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Can i get a critique of my site please (in sig). I am just starting out trying to learn all of this stuff by reading posts and such. I have installed RankChecker and SeoQuake, havent decided what software to get just yet. Looks like they give some neat info to me, being new to it all.

I also have about 10 domains collecting dust, doing nothing, is there a way i can use them to help this site, despite the domain's names not being related in any way?

Anything that i can do to the main site page to make it better? add more links, text, more link depth, correct keywords,etc

Also since my pages have many pics on them, should i include a keyword in the 'alt' tag on every image on the site? theres over 100 pics, or would they be using the keywords too much in the pages?

Id like my site to be seen everywhere that people search on my keywords.

Any help is much appreciated.
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  • Profile picture of the author rajput441
    Originally Posted by itsinthere View Post

    Can i get a critique of my site please (in sig). I am just starting out trying to learn all of this stuff by reading posts and such. I have installed RankChecker and SeoQuake, havent decided what software to get just yet. Looks like they give some neat info to me, being new to it all.

    I also have about 10 domains collecting dust, doing nothing, is there a way i can use them to help this site, despite the domain's names not being related in any way?

    Anything that i can do to the main site page to make it better? add more links, text, more link depth, correct keywords,etc

    Also since my pages have many pics on them, should i include a keyword in the 'alt' tag on every image on the site? theres over 100 pics, or would they be using the keywords too much in the pages?

    Id like my site to be seen everywhere that people search on my keywords.

    Any help is much appreciated.
    try link exchange with other webmasters who has similar sites as urs... ll give u relative links and there is gr8 chances to get some authority from google...apart from that try the general link building methods that u would be needing and i dnt think those domains r going to help if they already have some traffic u could redirect them to ur main site .. could bring u visitors but cant guarantee sales.
    hope this helps.
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  • Profile picture of the author kiloh
    You have too many colors for your font/text and it's really hard to find a click-able link. I had to search very hard to even find the buy link, so I would recommend to stick with 1 or 2 colors for your font so your click-able fonts can be found. It will be hard to make sales.
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    • Profile picture of the author itsinthere
      Thanks yall, i took out a bounch of the colors on the main page and are gonna do the same for all the others.
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  • Profile picture of the author iAmNameLess
    You know, it really isn't bad!

    Some minor changes would be change your header. I think something that would look really good is a gradient with some effects going from blue to red, or even red to blue to relate with the background.

    I would also change the color of the text, and color of the drop down. Should also make your main menu items in CAPS.
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  • Profile picture of the author mike305
    First question I asked... What the hell is a ecig skin?

    I would suggest you put a picture of what it is your selling as an example.
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  • Profile picture of the author NicoleBeckett
    I would put the box that says "Ecig Skins - a premier electronic cigarette skins website!" and a picture right at the top. Like Mike305, I had no clue what an Ecig skin was either But, even for people who know exactly what it is, they're going to want to see an example of YOUR work right off the bat, to see if it's even worth their time to keep reading.

    If I were you, I would add more content, and jazz up the stuff you have on there. Really drive home the benefits of your product without coming off as a hyped-up sleazy salesman. Remember, your target audience is coming to you because they need solutions and answers. Put yourself in their minds... what would you want to see on the home? What questions would you need answered? What would make you trust the owner of the site?
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  • Profile picture of the author akazo
    I cannot believe that everyone is talking about colors and such...

    I am not trying to be negative, I am truly trying to be helpful... but the grammar is atrocious.

    I had to stop after just a few:

    1. Get Yourself some - the second word should not be capitalized in a sentence.
    2. They you can apply the skin. - not "they"..."then"
    3. I have ordered quite a few skins for all of my electronic cigarette. - cigarettes...
    4. This website exists to provide you with some quality skins, quick and easily. - it is either "quick and easy" or "quickly and easily"...

    Your location says "USA" but there is no way a native English speaker wrote this... you must have outsourced it.

    So, before you even think about colors and links, you have to clean it up.

    Hope this helps...
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  • Profile picture of the author itsinthere
    I appreciate everybodys help with this project. I am nowhere near a pro at any of this stuff. I should have read everything to make sure text was right

    I know it needs some work done to it.

    Possibly could i get someone to rewrite the main page text content and display it to where it looks great and will have a good chance to convert sales. I am getting pics done of my product attached to a electronic cigarette to help.

    Any price quotes for some help please?
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