Weak Salesletters Wanted!

Kyle Tully · 10-15-2008, 03:46 AM

Does Your Sales Copy NOT Sell?

Want A Proven 6-Figure Copywriter
To Show You Exactly What's Wrong and
How You Can Quickly Fix It?

If You Qualify for a COPY CRITIQUE,
I Promise To Show You Dozens of Ways To
Quickly and Easily BOOST Your Conversions...
Increase Your Sales... and Maximize Your Profits...
Even During The Recession!

And I'll show how YOU can get RESULTS like...

4% response with cold traffic to hot salesletters.

6% response from a single email... for a $500 product!

$25,000 slashed from a new business start-up.

1842% increase in sales from one simple website change.

BUSINESS GROWTH: 30%... 50%... even 100% or more increase in YOUR bottom line in just weeks.

Plus I'll Reveal...

How to persuade with empathy, connection and resonance instead of hype.

2300 year old persuasion techniques WAY more powerful than anything your competitors have ever seen or used.

Little-known sales killers that turn ready-to-buy prospects into quivering nervous wrecks who won't even take your FREE stuff!

Why your layout and design might be the reason people leave your website so fast.

The 3 most important parts of a salesletter -- one of them is your headline... but you might be surprised at the other two!

And HEAPS more response-boosting tips, tactics, and underground techniques!

And I'll give you...

Headlines, Hooks &
High-Converting
Offers!

Not only will I critique your salesletter, website, or ad and help you turn it into a cash-converting machine... but... I'll also give you SPECIFIC, ACTIONABLE, PERSONALIZED marketing tips, copy suggestions and strategic advice. I charge $500 an hour for this every day of the year, but you'll get it FREE.

And if YOU are one of the first 10 Warriors...

I'll give you 30 minutes consulting time FREE (a real $250 value!) to discuss your copy, your marketing, your business... anything you want. I'll hold nothing back and tell you what I REALLY think -- it might not be pretty but it's what YOU need to hear to achieve the results you want.

So... How Do You Qualify?

Actually there are 3 qualifications you must meet...

1. You MUST agree to implement my advice, test the results, and report back to me.
I will not waste my time on lookyloos. Deals like this don't come around often and I only want serious people who will take action to take me up on this offer.

2. You MUST agree to give me full rights to the recordings.
The reason I am offering such a low price on this WSO is because the recordings are to be part of a new membership site I am starting. You get a low price and I get content. It's WIN-WIN.

3. You MUST agree to fill out my 5-question survey.
Before I can give a constructive critique I need to know who your market is, where the salesletter fits into the big picture, and other such things.

Of course you're protected by my 100% value guarantee -- if you don't think you got value from my services then I DON"T WANT YOUR MONEY. Simple as that.

If You Meet These Qualifications
And Want To Finally Start Seeing
The Results You Deserve...
Click Here To Get Started Now

Kyle Tully · 10-15-2008, 04:11 AM

Question: How long will the critiques be?

As long as they need to be! Depends on how long your copy is, how much is wrong with it, how many ways it can be improved... anywhere from 15 minutes up to 45 minutes or more. But I won't "pad" it to make it longer, if I can say something in one sentence then that's what you'll get.

Question: What format will they be in?

They're Camtasia videos in MOV format. I'll go over your salesletter line-by-line with you watching every step of the way.

Dennis Sim · 10-15-2008, 06:31 AM

I'm not too sure whether I'm one of the lucky one to get free critique.

But failed to process

Kyle Tully · 10-15-2008, 06:49 AM

Hi Allen

I've automated as much of the process as possible. Click the link -- Click Here To Get Started Now -- then once you've paid via Paypal you'll be redirected to download the quick questionnaire.

Should only take 2 minutes to complete.

Then email it to me and I'll have your critique done asap -- usually within 24 hours but it depends on how many I'm currently working on.

Dennis I'm not sure what you're saying, did you try and pay and it failed... or something else?

Cheers
Kyle

David-JP · 10-15-2008, 09:23 AM

Hi Kyle,
Just tried to signup but getting a paypal error "there is a problem with the PayPal email address supplied by the seller"

David

Global365 · 10-15-2008, 02:11 PM

Hi Kyle,

Here is Error in payment page:

We cannot process this transaction because there is a problem with the PayPal email address supplied by the seller. Please contact the seller to resolve the problem. If this payment is for an eBay listing, you can contact the seller via the "Ask Seller a Question" link on the listing page. When you have the correct email address, payment can be made at www.paypal.com.

Kyle Tully · 10-15-2008, 04:09 PM

OK I've just played with the settings... should be ok now.

For some reason my Paypal address wasn't being saved.

I'll bump the consulting up to 45 mins for all the hassle. Only for the first 10 though.

David-JP · 10-15-2008, 04:19 PM

Cool, working now- signed up

David

Kyle Tully · 10-16-2008, 04:17 AM

First round of critiques are done. Exporting the files now -- some of them went for over an hour -- look out for an email as soon as they're ready.

