Proven Email Templates?

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I am looking for a WSO containing proven email templates for generating leads for the typical offline services? Does anyone know of one?
#email #proven #templates
  • Profile picture of the author David Miller
    Go to the WSO forum...of course I may just be feeding the trolls.
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  • Profile picture of the author beeswarn
    I think I saw a thread from a guy in the WSO forum who has a WSO about finding the right WSO for you.
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    • Profile picture of the author agonce
      Originally Posted by beeswarn View Post

      I think I saw a thread from a guy in the WSO forum who has a WSO about finding the right WSO for you.
      thanks, i found a wso using that wso lol

      Most of the time spam filters flag emails with templates(html or image ) as spam
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  • Profile picture of the author JRS1
    I think the OP means a template like a set text structure, not HTML or image, but correct me if I'm wrong.
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  • Profile picture of the author The Sales Guy
    Originally Posted by Daniel D View Post

    I am looking for a WSO containing proven email templates for generating leads for the typical offline services? Does anyone know of one?
    Hey Daniel, first let me preface my reply by saying that...

    I am not an email marketing expert (nor do I claim to be). While I do not want to steal anyones thunder or take food off the plate of someone offering a WSO, methinks the information you're seeking can be found by simply doing a Google search and using some common sense.

    All this being said though, I have used email to generate leads successfully before. However, my method was very specialized and non-spammy.

    If you're looking to generate leads via cold emails, it is extremely difficult. The open rates on cold emails are painfully tiny. Sometimes, it can be in the 1/10 of a percent range. People are just too aware nowadays. They can recognize unsolicited or spam email a mile away. They know what to look out for. They're conditioned.

    Furthermore, you have to be very careful if sending out bulk emails to a cold list. It's an extremely "grey" area in terms of legality. So...

    What I recommend is going small and specialized - the opposite of what a spammer or email marketer would do. Surprisingly, the open rates are a lot better this way. Here's a few thoughts...

    If all you're looking to do is generate a lead, LESS IS MORE! All you want to do is whet the prospects appetite. So, two or three sentences is the perfect length to accomplish this. You're just looking for bites or nibbles on your fishing line. The heavy work by you (I'm assuming) will be done later via the telephone or a walk-in.

    The first step would be to research 15 or 20 companies per day that make-up your desired customer/client. Look at their website, take notes, be aware of their products, etc. Next...

    You're going to take this intel and come up with a PERSONALIZED EMAIL ADDRESSED TO THE OWNER/PRESIDENT of the company you are targeting. It might go something like this...

    "Hi Bill, I recently became aware of your website via google. I see you specialize in manufacturing emergency fall out shelters. There are a few critical components lacking in your online strategy - which I believe is costing you significant revenue.

    My business, Emergency Response Industries, specifically works with companies in your niche. We help to reduce expenses while lifting profits through our comprehensive 'Web Conditioning Program'.

    If you're interested in finding out how we can increase your web traffic by up to 15% monthly, just drop me an email or call me at the number below."


    Short and to the point. It's personalized. It has the benefits in there.

    Again, don't expect a large response. It's really hit or miss, IMO. The trick is to experiment and TEST numerous emails until you can find the one that works best. Then, use it all the time, but, personalize it to the business owner as I did above. Just send out 15 or 20 of these a day, and I can assure you you''ll have a consistent flow of 3 or 4 leads coming back to you every week - all for something that takes maybe 30 minutes daily.

    Some final thoughts...

    * Don't use caps at the start of each word in the subject line, the search engines can pick this up and your email might go to their spam folder. It also looks sales-y. A regular person doesn't format their text like that when writing an email

    * Do NOT use the words, free, sex, sales, business, etc. in the subject line for the same reason as above (look this info up online)

    * Use the business owners name in the subject line

    * Be vague in the subject line, ie; "Hi, bob, found you on google...". What business owner ISN'T going to open that?!?! Could be a customer

    This isn't meant to be a course on email marketing or the "magic bullet". If I had that, I wouldn't be sitting here writing this now, lol. However, I've used these techniques before successfully. Hope they help you!
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    • Profile picture of the author beeswarn
      Originally Posted by The Sales Guy View Post

      Hey Daniel, first let me preface my reply by saying that... I am not an email marketing expert (nor do I claim to be).

