Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
22nd December 2011, 02:35 PM
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
19th December 2011, 11:00 PM
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Replies: 51
Views: 1,783 Re: What's wrong with my site?
Hi Suellen,
I got the same squeeze page impression as Drew and wondered why
there was a payment button where a web form would normally be.
First impressions are extremely important,...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
12th December 2011, 07:03 AM
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Replies: 51
Views: 1,783 Re: What's wrong with my site?
You can insert the testimony into your video. It is a powerful tool to capture visitors' attention. I have seen other fantastic sale pages, and they have made a good job on that (on selling part).
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
9th December 2011, 03:54 PM
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Replies: 51
Views: 1,783 Re: What's wrong with my site?
Hi Suellen
First off I can see that you have all worked hard to put a product together & obviously a lot of effort has gone into it. I will say nothing about the copy as many have made comments &...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
9th December 2011, 10:55 AM
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Replies: 22
Views: 938 Re: The DEATH of Affiliate Marketing?
It seems you're making the assumption that the 100% commission model will sweep all markets online. I doubt it will. There are plenty of markets out there that haven't been touched by this trend at...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
9th December 2011, 09:41 AM
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Replies: 51
Views: 1,783 Re: What's wrong with my site?
I've seen several comments about the copy being too long. I don't necessarily agree. This is a $97 sale. And more often than not, the higher the price tag, the longer the copy must be.
But there...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
9th December 2011, 09:18 AM
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Replies: 51
Views: 1,783 Re: What's wrong with my site?
Hi Suellen, I thought I'd add my thoughts. I'm pretty much an IM newbie so I had a look at your sales page as someone who you'd probably be wanting to target. Rather than giving you expert...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
8th December 2011, 10:43 AM
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Replies: 51
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
7th December 2011, 08:07 PM
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Replies: 51
Views: 1,783 Re: What's wrong with my site?
Hi
"hype" and "false claims" are not the same thing.
I'm just saying, don't be afraid to toot your own horn. I'm not saying make stuff up.
Make the course sound exciting, fun and rewarding....
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
6th December 2011, 06:08 PM
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Replies: 51
Views: 1,783 Re: What's wrong with my site?
Hi
You've got some great advice on copy writing up there!
Here are some more thoughts.
You chose IM as the niche to target with your product. That is a highly competitive niche with lots of...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
6th December 2011, 01:21 PM
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Replies: 51
Views: 1,783 Re: What's wrong with my site?
Suellen,
I'm Ted from TedsWoodworking.com. Having written tons of 6 figures salesletters for several apex clickbank vendors, I thought I'll share pointers since I think you're genuinely struggling...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
6th December 2011, 12:42 AM
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Replies: 51
Views: 1,783 Re: What's wrong with my site?
Looks like a pretty standard "long sales letter" format to me. Maybe that is the problem? Your target audience is internet marketing people and they have seen these to the max. Maybe you should try...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
5th December 2011, 10:25 PM
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Replies: 51
Views: 1,783 Re: What's wrong with my site?
When I first went to the page on my laptop, I didn't notice the sales page below the video. So I missed it and only went back to it when others were talking about the copy.
This very much seems like...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
5th December 2011, 09:44 PM
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Replies: 51
Views: 1,783 Re: What's wrong with my site?
I'm going to be honest and just recommend a complete overhaul of the sales page. It's your product so you know the value of it, the problem is to get your customers to see the value.
You only have...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
5th December 2011, 08:13 PM
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Replies: 51
Views: 1,783
Posted By
nm5419
Re: What's wrong with my site?
I'm sorry, Suellen. My brutal honesty is my nature and what I get paid for. Ignore the brash tone, as you have so eloquently done.
But instead of me showing you a page that I like, why not look at...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
5th December 2011, 06:29 PM
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Forum: Copywriting
5th December 2011, 06:22 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 809 Goodies From Jay Abraham
Someone just put this up on the main board and I thought ya'll might like it too. I know that a lot of you don't get out much. ;)
Abraham.com - Marketing Genius (http://www.abraham.com/gifts/)
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
5th December 2011, 06:05 PM
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Replies: 51
Views: 1,783 Re: What's wrong with my site?
