Honest Opinions of My Offer Please

[dremy154]

I have spent a considerable amount of time editing and integrating things with my payment script; adding bonuses.

If you could please look at my site and give an honest review of any/all aspects, it would be greatly appreciated.

(I know the video is not centered on the page, and I question the quality also)

http://viralmarketingtutor.info/wso/


Thanks

[HealthBuff]

Fabulous looking site - non eventful words thou.
The words do not pull me in, no rush to action.

Solution - there are dozens of copywriters on the forum, why don't you offer to do a swap. Your product and bonuses for their punchy rewrite and review. In fact get a few and test the market with each one at the same time. All can point to the same payment facility.

Looks a really good product – is it related to the video?

If so, double the reason you must find a solution to the beautiful rogue video on the site.

Best wishes for your venture.

[dremy154]

Originally Posted by HealthBuff

Fabulous looking site - non eventful words thou.
The words do not pull me in, no rush to action.

Solution - there are dozens of copywriters on the forum, why don't you offer to do a swap. Your product and bonuses for their punchy rewrite and review. In fact get a few and test the market with each one at the same time. All can point to the same payment facility.

Looks a really good product – is it related to the video?

If so, double the reason you must find a solution to the beautiful rogue video on the site.

Best wishes for your venture.

Hi, and thanks for the review.

I'll get busy on looking for a copywriter to do a possible swap with!

Yes, the product is related to the video. An e-book and 5 videos about how to conduct a viral marketing campaign.

I have an offer in the warrior classifieds with this product and bonuses, for $7 here:

http://www.warriorforum.com/warrior-...-only-7-a.html

[supermail]

Nice looking site! Did you design it?

And good value for $17, or is it $7?