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| MillionDollarAdMan.com War Room Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Melbourne, Australia.
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|  ★BRAND NEW★ ☛ OFFICIAL LAUNCH ●●●► "If You DON'T Make Money From This... I'll Pay YOU $10 Myself!"
“Cocky Australian Copywriter Makes Serious Bet That He Can Increase ANYONE'S Conversions... And To PROVE IT He'll Fork Out $10 Of His Own Money!” It’s all to do with my "I Pay YOU" Money Back Guarantee I’m offering when you sign up for my BRAND NEW membership site at CopyCritter.com ...more on the incredible offer I have for you in a sec... But before we get started let me give you a brief intro about myself and what I’ve been doing with myself recently... If There's One Thing I'm Good At Above All Else... It's Writing Damn Good Copy.
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 What's the SECRET? Actually it's simple... I know how to use WORDS that persuade, convince and FORCE people to buy... At the moment I charge $5000 per letter (and my clients can afford it because I give them MASSIVE return on their money) ...and $500 for a Critique (I've done around 20 of these now, with some incredible results) Critique Testimonials Quote:
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Introducing CopyCritter.com... When you become a member at CopyCritter you get the following: 1. TWO Critiques to any salesletter or piece of copy (I usually charge $500 PER Critique so this this is valued at $1000) You'll get your critique delivered to you via email or video, it's up to you! 2. “The Ultimate Quick-Fix Guide” ...How To DRAMATICALLY Ramp Up Conversions To Your Site In Less Than 30 Minutes You’ll get “The Ultimate Quick-Fix Guide” this is basically what I get my clients to change on their sites BEFORE I even consider going over their copy... in fact I’ve NEVER worked with a client who after implementing all the small changes I go through in this guide (it’s only 6 pages long) didn’t increase their conversions by AT LEAST 50%... you have a very good chance of at least DOUBLING your conversions by simply following the steps in this guide... Quote:
for $297+ ...in fact I could easily flesh out the information in “The Ultimate Quick-Fix Guide” into a small home study course and sell it for a thousand bucks... but honestly I’m too lazy... just understand that this report has an INSANE amount of value... I was talking to a few of my marketing buddies about what I might 3. UNLIMITED Email Consultation (Value:$500/month) Ask me anything to do with Copywriting, in fact anything to do with marketing, I am very experienced in this area and will be able to help you out with pretty much anything... I see a lot of people offer $297 coaching offers with unlimited email consultation... with this deal you get it for free! 4. EXCLUSIVE ACCESS to my PERSONAL mobile number (Value: PRICELESS) Again! You'll be able to ask me anything you want... Note: I live in Australia so you'll be given a certain time in which you can ring (I don't want to be waken up at 3am in the morning now do I) This is even more ridiculous than the email consultation... and in particular if this one gets abused I’ll have to take it down... SO TAKE ADVANTAGE OF IT WHILE YOU CAN Here's what you should do RIGHT NOW: You already know how valuable this is... I'm giving you around 2000 US dollars of solid value each month (not too mention what I might give away in calls and in emails) But let me sweeten the deal... Josiah's "I Pay YOU" Money Back Guarantee If I can't increase your conversions, you don't owe me a cent, in fact I if can't increase your conversions I will give you every cent of your money back and just to show you how sorry I am for wasting your time I will PAY YOU $10 out of my own pocket... It's a NO-RISK NO-LOSS Situation! So if you're really serious about bringing your business to the next level and RAMPING up sales and conversions join CopyCritter for just $97/month! WAIT Josiah, why the heck are you doing this for so cheap? I'm glad you asked that actually... here's why I'm doing this so cheap... 1. This is the first Copywriting membership I've ever started and I am trying to create content which I can use in the future... basically I'm killing two birds with one stone... I want to make a bit of income while generating this content but still allow people a massive discount on my critiques! so that's why I'm giving you TWO Critiques for $97 (when I usually charge $500 for ONE! kinda ridiculous I know...) And that's pretty much it... YOU KNOW this is a good deal... It's pretty obvious... counting the value of the critiques alone ($500x2) this is a massive steal... So get in before I charge what I SHOULD be charging for this membership! IMPORTANT NOTE: Remember... I'm here to help you SKYROCKET your profits and help you make more money than you've EVER made before! But you MUST be serious about increasing your revenue... which means you need to FOLLOW THROUGH on the advice I give you to see results... otherwise my critiques are going to be worthless... LIMITED TO 25 SPOTS CURRENTLY 5 SPOTS LEFT at $97/month Next 5 Members Price Goes To $107/month Next 5 Members Price Goes To $117/month Next 10 Members Price Goes To $127/month ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★
★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★ EXAMPLES OF MY COPYWRITING: http://howtobefunny.net http://copycritter.com/members/CopyCritter/MSHoodia.pdf Thanks for listening, Josiah P.S. This offer is limited to 25 spots, once they are filled the offer is gone forever at this price and you can look forward to paying $497/month  basically because I can't be doing over 100 critiques a month, it's too much work!
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| HyperActive Warrior Join Date: May 2006 Location: Melbourne, Australia.
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| Re: ★BRAND NEW★ ☛ OFFICIAL LAUNCH ●●●► "If You DON'T Make Money From This... I'll Pay YOU $10 Myself
Hi Josiah, This sounds fantastic but as a newbie trying to get a site up i feel i'm not quite ready to take advantage of it. However its great to see a successful Aussie doing so well - inspired by Brett McFall perhaps? I did however notice a little typo. I assume that "in fact I I can't increase" should be "if i". If this is of value then perhaps you could hold a spot at $97 a month for me for a month or so? Ciao, Keith (a Melbourne baby boomer with low skills and high hope lol) |
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