What is your offline "elevator pitch"?

18 replies
The great thing about offline and local marketing is that there is no shortage of opportunities to sell yourself. You never know when a potential client may present themselves (while dining at a restaurant and the owner comes over to ask how the meal was, when at a bar and you over-hear the woman on the phone next to you talking about her business, when at an event or party and a friend makes an introduction, etc, etc, etc).

In those instances, you have just a moment to move from pleasentries to something that might spark their interest in discussing business. You always have to have a mini-elevator pitch ready to go to spark their interest.

Here's mine (feel free to steal it a try it out): "Like you, I am a business owner. It is my job to help businesses like yours get more customers and more revenue."

Now, how do you naturally bridge from making pleasentries to making your mini-pitch? It's pretty easy...

With the restaurant example above, you might answer the owners question about your meal with: "Excellent, thank you! Great service too, and I appreciate that you came over personally as the owner... Like you, I am an business owner... etc."

With the bar example above, you might say (once she hangs up her phone): "Business owners never get a break, even when trying to enjoy a beer. Cheers! Like you, I am a business owner... etc."

Btw, you can substitute "owner" for other titles as approporiate to the situation (maybe the person isn't the "owner" of the restaurant, but is the manager of it). You can say "I am a business manager" or "I run a business" instead.

I have found that an intriquing elevator pitch can draw folks into a conversation that might just end up profiting you. I have several clients that I would never have had if I did not use my mini-elevator pitch.

What is your mini-pitch?
#elevator pitch #offline
  • Profile picture of the author midasman09
    Banned
    I don't bother with any "introductions" like, "I'm a fellow business owner." etc. You have about 3 seconds to GRAB prospects by their "Greed Glands".

    My "Intro" to Restaurant Owners is;

    "I CAN PUT YOUR RESTAURANT ON EVERY MOTEL GUEST'S MOBILE PHONE!"

    If it's a regular business, Retail, Service, Professional, Medico....I use;

    "I CAN PUT YOUR BUSINESS ON EVERY MOBILE PHONE IN TOWN!"

    If those words DON'T get them to ask for More Info...I leave. I can explain WHO I am....AFTER I've got their ATTENTION!

    It's the old....Attention - Interest - Desire - Close.

    Prospects could care LESS about WHO I am! My Name or the fact that "I Own a Marketing Business"...is NOT going to cause them to "GRAB MY ARM AND BEG FOR MORE INFO!"

    The words above in black....WILL!

    When I'm selling Ads on Pizza Box Flyers I use; "I CAN PUT YOUR BUSINESS CARD ON 10,000 PIZZA BOXES...HAND DELIVERED TO LOCAL RESIDENTS!"

    Don Alm....
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4478635].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author bgean
    Originally Posted by Nic Lynn View Post

    I have found that an intriquing elevator pitch can draw folks into a conversation that might just end up profiting you. I have several clients that I would never have had if I did not use my mini-elevator pitch.

    What is your mini-pitch?
    I actually have three separate elevator speeches. Short, medium and long. I use them according to the amount of time I have to spew the speech, but the one that's quickest to share and used the most is:

    I help women professionals build a community of clients and prospects.

    Straight and to the point. It will get them asking, "How exactly do you do that?" Which of course, opens the door for further communication.
    Signature
    ----- ** -----

    BonnieGean.com · Building Community
    Free Reports & Tutorials for Budding Entrepreneurs
    Creator of Infographics KickStart
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4478686].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author Nic Lynn
    Originally Posted by midasman09 View Post


    Prospects could care LESS about WHO I am! My Name or the fact that "I Own a Marketing Business"...is NOT going to cause them to "GRAB MY ARM AND BEG FOR MORE INFO!"

    The words above in black....WILL!

    When I'm selling Ads on Pizza Box Flyers I use; "I CAN PUT YOUR BUSINESS CARD ON 10,000 PIZZA BOXES...HAND DELIVERED TO LOCAL RESIDENTS!"

    Don Alm....
    I agree completely on attention-interest-desire-close. We're saying the same thing there, but with a different approach. I add the element of credibility (creating a sense of camaradarie) and the ability to bridge going from interest to getting the client to desire my services (which, for me, is always based on the what the client needs).

