Sometimes super simple works

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We don't know if this message was A/B split tested, but it's a super simple message that might work.

I'd move the USP "we'll be there in seconds" to the top.
#simple #super #works
  • Profile picture of the author AmericanMuscleTA
    Very simple and straight forward.

    Look at call to action... "Tell us your address and we'll be there IN SECONDS." In seconds!!! McDonald's can't even make me a burger in seconds.
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    • Profile picture of the author Rus Sells
      This child really understand instant gratification. HAHA

      We learn it quickly as little children don't we?

      Originally Posted by AmericanMuscleTA View Post

      Very simple and straight forward.

      Look at call to action... "Tell us your address and we'll be there IN SECONDS." In seconds!!! McDonald's can't even make me a burger in seconds.
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      • Profile picture of the author AmericanMuscleTA
        Originally Posted by Rus Sells View Post

        This child really understand instant gratification. HAHA

        We learn it quickly as little children don't we?
        Hahaha! Yeah we do.
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        • Profile picture of the author MarkJez
          I was in a meeting yesterday, and the speaker mentioned a true story where the manager of Liverpool Football Club (Bill Shankley) was once asked why Liverpool FC seemed to always be at the top of the first division?

          Bill's reply was very brief but powerful in meaning...

          "I get my players to do simple things simply."

          Mark J.
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  • Profile picture of the author perfectde268
    Necessary services for everyone ... Good luck
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  • Profile picture of the author watsonovedades
    This could definitely work thanks for the insight
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  • Profile picture of the author nhantao20
    Yeah We Do!
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  • Profile picture of the author misterme
    It's halfway there.

    "We'll be there in seconds... or the dog walking is free."

    If it works for Domino's pizza, it'll work for dogs.
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  • I like it, simple yet effective...
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