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Landing page feedback for $50,000 sale, please?

by Sean Patrick Sanders
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Hey all,

I posted a bit ago to try to find out the best way to market this opportunity, but I would like to see if this is a good start?

Work For Yourself

What methods would you recommend I use to drive traffic to this page?

Do you think it will convert?

Any tips?

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If anyone wants to help me market this, PM me.
#$50 #feedback #landing #page #sale
  • Profile picture of the author FUBSZ
    this was for $50k? wow, I would be pretty pissed off if I got this for $5k.

    You could whip up a much nicer looking lander yourself using leadpages, unbounce..etc for a much much MUCH lower cost.

    One of the points that should really be fixed in the lander are:
    1) The text is too big and "in your face" - Simplicity is key
    2) The "get more info" button is annoying.
    3) The logo and company name are not relevant to the domain name

    Unless this has some awesome features I'm missing, I would say this was NOT worth $50k.
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    • Profile picture of the author Sean Patrick Sanders
      Originally Posted by FUBSZ View Post

      this was for $50k? wow, I would be pretty pissed off if I got this for $5k.

      You could whip up a much nicer looking lander yourself using leadpages, unbounce..etc for a much much MUCH lower cost.

      One of the points that should really be fixed in the lander are:
      1) The text is too big and "in your face" - Simplicity is key
      2) The "get more info" button is annoying.
      3) The logo and company name are not relevant to the domain name

      Unless this has some awesome features I'm missing, I would say this was NOT worth $50k.
      Thank you for the feedback.

      I definitely communicated poorly, I paid VERY little for this site,but it's for an opportunity that sells for $30k-50k.

      What should I tell my designer to do?

      What tips do you have to improve the feel of the site.

      Something feels off about it.
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  • Profile picture of the author Hearn
    It's ok to have a website but if you want to send traffic to your offer you need a landing page or more.

    You can try a landing page with a direct offer, but i doubt anyone will pay directly that much.

    So you need a squeeze page and sell with your emails.

    As the traffic source you should try anything.

    There is no formula for this, you have to be creative and split test different ideas and traffic sources.
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    Second impression, work at home scam.
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