    It does little good to me to suddenly turn to the woman next to me at the bar and scream "I can put your business card on 10,000 pizza boxes!!!" when she runs a boutique lawfirm catering to commercial real estate law. Now the exception to this is if I actually know the person's business inside-out (I just over heard a two hour planning call) or am an expert in the field of interest and knew that pizza boxes were just the thing for this intro pitch to a commercial law firm.

    You can sell flyers and other "tactics & trinkets" (and make damn good money!), and you can also sell the concept of "more customer and more revenue" because that is ultimately what prospects want. And that is exactly where I start.

    It ultimately depends on your business and your style. Good examples and food for thought, Don!
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4478797].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author krzysiek
    Hi Nic,

    I have to say in this case I agree with Don. Tell them you're a business owner later, because reading it from my perspective, it doesn't really catch my attention immediately. I think something like what Don said, mentioning a direct/in-direct benefit and that's it works well. Maybw you were just providing an example but the line of "im a business owner like you" just doesn't seem too catch as a short pitch. Get them interested with the irresistible offer, then give the longer spin. Just my $0.02, good job either way!
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4479004].message }}
    • Profile picture of the author midasman09
      Banned
      We're talking about 2 different Audiences here;

      Audience 1 - If I'm sitting at a bar and start a conversation with the person sitting next to me....Obviously....I do NOT "start Screaming"..."I CAN DO THIS FOR YOU!"

      Audience 2 - I enter a restaurant...find the owner...introduce myself (quickly) "Hi...Don Alm (extend hand)...I've got a way to put your restaurant on every cell phone in Town! Do you have a "quick minute"?

      That's my actual, "Elevator, Get Attention" pitch!

      If the owner does not have time now...I see if I can stop in later.

      Don Alm
      {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4479732].message }}
      • Profile picture of the author Nic Lynn
        Originally Posted by midasman09 View Post

        We're talking about 2 different Audiences here;

        Audience 1 - If I'm sitting at a bar and start a conversation with the person sitting next to me....Obviously....I do NOT "start Screaming"..."I CAN DO THIS FOR YOU!"

        Audience 2 - I enter a restaurant...find the owner...introduce myself (quickly) "Hi...Don Alm (extend hand)...I've got a way to put your restaurant on every cell phone in Town! Do you have a "quick minute"?

        That's my actual, "Elevator, Get Attention" pitch!

        If the owner does not have time now...I see if I can stop in later.

        Don Alm
        Yeah, you are talking about something completely different then. I am talking about opportunistic sales encounters (casual encounters) that can lead to more business for you, while you are talking about premeditated, targeted sales encounters. These are two totally different scenarios... I think you must have skimmed through the original post or something.
        {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4480738].message }}
    • Profile picture of the author Nic Lynn
      Originally Posted by krzysiek View Post

      Hi Nic,

      I have to say in this case I agree with Don. Tell them you're a business owner later, because reading it from my perspective, it doesn't really catch my attention immediately. I think something like what Don said, mentioning a direct/in-direct benefit and that's it works well. Maybw you were just providing an example but the line of "im a business owner like you" just doesn't seem too catch as a short pitch. Get them interested with the irresistible offer, then give the longer spin. Just my $0.02, good job either way!



      I'm happy to put my money where my mouth is. If a couple people will agree to attend their next local Chamber of Commerce meeting and test the two pitches, I will pay them $100 for their efforts (or to their favorite charity).
      • So show up at the meeting, and during the "networking" portion of the meeting when someone introduces themselves (as in, "Hi! I'm Jim Smith, the owner of the Kettle Horn Cafe on 1st street"), reply with "I can put your business card on 10,000 pizza boxes!" or "I can put you on lots of mobile phones!" or "I can rank you higher in Google!!!" or whatever discrete offer that you want per Alan's rec.
      • Then with the next person, try replying, "I'm My Name. Like you, I am a local business owner, but my very cool job is to help businesses like yours get more customers and revenue fast!"
      Report back on which one works better.
      {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4480837].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author RentItNow
    Hi, I have a local business just like you. Do you have a website?

    "Yes" > Great, how's it working for you? "Good" OK, if you happen to need any help in getting it seen by more potential customers, here is a flyer. "Not so good" Oh really. Do you mind if I have a look at it.....on the conversation goes.

    This one got me 3 out of 5 appointments today.

    "No" > If you are interested in one, I have a special for $199 for a professional 5 page site.

    Works pretty good.

