Started Directory Site but Need Help With Outbound Script!!!
First I'd like to thank all the contributors to this forum who have gave me a wealth of information for nothing in return. Especially John Durham as it is after reading his thread Directory Site Profits 101- How To Make Money With Directory Sites In 2012! that I decided to actually put this into ACTION.
I do feel a little cheeky as I'm looking for more free help from everyone, I've came up with a basic script and was just wanting a few pointers on how it could be improved, as I am wanting to make this work.
Hi. Could I speak with the business owner please?
Hi my name is Ian and what I'm doing is calling up all the "niche" in "local area" to discuss are new website.
We can see that you have already claimed your google places listing so I assume you understand how having a web presence can help your business. Would that be correct?
If it's okay I would like to discuss what our website is about and what we can offer you. Is that okay?
If no say, It wont take long and it could benefit your business.
If yes, we are helping local businesses get a better web presence without having to pay a lot of money.
Currently we have all the hairdressers in the area listed on the site, with there basic information.
So first I would just like to check that what we have for you is correct.
I assume this is the number for the business?
And I have..... for the address
Is this correct?
You have your free listing on the site already so you don't need to do anything else for that.
However like you have said earlier having a web presence is important for your business and we offer packages which will improve that and also enable potential customers to get a better idea of your company.
Would you like me to explain the different packages we have?
If no say that the packages start at only £50 and our website is already on the 1st page of google for people searching for "local area niche"
Are you sure you don't want to hear what we can offer?
If still no thank them for there time.
If yes, we have a starter package which costs £50 a month and for that you will get a listing on the site with a description of what you offer as well as google maps, and 2 images of your choice on the listing or if you don't have any images we can sort that out for you.
That isn't the whole script but that is the basics of it be as ruthless as you want with how poor the script is, just point me in the right direction please!!!
Also the other packages available are £100 to be featured in the category and £200 to be listed on the home page with a banner advertisement which is created by myself.
I have no signature.