Help writing ads?
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My first ad, targeted at local 30+ women, was drafted as this:
Headline: Are you trying to lose weight the wrong way?
Image: Company logo
Text: Click here to find out with a FREE trial session with x's No. 1 Personal Trainer! (x being the town my facility is based in)
My second, targeted at 35+ year old, high educated professional men was drafted to read:
Headline: No time to exercise?
Image: Company logo
Text: Let me show you how you do with a FREE 30min trial session with x's No. 1 Personal Trainer!
Im not settled with the 2nd ad, the people im targeting arent usually the demographic that like being shown how to do anything...
Any help & thoughts would be greatly appreciated!
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raviv -
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