Another thing you might want to look into would be ezines targeting people in their 40s and beyond. You can get solo ads relatively (everything is relative) cheap and get the word out that way. But...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
5th December 2011, 05:52 PM
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Replies: 51
Views: 1,783 Re: What's wrong with my site?
Well, yes and no. The market for these products is primarily young males. Are your pics hurting your efforts? Hard to say. Off hand I'd say no. I think the target market would buy from monkeys if...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
5th December 2011, 05:01 PM
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Replies: 51
Views: 1,783 Re: What's wrong with my site?
How much traffic have you driven to this page? Without traffic, the best sales page in the world will disappoint. Rather than scrapping the page why don't you create a couple other alternatives and...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
5th December 2011, 04:43 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 492 The Sociology of the Sale
Hi Warriors!
I have learned so much over the past few weeks here. I am new to WF but I am by no means new to copywriting and the mentality of the buyer. I have a degree in Sociology and I am an...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
5th December 2011, 04:14 PM
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Replies: 51
Views: 1,783 Re: What's wrong with my site?
At first glance (that's all it'll get) it doesn't appear to address any particular problem that a visitor may be experiencing.
As travlinguy says...'there is no headline to speak of'
It...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
5th December 2011, 04:06 PM
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Replies: 51
Views: 1,783 Re: What's wrong with my site?
You have no headline to speak of, nothing to grab the attention of the visitor. You have a video that auto-starts. Some people are okay with that, others click away immediately. I'm one of those. I'd...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
5th December 2011, 03:59 PM
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Forum: Copywriting
3rd December 2011, 11:04 AM
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Replies: 21
Views: 1,193 Momma told me there'd be days like this...
You're a copywriter...
At least that was the plan.
You've taken the latest course...they said you'd have clients crawling on their hands and knees wanting you to write a sales letter for them....
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Forum: Copywriting
2nd December 2011, 02:29 PM
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Replies: 12
Views: 804 11 crucial copy elements
For my 1,000th post on the Warrior Forum, here are 11 crucial copy elements:
Obviously there are other important copy elements, so consider this a mini-checklist. With these 11 elements in your...
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Forum: Copywriting
22nd October 2011, 04:00 PM
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Replies: 16
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Forum: Mind Warriors
18th October 2011, 08:40 PM
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Replies: 94
Views: 3,627 Does Positive Thinking Really Work?
If you have been to some motivational seminars, heard some audio books or read some self improvement books, you would be familiar with positive thinking, or saying positive affirmations. You would...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
3rd October 2011, 02:34 PM
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
26th September 2011, 09:09 AM
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Replies: 36
Views: 859 Re: Need help with email marketing
This is not true.
I agree with jasonl70 that the open rates are pretty low. Does your autoresponder service have a way for you to split test mailings? If so, definitely use it to test out your...
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Forum: Mind Warriors
23rd September 2011, 03:57 PM
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Replies: 515
Views: 29,249 Re: I Made Over $3,000 Today :)
That would be possible, but now my goal is to make those websites even more profitable. I do love my $4 a day websites and $20 a day website, but now the goal is to make them profit $50 - $100 a day....
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
22nd September 2011, 07:46 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 696 Re: PDF Marketing Tip
You could also hyperlink it within the text but leave a small citation so that those who are printing the PDF can find the URL in a glossary or addendum at the end.
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
22nd September 2011, 05:47 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 696 Re: PDF Marketing Tip
It's a good reminder that some people will print out your PDFs. That's why I include page numbers and start paragraphs, headings and chapters on a new page when needed. Some people think it's done to...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
22nd September 2011, 01:15 PM
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Replies: 106
Views: 3,875 Re: Major way to improve the WSO section...
Then you're making the mistake I made when I first started offering WSO's. Equating size with value.
It isn't.
You yourself said in another thread - what the market is willing to pay is what...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
22nd September 2011, 11:58 AM
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Replies: 106
Views: 3,875 Re: Major way to improve the WSO section...
Here's how I define a Hotsheet:
1. Short (usually no more than 15-20 pages)
2. No fluff
3. Actionable (you need to be able to read it quickly and then start putting it to use right away)
4....
