Powerful Copywiting Will Help You Sell More- Take a Look

[Paul McQuillan]

Do you have a product or service drowning in the deep end of the pool?

Transform Your Salesletter From a BB Gun to a Howitzer and Create a Firestorm of Sales

Stop gasping for air and catapult sales over the top

Hello fellow Warrior,

Flat-lined copy. You know what I am talking about. You have something that people want yet have been unable to convey it to them in words.

I know all too well your gut-wrenching agony

Before I had the ammunition to fire off words that sell, I lost my shirt. Time after time I would write ads only to see them wither and die. Nothing irritated me more than losing the traffic I fought so hard to attract--in less then 10 seconds.

What the hell is going on?

It must be the product. The price is good and the bonuses are slap your mama insane. It has to be the product... NOT!

I come to find out they would bounce without scrolling. My headline and intro somehow squashed their interest.

Eyes opened by swift kick in the nuts

After reality did a did a drive by I decided to learn the secret ninja art of copywriting.To hone my new skills I ventured offline and focused on direct mail for small businesses.

Put up or shut up

Finally, the time came. I was hired to write a mailer that was going out to more than 100,000 people. My balls descended since that kick and I salivated at the opportunity....I also wore a diaper to catch my nervousness escaping out the back door.

100,000 pieces of mail hit the streets and you're not going to believe what happened....

We'll come back to that

First let's look at what I am offering you

You will get a sales letter written by me using all of the secret voodoo tricks and tactics I have used to sell more than $500,000 worth of products and services.

You will get up to 3 revisions to get the copy optimal

You get a guarantee. Since it is impossible to guarantee results I can only guarantee you will be satisfied with the letter.

I also guarantee you the truth. I am a very straight shooter who does not like to bullsh-t around. If I say I am starting your letter you will not be wondering where it is months later.

Okay stud, if you're so damned good what's with the WSO?

Like I said, I prefer to be candid. It can be hard to stay busy at all times. My clients don't need me writing 365 days a year. I need to keep my chops up or I will lose my edge.

Rules

• You must have a good product or service and a big enough market to succeed
• You must know how you will be promoting it
• NO LYING! All of your information must be real

How Much?

So that first direct mail piece mailed to more than 100,000 people had me sweating for the first 3 days. Fast forward one month and they had $215,989.64 in sales directly from the mailer.

I beat 5 years worth of their best controls (successful ads) on my first attempt.

Thanks a million!

Paul has been pivotal in increasing response with our ads. He did things to our mailers I never thought of doing and we had FANTASTIC results. With his help we should crack $3 million in sales this year. -Chris Lambrinides

Let's turn your wounded duck into a fire breathing dragon

A custom online sales letter, created to your satisfaction is yours for $497.

I will not be able to ethically take on 10 projects (as much as I would like to). I want to make sure you get the best I got. I am looking for 3-4 depending how much research each project demands.

Buy now and let's get you making money

Feel free to pm me with any questions

To your success,


Paul McQuillan