Please Critique My First Attempt At Writing Sales Copy for PPC [Selling ORM]
If you have a couple of minutes, I would appreciate your feedback on my first attempt at writing sales copy.
I want to use this copy on a landing page targeted at business owners via Facebook PPC. It is intended for an audience who currently have no or very little feedback online, as I cannot target those with 'bad' feedback on Facebook with PPC.
So it's not quite as targeted as it would be to, say, send an email or letter out to someone with bad feedback online where I can clearly identify their business information.
With that said, I do probably plan to extend this copy over to email or direct mail as well to test it out.
Here is the link to view what I have so far (PDF):
http://goo.gl/35yhlR
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