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Don't know how to word my first direct email or mail.

by TomBuck
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I live about 5 minutes walk from a gym, I checked "city" gym and its on page 2 but getting it to page 1 and high on page 1 would be very easy, probably just some onsite optimization and few links. They have an email but I have a few questions.

1.) Should I email or just put a letter through as I live like 5 mins away?

2.) What do I say?!?!?! Have no idea what to say.

Thanks.

Also how can I say --- Make your website clearer and better in business terms?
#direct #email #mail #word
  • Profile picture of the author zimbizee
    Why don't you just pop in and see them if they are only round the corner? You could waste so much time putting together a letter or email and then waiting around for a response when you can get your answer within 5 mins of walking into the biz.
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  • Profile picture of the author rankingconsult
    Yeah, and if the above does not get you anywhere then ask for the email of their webmaster.

    If you are offering a web design service and wish to charge them to improve their rankings then make that clear from the start.
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