Need review on Amazon site .. Please guide me

by lebox1

Posted: 11 years ago 12 replies

Hi all buddies ... This is my first amazon targeted site... Please guide me if I am doing it correct ...

Garagedoor-expert DOT com

Thanks so much ...

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RobinInTexas 11 years ago

You have a start, you need to provide more than a single product review.

Also the usual Terms, Privacy, Disclosure are not apparent if they are there.
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pdrs 11 years ago

The writing is good, Id say you're doing well in terms of format etc... you may want to include a little bit of info gleaned from other reviewers, and a good call to action "Click here to get the best price on the product X and save xx% with free shipping" or something like that always seems to work well for me.
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dreamtoreality 11 years ago

Reads like a fake review, to be honest.
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wolfmmiii 11 years ago

That site needs lots of work. Aesthetics are non-existent and there are issues with punctuation/formatting. I'm not quite sure if you really own the product based on the writing either. If you don't really own the product you are reviewing, it does come across as a fake review if you aren't careful.

I suggest approaching it from the perspective of a reporter, rather than an owner if you don't really own it. By "reporting on" the product and explaining what the features are, how they compare to other models, and discussing the niche/technology in general, you can provide good info that the product page on Amazon does not.

This all assumes you are actually knowledgeable in the niche.
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- lebox1 11 years ago
  
  Thanks for all the advice. So I guess this is a crap job
  
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  wolfmmiii 11 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by lebox1
  
  Thanks for all the advice. So I guess this is a crap job
  
  It's a start. I suggest sticking with a niche/product line you are familiar with and putting together a site that you yourself would trust if you came across it in the search results.
  
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  lebox1 11 years ago
  
  Do you think if there is too much links? I made some changes to the wording. It has been 24 hours but it is still not indexed ...
  
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  Hansons 11 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by lebox1
  
  Thanks for all the advice. So I guess this is a crap job
  
  No, you have a good site, it looks good and it would convert good if it is optimized for search engine.
  
  Only one suggestion, the product you are using, it is in iframe, which default style of Amazon.....
  
  Instead you should use a little larger image and link the image with the affiliate link...
  
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  lebox1 11 years ago
  
  Ok thanks ... By the way. I will be writing another original article to post on the site to make it more content What's next? I submitted my site map and linked from my pr 2 forex site to urge google to index it .. Nothing happened. Shared link on Facebook. Nothing too.
  
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  lebox1 11 years ago
  
  I got about 4 organic visits in 1 day. I am at a loss on how to move forward... Just write more article ?
  
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curationsoft 11 years ago

the site looks good, just wait for few more days before it index. don't rush your gold.
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JustChecking 11 years ago

What ever you do, no fake review please.

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Fake reviews are everywhere, the following articles have documented the fakes on Amazon going on right now. Still there for your verification, unbelievably true.

How to Spot Fake Reviews Manufactured by an Amazon Seller

How to Spot a Fake Review on Amazon.Com: 8 Steps - wikiHow

Now, we all know fake review products violated many state laws.....
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