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Hi guys,
just made some updates to website and copy, would be grateful for a review. F1DriversSecrets.com Be brutal. Thank you. |
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Last edited by robs132; 10-17-2009 at 06:55 PM. Reason: need to put link in |
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call me andy
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looks good but you could tidy up the font a bit on the main headlines sorry to say
btw i love f1 |
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smartbox
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There's an enormous amount of white space between the header graphic and the headline. There's a typo here "thier phenomenal results." should be "their". An amazing thing happened when i clicked to highlight that phrase - it moved up and the large white space reappeared below. As I clicked on other parts they moved up too.
The top yellow testimonial box is on top of text that should be above it and the book icon is obliterating some of the text. I hope you find my comments useful ![]() John |
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Webweaver
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Its really a cool website. Keep it up buddy
My all wishes are with you.
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Wordpress Guru
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Hello Buddy this is a good new site you have made but i think that you should
replace the white background its kinda of simple and also try to center somethings up like the book for exmaple |
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Site is very simple. Make your header more appealing. Fonts make it smaller.
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James Marnley
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Cool Very good site. Was it easy to set up onto clickbank ? i found it so hard when i tried. I think the site looks good as it is. Its straight forward and to the point
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bigladbob
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Has the potential to be a stunning site, but is marred by the photo and testimonial overlays which have obliterated a good part of the text. Should only take a minor sort out.
I like it! |
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It looks pretty good, just a few changes here and there to clean it up.
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