Which banner would you choose?
I am having a bit of a disagreement over my brother in which I think would be more effective, what do you think would work better?
I know many of you are marketing and copy geniuses so I thought this would be the best place to get a bit of advice (and prove my brother wrong ).
It will be a simple two line banner (if all the the words fit on two lines) that will be hanging right above the entrance to the business.
One of us thinks that Receive should go first because there needs to be some sort of action word. The other thinks FREE should go first because it is the most attention getting word and shouldn't be hidden in the middle of the sentence.
a. Welcome ******* Members!
Receive your FREE health products here
b. Welcome ******* Members
FREE health products available here
What do you think?
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