10-15-2008, 03:46 AM	#1
Kyle Tully ConsultingTycoon.com War Room Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Vaucluse, Australia. Posts: 2,343 Thanks: 98 Thanked 268 Times in 128 Posts Social Networking Contact Info	Weak Salesletters Wanted! Does Your Sales Copy NOT Sell? Want A Proven 6-Figure Copywriter To Show You Exactly What's Wrong and How You Can Quickly Fix It? If You Qualify for a COPY CRITIQUE, I Promise To Show You Dozens of Ways To Quickly and Easily BOOST Your Conversions... Increase Your Sales... and Maximize Your Profits... Even During The Recession! And I'll show how YOU can get RESULTS like... 4% response with cold traffic to hot salesletters. 6% response from a single email... for a $500 product! $25,000 slashed from a new business start-up. 1842% increase in sales from one simple website change. BUSINESS GROWTH: 30%... 50%... even 100% or more increase in YOUR bottom line in just weeks. Plus I'll Reveal... How to persuade with empathy, connection and resonance instead of hype. 2300 year old persuasion techniques WAY more powerful than anything your competitors have ever seen or used. Little-known sales killers that turn ready-to-buy prospects into quivering nervous wrecks who won't even take your FREE stuff! Why your layout and design might be the reason people leave your website so fast. The 3 most important parts of a salesletter -- one of them is your headline... but you might be surprised at the other two! And HEAPS more response-boosting tips, tactics, and underground techniques! And I'll give you... Headlines, Hooks & High-Converting Offers! Not only will I critique your salesletter, website, or ad and help you turn it into a cash-converting machine... but... I'll also give you SPECIFIC, ACTIONABLE, PERSONALIZED marketing tips, copy suggestions and strategic advice. I charge $500 an hour for this every day of the year, but you'll get it FREE. And if YOU are one of the first 10 Warriors... I'll give you 30 minutes consulting time FREE (a real $250 value!) to discuss your copy, your marketing, your business... anything you want. I'll hold nothing back and tell you what I REALLY think -- it might not be pretty but it's what YOU need to hear to achieve the results you want. So... How Do You Qualify? Actually there are 3 qualifications you must meet... 1. You MUST agree to implement my advice, test the results, and report back to me. I will not waste my time on lookyloos. Deals like this don't come around often and I only want serious people who will take action to take me up on this offer. 2. You MUST agree to give me full rights to the recordings. The reason I am offering such a low price on this WSO is because the recordings are to be part of a new membership site I am starting. You get a low price and I get content. It's WIN-WIN. 3. You MUST agree to fill out my 5-question survey. Before I can give a constructive critique I need to know who your market is, where the salesletter fits into the big picture, and other such things. Of course you're protected by my 100% value guarantee -- if you don't think you got value from my services then I DON"T WANT YOUR MONEY. Simple as that. If You Meet These Qualifications And Want To Finally Start Seeing The Results You Deserve... Click Here To Get Started Now

10-15-2008, 04:11 AM	#2
Kyle Tully ConsultingTycoon.com War Room Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Vaucluse, Australia. Posts: 2,343 Thanks: 98 Thanked 268 Times in 128 Posts Social Networking Contact Info	Re: Weak Salesletters Wanted! Question: How long will the critiques be? As long as they need to be! Depends on how long your copy is, how much is wrong with it, how many ways it can be improved... anywhere from 15 minutes up to 45 minutes or more. But I won't "pad" it to make it longer, if I can say something in one sentence then that's what you'll get. Question: What format will they be in? They're Camtasia videos in MOV format. I'll go over your salesletter line-by-line with you watching every step of the way.

10-15-2008, 06:31 AM	#3
Dennis Sim The Real Marketer War Room Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: Penang, Malaysia. Posts: 693 Thanks: 5 Thanked 4 Times in 3 Posts Contact Info	Re: Weak Salesletters Wanted! I'm not too sure whether I'm one of the lucky one to get free critique. But failed to process

10-15-2008, 06:49 AM	#4
Kyle Tully ConsultingTycoon.com War Room Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Vaucluse, Australia. Posts: 2,343 Thanks: 98 Thanked 268 Times in 128 Posts Social Networking Contact Info	Re: Weak Salesletters Wanted! Hi Allen I've automated as much of the process as possible. Click the link -- Click Here To Get Started Now -- then once you've paid via Paypal you'll be redirected to download the quick questionnaire. Should only take 2 minutes to complete. Then email it to me and I'll have your critique done asap -- usually within 24 hours but it depends on how many I'm currently working on. Dennis I'm not sure what you're saying, did you try and pay and it failed... or something else? Cheers Kyle

10-15-2008, 09:23 AM	#5
David-JP HyperActive Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Singapore Posts: 472 Thanks: 8 Thanked 27 Times in 23 Posts	Re: Weak Salesletters Wanted! Hi Kyle, Just tried to signup but getting a paypal error "there is a problem with the PayPal email address supplied by the seller" David

10-15-2008, 02:11 PM	#6
Global365 Advanced Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: CyberNexus Posts: 875 Thanks: 1 Thanked 123 Times in 101 Posts Contact Info	Re: Weak Salesletters Wanted! Hi Kyle, Here is Error in payment page: We cannot process this transaction because there is a problem with the PayPal email address supplied by the seller. Please contact the seller to resolve the problem. If this payment is for an eBay listing, you can contact the seller via the "Ask Seller a Question" link on the listing page. When you have the correct email address, payment can be made at www.paypal.com.

10-15-2008, 04:09 PM	#7
Kyle Tully ConsultingTycoon.com War Room Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Vaucluse, Australia. Posts: 2,343 Thanks: 98 Thanked 268 Times in 128 Posts Social Networking Contact Info	Re: Weak Salesletters Wanted! OK I've just played with the settings... should be ok now. For some reason my Paypal address wasn't being saved. I'll bump the consulting up to 45 mins for all the hassle. Only for the first 10 though.

10-15-2008, 04:19 PM	#8
David-JP HyperActive Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Singapore Posts: 472 Thanks: 8 Thanked 27 Times in 23 Posts	Re: Weak Salesletters Wanted! Cool, working now- signed up David

10-16-2008, 04:17 AM	#9
Kyle Tully ConsultingTycoon.com War Room Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Vaucluse, Australia. Posts: 2,343 Thanks: 98 Thanked 268 Times in 128 Posts Social Networking Contact Info	Re: Weak Salesletters Wanted! First round of critiques are done. Exporting the files now -- some of them went for over an hour -- look out for an email as soon as they're ready.