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What do you think of my site?

by Bruha
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My partner and I are branching out our business beyond just SMS and were wondering if we could get some feedback on our new site design:

| Just another WordPress site

I'm wondering if we should narrow it down to SMS, websites/mobile sites and reputation management. I'm thinking the SEO term confuses/scares away local business owners cause they don't know what it is and maybe I should just include that in reputation management?

Or is this something I should keep separated out like it currently is.

Thanks.
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  • Profile picture of the author vndnbrgj
    Honestly.. if I was you... I would only offer mobile services on that site.
    You could have a sister site that offers rep mgmt, SEO, websites, & social media

    To me, I see mobile this and mobile that.

    Then I scroll down, and I see one mobile service and then three other services.

    I would also get rid of the Mysitemyway link in the footer.
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  • Profile picture of the author Mwind076
    I think most of it's ok the way it is...BUT, I would WORD the intro above the 4 services differently. The "Local Mobile Launch Services."

    As in, "We specialize in Mobile Marketing, but offer these services as well:" Not that wording, but that's the point to get across.

    Also, where it says you offer Websites, do you offer websites (online) and mobile sites? I can't tell if you just do mobile, or do both. Clarify that, and then separate it with each having it's own paragraph.

    My opinion

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  • Profile picture of the author Bruha
    Thanks for the feedback. I think you are right in that I need to make the mobile aspect of my business more prominent on the home page. Then I will have a tab for additional services at the top maybe? This will include the web design, rep management, etc.

    What do you think?
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  • Profile picture of the author SalesMagicMan
    Hi -

    In my eyes, this is a site to sell mobile. I think it looks great. I like the color scheme, but it screams mobile all the way. My suggestion is to create a different site for other services, but I do like this one a lot. - SMM
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  • Profile picture of the author Vitus
    Nice site, but too green... I don't think green is a good color for business to business, I'd go dark blue, grey, and white...

    & the navigation doesn't look good enough... take the bg color out of the subnavs
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