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| $1.33 MILLION Marketer War Room Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: King William's former royal hunting forest, Hampshire, England, UK
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| $1.33 MILLION Marketer War Room Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: King William's former royal hunting forest, Hampshire, England, UK
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Hi Guys and Gals, Someone has just PMd me to ask about the length of their sales letter. I will write just as long a sales letter as I need to cover all possible objections your prospects might have. It's been proved many times that "The more you tell - the more you sell". Why is that? Because there's a BIG PROBLEM with a sales letter that you don't get selling face to face. When selling face to face, you get reactions from your prospect and can tailor your sales pitch to them and what you sense are their "objections". With a sales page, you can't know what particular objections the (hopefully) thousands of readers will have - because they will all be different. So you have to cover ALL possible objections in your sales letter. And when you cover them all, the letter kinda gets pretty long... But, as I said at the start - long copy sells. Now you know why! Warmest regards, Paul |
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| DailyTradingSystem.com War Room Member Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: United Kingdom.
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Yup, that's why my sales pages have like 5,000 or so words. |
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Hi Loz, Thanks for your post. D'you know I've never counted the words on my sales pages. But I guess it must be around that number. A sales page can be as long as it needs to be - and not one word more. So, if in doubt, leave it out. And it must NEVER EVER be booooring. Warmest regards, Paul |
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| PLR A La Carter War Room Member Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Fort Macleod, Alberta, Canada.
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Just purchased. What a great deal! |
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| $1.33 MILLION Marketer War Room Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: King William's former royal hunting forest, Hampshire, England, UK
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Hi Tim, Thanks for the order and your kind post. Looks like I'll have another illustrious name to add to my list of delighted clients! Warmest regards, Paul |
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Paul I just sent you a PM, what do you think? :-) James |
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| $1.33 MILLION Marketer War Room Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: King William's former royal hunting forest, Hampshire, England, UK
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Hi James, Thanks for your post and your PM. It sounds good. I'll set out a proposal and PM you, shortly. Warmest regards, Paul |
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Hello there Paul. I just sent you a PM. Many thanks |
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| $1.33 MILLION Marketer War Room Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: King William's former royal hunting forest, Hampshire, England, UK
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Hi Jodjie, Thanks for your PM. I'm taking a look at the sites now and will then PM you. Warmest regards, Paul |
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| Advanced Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Jun 2008
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Paul, Just sent PM. Please read...Thanks. |
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| $1.33 MILLION Marketer War Room Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: King William's former royal hunting forest, Hampshire, England, UK
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Hi Abel, Reply to your PM sent! Warmest regards, Paul |
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| Senior Warrior Member War Room Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Canada
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Hey Paul, sent you a PM - you have any spots left?
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| $1.33 MILLION Marketer War Room Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: King William's former royal hunting forest, Hampshire, England, UK
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Hi Justin, Thanks for your post and your PM. One slot left and a PM is on its way to you, with the other details you requested. Warmest regards, Paul |
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| Senior Warrior Member War Room Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: , , USA.
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Hey, Bought it! Great offer. My new product is not ready yet so can I just keep this spot until I am ready? Pawel |
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| $1.33 MILLION Marketer War Room Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: King William's former royal hunting forest, Hampshire, England, UK
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Hi Pawel, Thanks for your PM and your order. Yes, that's fine. In the meantime, I'll e-mail you the link to the form that lists what I need to get started. That way you'll have it handy when you're ready to roll. Warmest regards, Paul |
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| $1.33 MILLION Marketer War Room Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: King William's former royal hunting forest, Hampshire, England, UK
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Hi Guys and Gals, Here's a unsolicited testimonial, just received from Alan Reece - a fellow Warrior, who has now received three sales letters from me over the last few months... Quote:
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Wow - this is too good to miss! Just sent payment. Simon |
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| $1.33 MILLION Marketer War Room Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: King William's former royal hunting forest, Hampshire, England, UK
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Hi Simon, Thanks for your order. I'm looking forward to getting the details of your project. Warmest regards, Paul P.S. UPDATE: Simon has now order a second sales letter. In fact, well over 50% of my business comes from clients who order more letters, once they've sampled the first. |
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| $1.33 MILLION Marketer War Room Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: King William's former royal hunting forest, Hampshire, England, UK
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| BREAKING NEWS>>> This email has just arrived from the latest lucky Warrior to grab this... "Paul, Thank you for the GREAT job you did on the sales letter! We are really thrilled!" Silvia and Darijan Gasevic http://800photoshopbrushesmegaset.com |
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| EVEN MORE BREAKING NEWS>>> Because here's what another delighted Warrior told me, when he received his sales letter... "Thanks a lot. Great work" Paul Reid |
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| $1.33 MILLION Marketer War Room Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: King William's former royal hunting forest, Hampshire, England, UK
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Yet ANOTHER letter delivered... and ANOTHER satisfied Warrior (in fact, so satisfied, I'm currently re-writing ANOTHER of his underperforming sales letters). FAR SUPERIOR TO THE PREVIOUS SALES LETTER "Hi Paul, Thanks so much for the salesletter! I've only just had a quick glance through it but I can already see it's far superior to the previous one - brilliant!" Simon Forsyth ADI Part 3. Learn EXACTLY What You Need To Pass! |
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| $1.33 MILLION Marketer War Room Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: King William's former royal hunting forest, Hampshire, England, UK
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Hi Guys and Gals, Another delighted Warrior client just emailed me this, with a request to write two more sales pages and other stuff... "Just read the sales letter etc and it's all excellent. I'm really happy with it and I look forward to getting it online." Warmest regards, Paul |
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| HyperActive Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: , , .