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
21st September 2011, 07:20 PM
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Replies: 106
Views: 3,875 Major way to improve the WSO section...
E. Brian Rose has inspired me to write this based on his other thread about Spoiled WF Children ;)
One of the biggest problems in the WSO section has to do with sellers, in essence, building...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
20th September 2011, 06:29 PM
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Replies: 203
Views: 8,299 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
19th September 2011, 03:43 PM
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Replies: 203
Views: 8,299 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
19th September 2011, 12:38 PM
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Replies: 203
Views: 8,299 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
19th September 2011, 12:38 PM
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Replies: 203
Views: 8,299 |
Forum: Mind Warriors
17th September 2011, 11:54 PM
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Replies: 151
Views: 4,629 Re: Your Daily Dose of Motivation!!!
Today's Dose:
For every minute you are angry you lose sixty seconds of happiness
Don't compare your life to others, you have no idea what their journey is all about. No one is in charge of your...
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Forum: Mind Warriors
17th September 2011, 01:10 AM
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Replies: 151
Views: 4,629 Re: Your Daily Dose of Motivation!!!
Wow Browse 15, that is another one I've never heard!
Thanks for that too...
My daily dose for to-day when I had to "force" myself to complete something that was dragging on far too long, was to...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
16th September 2011, 10:32 PM
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Replies: 203
Views: 8,299 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
16th September 2011, 09:44 PM
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Replies: 203
Views: 8,299 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
16th September 2011, 07:33 PM
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Views: 8,299 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
16th September 2011, 11:36 AM
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Replies: 26
Views: 1,681 Re: Alternative to Clickbank
Because very, very few serious ClickBank affiliates are going to put their time, energy, effort and resources into promoting a product that has another sales page elsewhere when they don't have to,...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
16th September 2011, 02:42 AM
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Replies: 203
Views: 8,299 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
15th September 2011, 12:40 PM
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Replies: 14
Views: 1,106 Re: Link Cloaking
I'll put in a third vote for Pretty Link. I use it on all my affiliate blogs. Another way to use it would be to buy your name as a domain and install wordpress on it. Then install Pretty Link and you...
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Forum: Mind Warriors
15th September 2011, 12:57 AM
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Replies: 515
Views: 29,249 Re: I Made Over $3,000 Today :)
@Adam,
That varies extremely.
I have one site for example that now receives over 14,000+ visitors a day, many others get around 300 - 1,000 also.
I then have plenty of smaller sites that get...
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Forum: Mind Warriors
13th September 2011, 09:26 PM
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Replies: 151
Views: 4,629 Re: Your Daily Dose of Motivation!!!
ALL you have is NOW!
Twenty years from now you will be more disappointed by the things that you didn't do than by the ones you did do. So throw off the bowlines. Sail away from the safe...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
13th September 2011, 06:16 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 464 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
13th September 2011, 06:12 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 464 Re: Best way to follow your posts?
If you post over many topics, I find it gets a bit much to manage them in my subscribed threads.
I therefore only subscribe to the ones I deem to be important.
For the less important stuff I...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
13th September 2011, 05:45 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 464 Re: Best way to follow your posts?
If I'm really interested in a thread I usually hit the thread tools tab and go down to "subscribe to this thread". That way I will receive an email notification when someone replies with a new...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
13th September 2011, 05:43 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 464 Re: Best way to follow your posts?
The easiest way is to subscribe to any thread you want to keep an eye on, which can be done with the "Thread Tools" drop down at the top right.
Also, when you create a new post you can set your...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
13th September 2011, 05:42 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 464 Re: Best way to follow your posts?
Hi Suellen,
To automatically subscribe to any thread you post in -
(Top left) click 'User CP'
(Left menu) settings and options > edit options
(Second box down called 'messaging &...
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Forum: Mind Warriors
13th September 2011, 03:10 AM
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Replies: 151
Views: 4,629 Re: Your Daily Dose of Motivation!!!
Bill Gates makes a great statement on a video regarding the 10,000 hours required to become an expert in your field.
He says that the person who succeeds must possess an almost fanatical mindset to...
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