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| Senior Warrior Member War Room Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: central minnesota,USA.
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| “Discover the Amazing Secrets Behind NLP Copy that Makes Regular Sales Letters Look Like a Second Grader's Book Report!” If you want a salesletter that speaks to customers desires, gets practically no refunds, and sells itself regardless if you're working or not - than you're going to love what I've got in store for you! Dear Warriors, The regular copy written by your average marketers are decrepit and limp. The headlines are lame, the stories are snoozers, and most of them wouldn't have gotten even a check minus from my elementary school teacher. But that being said, I'm sure you'll agree:
I'll explain why that's true in just a minute, but first, I may be getting a little ahead of myself. For the new marketers who are just realizing how important a well crafted sales letter is, I'll quickly give you the run down on Neuro-Linguistic Programming (NLP). Neuro refers to your brain. Linguistic refers to language. And Programming, of course, refers to using a set of parameters to create a repeatable result. So Neuro-Linguistic Programming essentially means we're using the language of the brain to produce a desired action. In this case, buying your stuff. Not a bad thing when you're trying to set up a passive income stream, right? Who the Heck is This Guy Anyways?! You're totally right to ask that question. As you can see, my name is James Foster, and although I've been a member of the forum for over two years and have around 300 posts, I'm not really that active of a member. The fact is, I prefer to stay behind the scenes. I'm the type who gets more joy helping other people succeed. And as such, in my years of online and offline marketing I've worked with some fairly big marketers (sorry, no name dropping here) as affiliate manager, copywriter and marketing consultant... You don't get much more “man behind the curtain” than those jobs. In the past few months alone I've:
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How Can NLP Create Crazy High Conversions? There are literally too many ways for you to count, but let me give you a few examples of things I commonly do for clients. Value Elicitation – As in regular copywriting, research is paramount. We need to know not only what customers want in a product, but why they want the product in the first place. And knowing the right questions to ask is key. As an example, a colleague of mine (who is NOT certified in NLP) spoke with some people about why they wanted to make money online. The reason, they explained, was because they wanted to travel. My friend though “Eureka!” and off he ran to write the letter... When he showed me the finished piece I wasn't at all surprised. It was page after page about how people could go off and travel because they had this fabulous new internet business that was going to make them money with no work. As I'm sure you've guessed, the copy failed with a capital F. But the reason it tanked wasn't because my friend wrote a bad sales piece, but because he asked the wrong questions. It wasn't the travel people really wanted, but the FREEDOM to be able to travel. Big difference. Proper value elicitation would have kept this blunder from happening. Language Patterns – Frank Kern is great for this. There are lots of different patterns, but Kern is known for using one in particular (and using it extremely well). It's called a presupposition. If you dissect Frank's emails and videos carefully, you'll find presuppositions everywhere. He'll very skillfully explain things in such a way you assume what he's talking about is a true fact, and not just what he wants you to believe. I'm not going to call him out or pick apart his secrets here, but what I can say is – it's classic NLP. It worked for Frank Kern and it'll work for you. Open-ended Loops – This is great for getting people to continue reading. Remember at the beginning of this letter when I said “I'll explain why that's true in just a minute, but first...” Kept you reading this far didn't it? I think I've proven my point. Those are just a few of the ways NLP can subtly persuade your potential customers into seeing your point of view. But there is something else I feel obligated to point out... The Best Copy in the World is Useless Unless... Things like deliverability (getting the product to the customer), multiple traffic sources, backends and follow ups are properly planned. So before I write one stitch of copy for the business owners who jump on this offer, we're going to have a strategy session where your marketing plan is laid out in full. I only want to work with serious marketers, who have a serious plan. If that's not you – expect your investment to be returned and to start looking for a new copywriter. I'm sorry if that sounds harsh, but I'm not writing these sales letters for the money (you'll believe that when you see the price). I'm doing this to help the new wave of ground breaking, motivated, exciting fresh marketers get their foot in the door. It's time to break up the monopoly of power held by the old big name gurus who have been resting on their laurels for too long. Here's What You Get... The 5 warriors who understand how important quality NLP is to their online success, and act now, will receive: Piece 1) The Sales Letter (Value $3,000) - So steeped in covert persuasion techniques that customers will be drooling to get their hands on your product. And once they have it, will feel so harmoniously complete (because of the quality of product you produced) your refunds will practically be nill. Your life will be so care-free you'll almost forget where all the money in your PayPal