15th Jun 2009, 02:56 PM
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Can anybody tell me what is wrong with this website CopyNProfit: The Complete Truth Revealed all critics are welcome. |
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15th Jun 2009, 03:15 PM
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Paul, I like the layout.... But you need some help with the content! Maybe try Alan Mater's service, I'll bet it'll help your conversion rate! Professional and Affordable Proofreading Services Good luck, | |
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15th Jun 2009, 11:21 PM
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Paul, You should always run your copy through a spell checker to catch any typos, but there are grammatical errors as well. I think Bill S has a solid idea. Cheers, |
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16th Jun 2009, 11:00 AM
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Hi bill, Thanks for your suggestion.. i did what you have said and now please tell me more about the content if you don't have any problem |
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