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Unread 5th May 2013, 06:06 AM   #1
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Hey Warriors,

Years Ago I charged $3,000 for my first Sales Letter

I now charge $5,000+

But for a limited you can get my expertise for $10

I will go over you Sales copy with a Fine tooth comb and give you
a Video Critique for $10

How long will the Video Critique Be?
10 - 15 Minutes

Why Am I Doing this? - To drum up business for my copywriting services. PLUS It keeps my skills sharp by looking at lots of different copy.

Will this get me any Copywriting Business? Maybe, we'll see. I have done Free Critiques in the past and it has resulted in business but it also got me a lot of tire kickers and freebie seekers and wasted a lot of time. This is sort of like offering a cheap $7 report to build a buyers list

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Here are some Samples of Video Critiques I have Done

Here's a Paid One


Here's a Short Free One I Did for Somebody in a Facebook Group



I am not putting an order link her because this is not a digital product and my time is very limited. If you are interested POST HERE IN THIS THREAD and I will get back to you in the order in which you post. First Come First Serve

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Sure I would be interested in some copy critique. PM me.

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Sure I would be interested in some copy critique. PM me.
ok sent you a PM Simon

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Hi Jack,

Sounds great, I need to redo the salesletter I have at www.tubenaire.com. It is all over the place.

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Hey Chris.

I'll take a look at that today

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Hi Jack,

Sounds great, I need to redo the salesletter I have at www.tubenaire.com. It is all over the place.

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Jack Bastide I sent you a PM. I would love to hear from you about the improvements needed in my sale page.

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Hey Chris.

I'll take a look at that today

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Hi Jack.

Just wanted to remind you about the PM I sent. I am keenly waiting for your reply.
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