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Example of letter to big companies which get meetings

by ewenmack
3 replies
See how straight forward it is without
the tricks used on you from around here.

It got meetings where they had previously failed.

Enjoy!
Ewen

How to boost your cash by £3.52m

Dear Mr Testname,

And you don't pay until the cash is in the bank

You're probably thinking this sounds too good to be true...

But it's working for ************. They collected an extra £1.96 million cash last year.

And ***** did even better - with an extra £2.25m.

No wonder Commercial Director ***** ***** is asking what else we can do.

Where do all these extra millions come from?

It's so simple I almost feel like apologising.

These vast sums come from finding partially billed commercial properties - and getting the cash.

In your case - £3.52m of cash.
#big #companies #letter #meetings
  • Profile picture of the author SashaLee
    Hi there Ewen,

    You should really give credit to Drayton Bird who was the one who originally wrote that and recently (couple of days ago) sent out an email about it.

    All the best,

    Sasha.
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    • Profile picture of the author ewenmack
      Originally Posted by SashaLee View Post

      Hi there Ewen,

      You should really give credit to Drayton Bird who was the one who originally wrote that and recently (couple of days ago) sent out an email about it.

      All the best,

      Sasha.
      You are right Sasha, in my rush to get this out
      while knee deep in other work, I omitted reference to the great
      Drayton Bird.

      If people were a newsletter member you would of got
      this gem.

      Here's where you can sign up...

      Home | Drayton Bird AssociatesDrayton Bird Associates | Results – nothing less

      Drayton and I have shared a few emails and
      I realized he has the same fascination about people
      as you see in his videos.

      Best,
      Ewen
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  • Profile picture of the author NewParadigm
    In this case it's not really the letter itself that gets the attention. It's the big claims that are intriguing which do not need much captivating motivating copy.
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