If Your $300 Sales Letter Sucks, Let A $6,000 Copywriter Fix It For $##

Stephen Dean · 11-10-2009, 07:02 PM

"My $300 Sales Letter Sucks!"
Says Frustrated Warrior Member.

Did you fork over good money for someone to create your sales letter? Are you ready for a top-tier copywriter to explain in plain language why your sales letter isn't converting?

For 5 people only: I can deliver step by step, easy to implement instructions on how to fix your sales letter so that it starts selling. I'll dissect your sales letter, taking notes as I do it... then I'll explain the necessary changes in a 10-15 minutes camtasia video of your sales copy.

* Many times your headline is all wrong.
* Many times you've completely missed what your market wants to hear.
* Many times you've crafted the offer all wrong.
* Many times the guarantee is telling people your product sucks.
* Many times your PS's are wasted.

There are many reasons why your copy may not be converting. And I'm qualified to tell you what these reasons are.

Here's my experience with copy...

David Garfinkel has hired me. Both Ryan Deiss and Jim Edwards have paid me thousands and thousands of dollars to write for them. Matt Bacak too.

(In fact, Ryan and Jim each invited me to fly across the country to their Internet Business seminars... one in Atlanta, one in Dallas... where they had me stand up in front of their paying audience to endorse my work.)

In 5 years I've completed over 205 different projects. Some copywriters on the warrior forum disappear forever because it turns out they couldn't cut it. I've proven that can't possibly apply to me.

Some of my clients have this to say about me...

[quote]"My conversion rate has skyrocketed..."

"I have two words about the sales letter. Mind blowing!"

"You're a genius copywriter."

"Business has been doing great. My conversion rate has skyrocketed ever since you wrote those sales letters for me. I can't thank you enough for doing such a marvelous job."

"You're the first person I'm going to think about every time I start a new project that requires copywriting."

Kaviraj Kodai,
http://www.ultimatemarketingcenter.com

Quote:

"...took all of 9 hours to pay off..."

"Stephen did such a rotten job for us it took all of 9 hours to pay off the sales letter with PPC ads only. I don't recommend him unless you want a good sales letter at a decent price.

"Sorry for the bad review Stephen I just felt folks should be warned that your copy did a great job for us

"(For those of you don't get sarcasm - Stephen is a good guy who will take care of you and do a great job.)"

Ed Charkow
http://www.websitemonthly.com

Quote:

"...it has since paid back at least 10x my initial investment..."

Stephen is so good for the price he charges that I almost didn't want to write this post. Fearing he might get too many clients and RAISE his prices. Seriously.

I hired him for a mini-letter a while back in a competitive niche... and it has since paid back at least 10x my initial investment and it wasn't even a full sales letter, with very minor changes to it... and yet I still get consistent paypal deposits every week.

Anyway, I'd encourage anybody that's on the fence on this one jump, no RUN... and DIVE head first on this offer like a hawk.

Rhen
Warrior Name "DoctorKellogs"

And even legendary copywriter Michel Fortin has said this about me...

Quote:

Watch for the name "Stephen Dean". You will be seeing a lot more of it, that's for sure.

Michel Fortin

For $99 I'll deliver a 10-15 minute video critiquing your copy WITH notes to follow along.

I write copy starting at $6,000.00 per letter. And still, you can get this video critique for just $99 even.

But remember there are only 5 spots available!

The spots will be taken first come first serve assuming that I approve your project.

The First 3 People Who Respond Get This Free:

Your Choice of ONE of the following 5 products free.

$100, Tapping Michel Fortin's Brain 1 & 2

$70, The 2 Hour Sales Letter

$50, Digital Scarcity

$35, 7 Copy Sins

$35, Sales Boosting Mini-site Template

Remember, only the first 3 people get to choose from the 5 products above, so you need to act fast.

To reserve your spot, click the button below and give Paypal your information.

Click button above to order.

If you have any questions, feel free to leave a comment or PM me.

Cheers,
Stephen Dean

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Stephen Dean · 11-11-2009, 02:09 PM

4 Spots Left.

Sancho Sanches · 11-19-2009, 04:48 PM

Are you available to answer a few questions afterward if there is some sort of doubt or take another look at the page once changes are made according to your feedback just to make sure a person is on the right track? I'm not talking about ongoing indefinite support forever

Stephen Dean · 11-19-2009, 04:51 PM

Of course, within reason. I respond to PMs and emails from past customers.

Cheers!
Stephen

Check out all my current copywriting WSOs

11-11-2009, 02:09 PM	#2
Stephen Dean Master Copywriter War Room Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: WA , USA. Posts: 1,052 Thanks: 133 Thanked 192 Times in 99 Posts Social Networking	Re: If Your $300 Sales Letter Sucks, Let A $6,000 Copywriter Fix It For $## 4 Spots Left.

11-19-2009, 04:48 PM	#3
Sancho Sanches HyperActive Warrior Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: In my body Posts: 132 Thanks: 1 Thanked 19 Times in 14 Posts	Re: If Your $300 Sales Letter Sucks, Let A $6,000 Copywriter Fix It For $## Are you available to answer a few questions afterward if there is some sort of doubt or take another look at the page once changes are made according to your feedback just to make sure a person is on the right track? I'm not talking about ongoing indefinite support forever

11-19-2009, 04:51 PM	#4
Stephen Dean Master Copywriter War Room Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: WA , USA. Posts: 1,052 Thanks: 133 Thanked 192 Times in 99 Posts Social Networking	Re: If Your $300 Sales Letter Sucks, Let A $6,000 Copywriter Fix It For $## Of course, within reason. I respond to PMs and emails from past customers. Cheers! Stephen Check out all my current copywriting WSOs