosity as well. These headlines should speak directly to the business owner. For example,
      attract more customers, getting more business exposure, etc.

      Next I will lead them to a website where they can get a free report or watch a more detail video. This helps pre-qualify them and get them on your list so you can continue to advertise to them. Not everyone will need or want your services now but overtime things change. Good luck!!!
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  • Profile picture of the author julesw
    I think you ned to make use the full frame to make the text bigger, so no big black borders, also next stage fly text in and out using keynote or camtasia rather than just full page slide.

    Overall though I think slideshows don't get any personality over. I'd rather see a combo of someone talking (maybe walking, driving and talking) with some text when needed.

    Find a visual metaphor for your message.

    Here's one I made.

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