      This isn't meant to be a course on email marketing or the "magic bullet". If I had that, I wouldn't be sitting here writing this now, lol.


      These two sentences are almost certainly true. But almost everything sandwiched in between them is patently false, or 1995-era web marketing gibberish or just wishful thinking.

      Let's start with two specific examples of patent falsehoods:

      * Don't use caps at the start of each word in the subject line, the search engines can pick this up and your email might go to their spam folder. It also looks sales-y. A regular person doesn't format their text like that when writing an email

      * Do NOT use the words, free, sex, sales, business, etc. in the subject line for the same reason as above (look this info up online)


      Search engines do not scan e-mails; spam filters do. Not splitting hairs here. Pointing this out to show you the advice-giver doesn't even understand the basics of what he's advising you on.

      Now to be "fair" everything in this paragraph is absolutely true:

      If you're looking to generate leads via cold emails, it is extremely difficult. The open rates on cold emails are painfully tiny. Sometimes, it can be in the 1/10 of a percent range. People are just too aware nowadays. They can recognize unsolicited or spam email a mile away. They know what to look out for. They're conditioned.

      I point this out as being true, not to be "fair" like a kindergarten teacher, but to show you that it isn't advice, at all. It's public knowledge you can find anywhere if you're doing your own research. And if you're doing research about e-mail marketing you will inevitably encounter the CANSPAM Act. When you do, you should not ignore it. You should read it.

      Because this is not a grey area. It's a crime. I wish it wasn't but it is.
      Furthermore, you have to be very careful if sending out bulk emails to a cold list. It's an extremely "grey" area in terms of legality.

      Here's a link to the CANSPAM Act The CAN-SPAM Act: A Compliance Guide for Business | BCP Business Center

      Two points I'd like to drive home in my post:

      1. Few people who answer your questions here know what they're talking about. Be very careful taking their advice without reading more of their older posts to at least get familiar with their basic level of knowlege. These people may want to be helpful, but they can't be. They don't know enough to help you.

      2. It's not 1995 anymore, guys. E-mail marketing is probably the lowest yield method there is in 2012. Please learn something else. Even snail mail is more effective overall.
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      • Profile picture of the author melanied
        I've had much better luck cultivating relationships with business owners via social media than with email. The key word being relationship. It's a conversation, not a pitch. Traditional sales tactics don't work on social media, or at least they don't for me. But I've found that conversations and answering questions bring a great return.
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      • Profile picture of the author Aussieguy
        Originally Posted by beeswarn View Post

        2. It's not 1995 anymore, guys. E-mail marketing is probably the lowest yield method there is in 2012. Please learn something else. Even snail mail is more effective overall.
        Hey beeswarn, can you elaborate please? Are you talking here of particular niche's? Online sales in particular, or are you including any email marketing (including offline businesses marketing to their list). I don't believe it is correct to call it 'probably the lowest yield method there is in 2012".
        Or - (re-reading the OP's post, always a good thing to do, lol) - were you specifically talking to their question re: generating leads for typical offline services (in which case, I don't fully understand the OP to begin with).
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  • Profile picture of the author Tess D
    I have to agree with The Sales Guy! Send out a specialized small personal email to companies you think you can beneficially work with. Doing this you will have much better success.
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  • Profile picture of the author eguinan
    Thank you for the great post!
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  • Profile picture of the author econnors
    There are some good rules of thumb to follow that are posted all over the internet.

    What I've found works well (when marketing to the existing customer base, anyway) is keeping your emails short and having a page that tells them more about whatever. People don't have all day to read your email. If you can, keep it to five strong sentences or less.
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