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Hey, Can you email me at zilmilinc at gmail.com ? Thanks! |
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| Active Warrior Join Date: May 2009 Location: Tasmania, Australia
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Paul, Where do you get your graphic design work done? It's top notch :-) Cheers, Nick |
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p.s. Great offer... if I had a product, I'd be all over it :-)
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| $1.33 MILLION Marketer War Room Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: King William's former royal hunting forest, Hampshire, England, UK
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Hi Nick, I do it myself. But I'm even better with words! Warmest regards, Paul |
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| $1.33 MILLION Marketer War Room Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: King William's former royal hunting forest, Hampshire, England, UK
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Hi Vedavyasmark, Nothing's arrived in my PM box under that name. Warmest regards, Paul |
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Hi Paul...I am interested...can you PM me please? Or you can email me at kathydobson22@gmail.com Thanks Paul... Kathy |
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Paul, I am a writer myself and like the way you write. Have sent you a PM. - Dean P.S. Just paid, look forward to hearing from you. |
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| $1.33 MILLION Marketer War Room Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: King William's former royal hunting forest, Hampshire, England, UK
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Hi Dean, Thanks for your order - and your kind compliment! I got your PM and have replied. Looking forward to working with you. Warmest regards, Paul |
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No worries! Guys I literally just STOLE atleast $5000... The heck are you waiting for!? - Dean |
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I think letter is just right, do you do writing for emails on autoresponders? Diego |
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Hi Diego, Thanks for your post and your kind words. Yes, I do create emails. Here is the WSO: Score Some MASSIVE PAYDAYS With Your Own Professionally Crafted White Hot Series Of Emails. There are just three slots left on that. Warmest regards, Paul |
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| $1.33 MILLION Marketer War Room Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: King William's former royal hunting forest, Hampshire, England, UK
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hirklins, That is NOT the way to post on this forum - or any forum. Any marketing - other than a paid for WSO - should be confined to the signature box at the bottom. I suggest you remove this post (and any others like it) before the moderators find it and ban you. Paul |
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Please PM your email address. Thanks.
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Hi riff999, Email address sent. Looking forward to hearing from you. Warmest regards, Paul |
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| HyperActive Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Sep 2010 Location: England
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Hi Paul, Are you still doing this service for Warrior members? I have been let down by the copywriter I was going to use but your copy seemed to be the exact thing I was looking for anyhow - maybe it was fate!! I can only offer the same price that I paid my original copywriter and I cannot sway from that price. If you are interested and have the time I'd love to hear your thoughts. My email is: robbishop1966@gmail.com. I look forward to hearing from you. Regards, Rob |
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I just got my letter and I was completely shocked by the high quality, action packed letter I recieved! I honestly couldn't be happier. I am a copywriter myself and I thought Paul's writing style was very unique, and hired him to do a project for me... A week or so later, Paul emails me a masterpiece! I'll be honest... I was stumped when it came to how exactly I should present my website. If you ask a copywriter - they're likely to tell you the same thing. Working on your own project is much harder than working on someone elses. I wasn't expecting Paul to take such a great angle and knock down all the objections I had already thought of, and more. What's even more suprising is that he was able to present my offer crystal clear even though in my own head it was more like the 0's and 1's from the matrix movie screen. Marketers, if you need a project done, Paul is your man. And I wouldn't let that price jump up anymore, so get in while there are positions available! Paul has my highest recommendations. Thanks again! - Dean Jackson |
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| Senior Warrior Member War Room Member Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Indianapolis, IN.
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Paul, Just sent you a PM. Look forward to hearing from you. Robert |
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Hi Robert, Thanks for your PM, which I've now answered. Warmest regards, Paul |
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| Senior Warrior Member War Room Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: United Kingdom, Spain
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Sounds very good. I've PMed you.
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I'm looking for someone to write copy form my landing page, and I really like your writing style. it's in the offline consulting niche, would this interest you? Also as I wouldn't require a long sales letter, would the price be the same as above? or could we work out a price for the project? Look forward to hearing from you. Bryan |
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Hi Bryan, Thanks for your post. I've just PMed you. Warmest regards, Paul |
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| HyperActive Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Sydney - AUSTRALIA.
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Hi Paul, I've just noticed in one of your earlier posts you were 're-writing' a members existing' under preforming sales letter. Besides writing sales letters from the ground up, do you also do re-writes? Thanks --Glen |
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HI Paul, I also have sent you a PM --Glen |
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Hi Glenn, Thanks for your two posts. Yes, I do find myself rewriting a lot of sales letters. Some have been created by the owners themselves, who then realize there is more to this copy writing lark than meets the eye. Unfortunately, about 66% of what I rewrite for Warriors has been written by other Warrior 'copywriters'. Warmest regards, Paul |
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Thanks Paul. Just ordered --Glen |
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Dear Paul, I am interested in your sales letter and 7-parts autoresponder writing service. Is there a special price if we buy two? Also, would you service work for an offline consulting business? Thanks John |
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Hi John, Thanks for your post. I've sent you a private message. Warmest regards, Paul |
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