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11-18-2009, 05:17 PM
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|  Dirt Honest Opinion...
I just completed a new sales page. I know the video needs to be redone. Please review and give me your dirt honest feedback. THANKS. Internet Income Wealth System |
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11-18-2009, 08:32 PM
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I'm no expert on these things, but here goes... Too long of a headline. I like the little line in black above it. It attracts attention. Long copy sales letter is out. Few will read the whole thing. Put you pitch in a video or two and ditch it. Move your price and guarantee UP! That is a ridiculous price. Make your copy just the guarantee, price and put in bold print that this is the only price they will pay for this (no membership required). It'll sell. Keep the dog. |
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11-20-2009, 02:30 PM
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Thanks so much. You gave great stuff!
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