Sending Cover Letter to local businesses (sales letter)...Please critique
[disclaimer: I do cold call and not afraid to do so. Every time I post something like this everyone comes in says "stop being scared to call the business". I work in sales now and I'm really good. I'm at the point in my career where I want to sell and manage my own services. Finding the time to do so for my own business is the issue and why just have one method to get leads? The purpose of this letter is to get appointments to talk more]
I have leads coming in, but I need more to get out of this job I'm in. I have been able to help businesses in many different ways , but something I wanted to try was offering my general IT consulting services. This way I can close them on anything they need instead of trying to sell them one thing here or there to get my foot in the door if that makes sense (like having people cold call for web design when the business would benefit from sms for example..I guess trying to sell them something they don't need as much when you could be selling them something else). I think it also makes it easier for an up sell in the future considering yourself as a consultant. So my general idea is to mail/email my cover letter to businesses to market my "IT consulting" services.
They way I see it is when we contact/call these businesses we are basically applying to be apart of their company. SO why not actually apply in the form of just sending a honest letter of interest in working with them instead of some general letter focusing on a "pain" they may be having. I want to be apart of their growth and grow with them. I feel if that purpose comes out in the letter more people will respond. I will be sending out a few tomorrow morning.
What I'm going to start doing tonight
Here is a letter I found on linke that I really liked. It actually inspired me to do this.
Your Name Your Address Your Phone and e-mail address Date Dear Friend, Attached is a copy of my resume. As you can see, I've got a stable background exclusively in the service industry, successfully taking care of customer needs by making them a priority. The company I am now working for (a great company, by the way) is having problems because of fallout from the recent economic recession. And although I am well-qualified to accept a position with another similar firm, to me... I view this as a "hint"... it's time to make a change. That's why I'm interested in the opportunity to work second shift at XXX XXX. My employer is aware of my job search. And in light of their situation, they're very supportive of me. So it'll be a cinch for you to get great references on me, from them... and from anyone else you want to call. Working second shift gives me more time to spend with my 3 year-old daughter, and the truth is -- nothing makes me happier. And I don't need to tell you, when someone is happy outside their job, their performance in their job is "that much" better. I'm looking forward to making XXX XXX an even stronger customer service company than it is today! Thanks for your time and thanks for reading this letter. Sincerely, Your Name |
This my version I which is all true because I want to be honest to people.
My Cover Letter: This may be the only cover letter you receive that will teem with enough enthusiasm to spill out of your computer screen and on to your desk. My name is XXX and I recently graduated from grad school a little bit over a year ago. Unfortunately, I am currently working in a field that my degree wasn't specialized in and I'm eager to help a business that may find my qualifications/skill set essential to their growth. I am hard working, passionate, focused, and looking for a challenge. Currently, the company I am now working for (a great company, by the way) is having problems because of fallout from the recent economic recession. Good people are losing their jobs and I am doing the one thing any real American would do which is take action! I want to follow my passions which is helping companies grow their businesss in the area of internet/technology. This is the reason I'm reaching out to you today. I'm not asking for a salary position or anything remotely close to that, but rather a chance to work a long side your business and help with any technology/Internet problems you need solving. For example, I found your company in the yellow pages (...........) and noticed you didn't have a website from what I could tell. This could be costing you customers right now and I provide a very affordable solution to help. My degrees are in marketing, web design, and business technology and I would've been able to have one up and running for you the man for the job if you were interested in having one made. I love technology and helping people in general. I would be honoured to speak with you over the phone to see if we are a good fit for each other. You can reach me right now at ( 1-(000) 000-0000) or resond back to this email if you would like to see a copy of my resume. Thank You for you time John Doe |
Please let me know what you think and any advice.
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