Is this effective? (PLEASE CRITIQUE MY SALES LETTER)
I have written a sales letter I plan on emailing to businesses on Google Places who do not have video on their listing. I am taking the advice of another warrior member (Texan-something I believe) and offering testimonial videos. I am not the best at writing sales copy, so I would really appreciate criticism.
THanks!
Hello!
My name is Matt Scherrah, I am a partner/co-owner of One Sun Media Group, a video production company in Pittsburgh. I am writing you today, because while looking for XYZ SERVICES, I found your Google Places site, and I noticed you do not have any videos on the listing!
Google Places is a very important tool for marketing yourself and your services. When people are looking for local results, Google Places is the best place to look for information, directions, services, and, most importantly, reviews and testimonials!
One of the best ways to use Google Places to your advantage is to provide searchers with the most information possible. Give them your hours, your address, phone number, and more. Another important feature that many people leave out of their Google Places listing is video.
Adding video to your Google Places listing makes your listing more viable to the person searching for you. They are able to see you, your business, service, etc. They get the feeling they can connect with you better than they can with those other "faceless" competitors.
A great way to add video to your Google Places listing while also providing people with information about you and your services is through video testimonials.
Video testimonials allow searchers to see first-hand what satisfied customers have to say about you and your business! Many times, these testimonials alone are what will bring more business to your doorstep!
For as little as $xxx.xx I can produce video testimonials for you to post on your Google Places listing, your own website, Youtube, and other video sharing sites. I will also put them on our website, our Youtube channel, and our Facebook page! That is a lot of exposure for not a lot of money!
For more information about how we can help you get more clients by offering consumers video testimonials of happy customers you have served, please reply to this email, or call us at xxx-xxx-xxxx
Thank you for taking the time to consider my offer.
Matt Scherrah
Partner/Co-owner
One Sun Media Group
www.onesunmediagroup.com
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