give me some feed back on review page

mr877 · 11-12-2009, 12:30 PM

I know i havent made any contributions to this forum to date, and realistically Im pretty sure most of you are light years ahead of me. I just need some help and pointers on a rewiew page, I know i need a new domain but ill figure that out later.

www.leavedebt.com

I just think the copy plain sucks any tips would be much appreciated! and like I said when I actually promote I will get a proper domain

. Also yes I know the links are missing.

11-12-2009, 12:30 PM	#1
mr877 Warrior Member Join Date: Nov 2009 Posts: 0 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	give me some feed back on review page I know i havent made any contributions to this forum to date, and realistically Im pretty sure most of you are light years ahead of me. I just need some help and pointers on a rewiew page, I know i need a new domain but ill figure that out later. www.leavedebt.com I just think the copy plain sucks any tips would be much appreciated! and like I said when I actually promote I will get a proper domain . Also yes I know the links are missing.