Looking for feedback for my product review I've written

by Hoodyy
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Hey warriors.

I'm looking for some constructive criticism regarding the latest review I've written. I've decided that for this review, I am going to build backlinks to that page, write articles about the product linking back to the review etc and essentially try to get it to #1 for the keyword: Tonium Pacemaker Review

Warning! Read this Tonium Pacemaker Review before buying! | DJ Mixers Review

I'd like your opinions on whether or not the on-page SEO could be improved as well as content recommendations / criticism and whether or not you think it would convert well.

Thanks for your time,

Matt
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  • Profile picture of the author Enfusia
    Hi
    SEO 1st...
    1. You don't have your keyword in bold anywhere.
    2. Your Keyword density is at 3.9. You may want to get that closer to 3%
    3. Your xml sitemap says this page should be updated monthly. You may want to change your settings to never or at least annually so G is not looking for it and it doesn't happen.
    4. Your domain all links are mostly coming from one DJ Mix site and a squidoo lens. I would get a few more sites that are in the same niche to link to it. Why, targeted likes just like targeted traffic (well almost, but G likes em). Never argue with the 800 pound Gorilla, just give the monkey a Banana.

    If you're in the DJ/mix niche a lot then set up a multi IP on another hosting account set up a WPMU with 20+ subdomains and but all with a url like http://djmixreviews.com and all subs being related. Then I would blog roll 10 sites and put a spun article with links on the other 10

    Now the verbiage...
    It does not feel like an honest review. It feels like you want me to buy it. It has to many feelings like I'm on a sales page.

    Your text blocks are too big for easy web reading break them up and bullet point them.
    Here is an example of an article I wrote that you can see what I mean. You will see it's got over 21K views and was written on Nov 26th published on Dec 7th I believe.
    Cute Winter Boots

    Hopefully that example will help.

    Patrick
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