account came from. Piece 2) My JV Recruitment Package (Value $97) – I said I only want to work with people who have a plan, but I understand you might not know how to completely implement that plan... yet. When the U.S. first decided to go to the moon we didn't have much of the technology we needed to get there – we had to invent it as we went. So, to help you achieve your online dreams, I'm going to share with you my proprietary JV recruitment information from when I was an affiliate manager. The only people who've seen ever seen this material are a select group of clients, and they've all been sworn to secrecy – as you'll be. Piece 3) Tell-All Backend Interview (Value $47) – When I sold out my original copywriting WSO back in March, I had several clients who didn't know how to capitalize on the momentum they had created with their initial product. I needed a way to help them make more with what they had. That's when I took all the questions these marketers had and turned it into an audio program that dove deep into the real ocean of online riches – the back end sale. You're going to learn about everything from OTO's to membership sites and when one will out-convert the other. To Sum It All Up... You're going to get a subliminal salesletter that could sell ice to an Eskimo, never before seen tips and tricks on how to recruit JV's and super affiliates, plus a tell-all audio on creating backend products - for the incredibly low price of $297.... all because I owe a huge debt of gratitude to Alan Says and the Warrior Forum. There is a catch though.... I haven't totally gone off my rocker. I know that my copywriting is worth $3,000 per letter. That's what I normally sell it for, not including the JV package and the Backend product audio program - my copywriting colleagues think I'm an idiot to sell myself for less; so I must limit the number of clients I take. It's the only way I can give back to the forum that's given me so much (this is where I got my start after all) and keep from devaluing my services while still being able to offer you and 4 other lucky warriors the opportunity you'll be glad you didn't miss. Click "Add to Cart" below to be one of 5 action taking warriors who will get a $3,000 sales letter (plus the other killer stuff) for the price of a cheap netbook. | |||||
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| Senior Warrior Member War Room Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: central minnesota,USA.
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Wow, Thanks for all the PM's. Everyone, you can send me PM's if you want, but feel free to comment in the thread itself... ***UPDATED 9/9/10*** PS - I just had my first child a mere 6 weeks ago, and to celebrate I'm reopening this WSO! I'll take on a couple warriors who want bad ass copy written for them, just so I have a little extra money to spoil my little girl with. |
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| Lovin' Life War Room Member Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: NY
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Sounds great, just can't afford it right now though. Congrats on your first baby, by the way and good luck with this!
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| Senior Warrior Member War Room Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: central minnesota,USA.
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Thanks LadyLioness, but that's a very common misconception. Copywriting isn't an expense, it's an investment. Your niche sites really wouldn't apply to this, since you're only offering a limited number (you're definitely not going to get rich making niche sites)... but most people want to make 10k + a month. And I'm sure you'll agree your chances of making copious amounts of cash without investing in your own assets - are close to zero. |
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| HyperActive Warrior Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: Chicago Suburb
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Hi, I would like to see samples but I cant PM yet. Congrats on your baby girl! |
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| Senior Warrior Member War Room Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: central minnesota,USA.
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No problem internetsweetie. I'll send you a pm with my email address. Send me an email and I'll shoot you over my samples.
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| HyperActive Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Jun 2010
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Congrats on the new arrival! Good luck with the WSO seems like a great deal!
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| Senior Warrior Member War Room Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: central minnesota,USA.
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Thanks Basil, normally I market my copywriting to local businesses, but since I just had a baby, I want to spend time at home instead of in meetings. It's one of the biggest reasons I wanted to offer such a good deal to fellow warriors.
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James, I'm interested, I'd love to see a sample. Please PM me. Thank you! Ren |
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Please send me a sample. Thank you!
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| Senior Warrior Member War Room Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: central minnesota,USA.
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To send you samples I need your email address... But I tell you what, I'll send you a PM with my email in it so you can reach me there. |
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