Business Directory gets 40% response from direct mail

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In this mailer, notice what he is prepared to give up to get a client...

that is a valuable lesson.

Once you, like he did, know what a client is going to be
paying you over a period of time,
then you think in terms in what you are prepared to give to get that client.

We are in the business of buying clients and making sure
they stay and spend for the long term.

O.K. here's the letter which is very dated, in Internet years,
back in the late 90's.

Very relevant today because it got a 40% response
at a time when most business owners didn't see the value of the Internet
in their business, like they do today.

So here it is...

Dear [name]

I've included a toy dinosaur with this letter to stress a point.

If you're not using the Internet to promote your business, you'll soon be extinct.

You've probably considered using the Internet before now, or maybe you've got
a Web site that's not getting you results. But there is a way to generate business using the Internet.

The Mitchell Financial Directory is one of the leading directories of it's kind in Australia. With quality, up-to-date information and resources such as banner advertisements and financial calculators, it's no wonder we get more than 400,000 "hits" each month!

By using powerful layouts and well-written copy, we can create Web sites far more effective than you'd ever imagined possible.

You'll be amazed by the results. Like the Brisbane firm who picked up more than 50 new clients as a result of their Mitchell Financial Directory listing.

I've seen companies just like yours achieve these kind of results, time and time again.

Don't make your decision now. I'll call you in a couple of days to arrange a suitable time when we can meet, so I can explain our services in more depth.

Barry Mitchell
National Marketing Manager
Mitchell Financial Directory

P.S. We're also offering free Internet training for anyone who books an appointment in the next 17 days.
Here we teach you how to "surf the net," send and receive e-mails, and find sites of interest.
This training, normally valued at $80, will have you up-to-date with the Internet in no time.

P.P.S. As a special introductory offer we are giving away a free modem to any client who joins our Directory during the month of February. This modem would normally cost you $209 but will be yours free if you decided to sign up.

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Best,
Ewen
P.S. Watch out for the mailer for a home renovator that got a 209 to 1 return on his investment.
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  • Profile picture of the author BrashImpact
    Ewen,
    Holy crap brother, talk about drumming up old memories or thoughts. I know its not the same ad copy, but last year i was reading some similar direct mail pieces from the 90's.

    The same thing, Plastic Dinosaur and the cool thing, i bet a very similar piece of direct would pull just as good today as it did then, If not more.

    You might have just lit a Mini-Fire under my butt to test it.
    Thanks for the Share my Friend...
    Robert
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    • Profile picture of the author ewenmack
      Originally Posted by BrashImpact View Post

      Ewen,
      Holy crap brother, talk about drumming up old memories or thoughts. I know its not the same ad copy, but last year i was reading some similar direct mail pieces from the 90's.

      The same thing, Plastic Dinosaur and the cool thing, i bet a very similar piece of direct would pull just as good today as it did then, If not more.

      You might have just lit a Mini-Fire under my butt to test it.
      Thanks for the Share my Friend...
      Robert
      Hey Robert,

      Imagine the envelope was like when you get wedding invitations in,
      hand written, perfumed and lumpy...

      well NO way are you NOT going to open it...

      right?

      pleased you got a fire on your butt!

      Best,
      Ewen
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  • Profile picture of the author IngeniousBastard
    I'm selling toy dinosaurs...

    50 cents each.
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    • Profile picture of the author ewenmack
      Originally Posted by Ingenious******* View Post

      I'm selling toy dinosaurs...

      50 cents each.
      And discount for 1,000?

      Best,
      Ewen
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  • Profile picture of the author Eddie Spangler
    This is actually an idea that could work today, the dinosaur is kind of a fun and nonthreatening way to say "get with the times buddy"
    By the way here is a cheapo source for anyone looking for real http://www.toyconnection.com
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    Promise Big.
    Deliver Bigger.
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  • Profile picture of the author racso316
    Ah the beauty of lumpy mail, knowing the LTV of your client, and premiums.
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    • Profile picture of the author Jashandeepmax
      I do agree with all.Its really a best way to get a direct traffic as well.
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      I like to Participate in Communities ........

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  • Profile picture of the author rambo9600
    Very funny, dinosaur. In 2009 I was talking to perspective client and I told him his Marketing was historic, it went the way of the dinosaurs. He gave me a dirty look, didn't like that comment at all.

    After a few more meetings I landed the client for a sizeable 5 figure deal. He told me that "dinosaur" comment really made him think, lol.
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    • Profile picture of the author ewenmack
      Originally Posted by rambo9600 View Post

      Very funny, dinosaur. In 2009 I was talking to perspective client and I told him his Marketing was historic, it went the way of the dinosaurs. He gave me a dirty look, didn't like that comment at all.

      After a few more meetings I landed the client for a sizeable 5 figure deal. He told me that "dinosaur" comment really made him think, lol.

      Hey, whatever works, even if you have to "wound" the target!

      HAHA.

      You'll have to send out toy dinosaur's instead of you, in future!

      Best,
      Ewen
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  • Profile picture of the author Aurora Bourke
    I'm still chuckling! What a great idea!

    I have been 'cleaning out' some of the junk I have managed to acquire over the past few years.....still could not bear to throw out all the old manuals and sales letters from the 'dinosaur days'! There are some absolute gems in those old sales letters...and a little absolute cr*p as well.

    I'm off to order some dinosaurs!
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    • Profile picture of the author ewenmack
      Originally Posted by Aurora Kate View Post

      I'm still chuckling! What a great idea!

      I have been 'cleaning out' some of the junk I have managed to acquire over the past few years.....still could not bear to throw out all the old manuals and sales letters from the 'dinosaur days'! There are some absolute gems in those old sales letters...and a little absolute cr*p as well.

      I'm off to order some dinosaurs!
      Fantastic!

      You'll certainly have less competition in the mail box...
      and who couldn't resist to see what's in that lumpy envelope!

      Best,
      Ewen
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      • Profile picture of the author want2knowhow
        Thanks so much for that letter! It may be *old* but it's definitely solid gold!

        It can be tweaked for whatever useful purpose--with the main purpose being...to get their UNdivided, sit up, open your eyes and PAY ((close)) attention "Cause I'm trying to SHOW you something here!"

        Again, sir, thanks!

        You've got my brain on overdrive and doing calisthenics!
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        • Profile picture of the author ewenmack
          Originally Posted by want2knowhow View Post


          Again, sir, thanks!

          You've got my brain on overdrive and doing calisthenics!
          Now I can say "my words are like sending the readers brain to the gym,
          and love me for it!"

          lol

          Best,
          Ewen
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