    One important point....if they dont speak past that....move on...move on..move on. Plenty more that are ready to pay attention and are curious enough to ask you a question...then i got them!
    Signature
    I have no agenda but to help those in the same situation. This I feel will pay the bills.
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4482503].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author RKCastillo
    I have the one or two line elevator pitch you use when you get asked the question "What do you do?"

    But if I have like 30 seconds in a conversation with a person. I'm going to use the fact that the most important thing for a business when it comes to the search engines is Google Places and 95% of businesses haven't taken advantage of their place page.

    I used this a couple weeks ago coming off of a literal elevator.

    And because of that I was able to get a half page spread in the local newspaper business section.

    You can see a video I did about it here and read the actual article here
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4482736].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author DazedandConfused
    That's SWEET RK! - What a GREAT write up!
    (what kind of dirt do you have on this reporter? )
    That is major street cred!


    @ RK below... - Oh, wait I get it...this is one of those "newspaper headlines" templates
    that they sell in the International Market Place - :rolleyes:
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4482784].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author sdentrepreneur
    At a business mixer of Chamber event, when someone asks what I do.

    "I help individuals, small businesses and large corporation to leverage the power of the Internet to generate leads and sales"

    I then stop talking, answer questions and find out what they do and then try to find a solution to their Internet Marketing problems.

    I split test that line at a speed business networking event. Got 4 new clients that day.
    Signature

    Learn Digital, Internet and Social Media Marketing For Your Business
    Click here to learn more - Digital and Social Media Marketing Training Course

    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4486166].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author Nathan Alexander
    I have a number of go-to "elevator pitches" I've scripted and used that I like to keep ready to go.

    And when I say scripted, I mean I choose each word carefully, and memorize it. BUT, I work on making it sound casual and conversational. It should never sound dull or rehearsed. I speak slower (I naturally speak fast) and appear thoughtful as I say them.


    But they all have a briefer version and longer version as someone else mentioned above.


    I also get nuts about tailoring things like the words that sound right for each audience like business versus shop and so on.


    I am kind of batty this way but it's something that comes from scripting my magic shows and effects the way I want to evoke a certain reaction. (The early years really stunk.)


    Anyway, here's one I'm "playing" with but haven't used yet. It follows a for
    mula that is supposed to garner interest and curiousity to provoke the, "really?" and "how's that?" questions to lead to more talking (as all pitches should do in my opinion).

    Asking questions and telling stories are two of the most important weapons in your arsenal for securing work and working persuasion.

    Here:

    ''
    You know how a lot of businesses have taken a hit because of the economy which is causing many of them to close-up shop due to little or no profit?

    Well what I do is increase what's already working well while immediately adding 2-3 sources of what I call "customer attraction channels" to secure existing clients and get new customers quicker and easier. This way they start seeing results from largely untapped "profit mines" that most businesses have but are clueless about so they can turn from "surviving" to "thriving", whatever the economy.''
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4486445].message }}
    • I like to be unique.

      I consult with business owners that don't have a clue on how to double their sales with simple changes to their websites and marketing.

      or

      I make websites that convert. How are your results?

      So many businesses have websites that are a waste of space. If you pace this reality you can lead them to the solution - you.

      Chris
      {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4487869].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author PaulFL
    The way I view it, the objective of your elevator speech is to personalize the Unique Selling Proposition is to get a potential prospect to say, "Oh really, tell me more!"

    As mentioned above, nobody cares who you are, they care what you do for them. I'd also avoid saying, "I help people..." because it's gotta be about what you will do for them, not others. "People" is not the one in front of you. That's a person and for maximum impact, say, "I'll help you dramatically boost your profits by building a community of loyal prospects and clients who love doing business with you."

    If I'm selling my consulting services, I'll say, "I'll turn your website into a lead generating machine that will be working for you day and night to increase your sales and profits."

    I've written a lot of USP's and elevator speeches for clients and always focus on the end benefit with a big promise.

    If anybody's interested, PM me and I'll send a copy of the process I use to define USP's over to you.
    Signature
    Tired of Chasing Shiny Objects?
    Get Instant Access to the Easy Cash Webinar
    >>The Ultimate Unfair Advantage <<
    Easy - Quick - Proven
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4488208].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author RoadBandit
    For me it's simple. I ask do you have a video online that showcases your business and brings in targeted traffic? If I get "No" I smile and tell them I am here to help.
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4491330].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author golflook
    three separate elevator speech. In the short, medium and long term.
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4491670].message }}

Trending Topics