Please Review My Website

hawksurfer · 10-18-2009, 08:22 AM

Hello,

Could you guys please review my website and give your opinions.

My site is: www.hawksurfer.com

Thanks...

johnlagoudakis · 10-18-2009, 10:14 AM

I like your home page. Graphics and layout is very appealing.

bbenson19 · 10-18-2009, 10:53 AM

The graphics is great, but I got confused. What is in it for me???

That should be a question that needs to be answered in your sales page.

Just my 2 cents.

g705 · 10-18-2009, 03:00 PM

I like your it is very nice I like your graphics maybe some more information of why it would be good for me or the costumer

hawksurfer · 10-28-2009, 11:54 AM

I have edited the front page to include why they should join. Let me know if it looks better.

wholesale · 11-01-2009, 04:41 PM

I love the look of the website. I would put some reviews on the site and maybe show some examples of work done

Shaleniie Devi · 11-02-2009, 01:58 AM

The real eagle is a bit too much for me but writing wise, it's done well.

pierro · 11-02-2009, 05:11 AM

Hi all, I don't know much about website design, however I've been trying hard and 5 days ago I tried Dream Weaver which is highly complex, but I think I picked up the basic fundamentals, not too sure. Anyway can someone please have a look, it's still in the designing process and not yet optimized to go live.
this is the URL: affiliate tools and programs
thanks in advance,pierro

smithloy121 · 11-02-2009, 07:53 AM

you have done very good work...i am really impressed with it..

pierro · 11-02-2009, 08:12 AM

Thank you heaps Smithloy121, you made my day! I think I already thanked you in the other post where I wasn't getting any response, so here is one brownie point for you, I am going to hit your thank you button.
Cheers, pierro

loenex · 11-03-2009, 11:43 PM

Nice site. I like the interface, very attractive and at the same time clean and information are summarized well.

Chris Cabo · 11-15-2009, 04:56 AM

I have been told the truth on many occasions. It will make us a better person and not give you what the lazy people tell you you want to hear.

For newbies coming onto the web this is okay.

For those that have been around 6 months or longer know this site need to be gutted!

My first impression was of "TONY HAWK" the skate board king.
The ads on the side needs to go. You are saying this site is "for sale" and wanting people to join? How long do you plan to be their "mentor."
The list goes on. I do not have the time.
You made the effort and that's what counts. You will get better.
I would not join. I'd hate to think this is one of those sites that sends those annoying emails that end up in my SPAM filter.
Talk later brother.
Christian

aijaydan1 · 11-15-2009, 04:24 PM

i am a newbie with no much knowledge about webdesign and copywriting but i think it's a nice one and will equally be SEO friendly

aijaydan1 · 11-15-2009, 04:30 PM

it is a good one and can pass for optimization

10-18-2009, 08:22 AM	#1
hawksurfer Warrior Member Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 6 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Please Review My Website Hello, Could you guys please review my website and give your opinions. My site is: www.hawksurfer.com Thanks...
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10-18-2009, 10:14 AM	#2
johnlagoudakis JohnLagoudakis.com War Room Member Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Brisbane, Australia Posts: 354 Blog Entries: 8 Thanks: 33 Thanked 48 Times in 36 Posts Social Networking	Re: Please Review My Website I like your home page. Graphics and layout is very appealing.
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10-18-2009, 10:53 AM	#3
bbenson19 Active Warrior Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 75 Thanks: 1 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts	Re: Please Review My Website The graphics is great, but I got confused. What is in it for me??? That should be a question that needs to be answered in your sales page. Just my 2 cents.
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10-18-2009, 03:00 PM	#4
g705 Wordpress Guru War Room Member Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 19 Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Re: Please Review My Website I like your it is very nice I like your graphics maybe some more information of why it would be good for me or the costumer

10-28-2009, 11:54 AM	#5
hawksurfer Warrior Member Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 6 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: Please Review My Website I have edited the front page to include why they should join. Let me know if it looks better.
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11-01-2009, 04:41 PM	#6
wholesale James Marnley War Room Member Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: UK Posts: 4 Thanks: 0 Thanked 32 Times in 8 Posts Social Networking Contact Info	Re: Please Review My Website I love the look of the website. I would put some reviews on the site and maybe show some examples of work done
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11-02-2009, 01:58 AM	#7
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11-02-2009, 05:11 AM	#8
pierro Active Warrior Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 97 Thanks: 6 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts	Re: Please Review My Website Hi all, I don't know much about website design, however I've been trying hard and 5 days ago I tried Dream Weaver which is highly complex, but I think I picked up the basic fundamentals, not too sure. Anyway can someone please have a look, it's still in the designing process and not yet optimized to go live. this is the URL: affiliate tools and programs thanks in advance,pierro
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11-02-2009, 07:53 AM	#9
smithloy121 Warrior Member Join Date: Nov 2009 Posts: 0 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Re: Please Review My Website you have done very good work...i am really impressed with it..
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11-02-2009, 08:12 AM	#10
pierro Active Warrior Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 97 Thanks: 6 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts	Re: Please Review My Website Thank you heaps Smithloy121, you made my day! I think I already thanked you in the other post where I wasn't getting any response, so here is one brownie point for you, I am going to hit your thank you button. Cheers, pierro
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11-03-2009, 11:43 PM	#11
loenex Active Warrior Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: below the sky Posts: 56 Thanks: 0 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts	Re: Please Review My Website Nice site. I like the interface, very attractive and at the same time clean and information are summarized well.
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11-15-2009, 04:56 AM	#12
Chris Cabo Enlightened Street Warrio War Room Member Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Los Angeles, California Posts: 41 Thanks: 93 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Social Networking	Re: Please Review My Website I have been told the truth on many occasions. It will make us a better person and not give you what the lazy people tell you you want to hear. For newbies coming onto the web this is okay. For those that have been around 6 months or longer know this site need to be gutted! My first impression was of "TONY HAWK" the skate board king. The ads on the side needs to go. You are saying this site is "for sale" and wanting people to join? How long do you plan to be their "mentor." The list goes on. I do not have the time. You made the effort and that's what counts. You will get better. I would not join. I'd hate to think this is one of those sites that sends those annoying emails that end up in my SPAM filter. Talk later brother. Christian

11-15-2009, 04:24 PM	#13
aijaydan1 Warrior Member Join Date: Nov 2009 Posts: 10 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: Please Review My Website i am a newbie with no much knowledge about webdesign and copywriting but i think it's a nice one and will equally be SEO friendly
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11-15-2009, 04:30 PM	#14
aijaydan1 Warrior Member Join Date: Nov 2009 Posts: 10 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: Please Review My Website it is a good one and can pass for optimization