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Complete that and sent it on to me, attaching the items requested (like the product - if it's digital) and I'll get back to you within 18 hours (probably a lot less) with any further questions. |
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Direct Response Wizard
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Hi Guys and Gals,
Someone has just PMd me to ask about the length of their sales letter. I will write just as long a sales letter as I need to cover all possible objections your prospects might have. It's been proved many times that "The more you tell - the more you sell". Why is that? Because there's a BIG PROBLEM with a sales letter that you don't get selling face to face. When selling face to face, you get reactions from your prospect and can tailor your sales pitch to them and what you sense are their "objections". With a sales page, you can't know what particular objections the (hopefully) thousands of readers will have - because they will all be different. So you have to cover ALL possible objections in your sales letter. And when you cover them all, the letter kinda gets pretty long... But, as I said at the start - long copy sells. Now you know why! Warmest regards, Paul |
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Yup, that's why my sales pages have like 5,000 or so words.
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All the best, Loz
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Direct Response Wizard
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Hi Loz,
Thanks for your post. D'you know I've never counted the words on my sales pages. But I guess it must be around that number. A sales page can be as long as it needs to be - and not one word more. So, if in doubt, leave it out. And it must NEVER EVER be booooring. Warmest regards, Paul |
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Just purchased.
What a great deal! |
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Direct Response Wizard
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Hi Tim,
Thanks for the order and your kind post. Looks like I'll have another illustrious name to add to my list of delighted clients! Warmest regards, Paul |
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Paul I just sent you a PM, what do you think? :-)
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Hi James,
Thanks for your post and your PM. It sounds good. I'll set out a proposal and PM you, shortly. Warmest regards, Paul |
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Hello there Paul. I just sent you a PM.
Many thanks |
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Direct Response Wizard
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Hi Jodjie,
Thanks for your PM. I'm taking a look at the sites now and will then PM you. Warmest regards, Paul |
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Want to make money on line? Then hire the same copywriter top gun marketers sneak in to "add the magic" to their sales letters, squeeze pages and autoresponder series:http://www.CopywritingSecretWeapon.com
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Paul,
Just sent PM. Please read...Thanks. |
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Direct Response Wizard
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Hi Abel,
Reply to your PM sent! Warmest regards, Paul |
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Hey Paul, sent you a PM - you have any spots left?
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Direct Response Wizard
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Hi Justin,
Thanks for your post and your PM. One slot left and a PM is on its way to you, with the other details you requested. Warmest regards, Paul |
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Want to make money on line? Then hire the same copywriter top gun marketers sneak in to "add the magic" to their sales letters, squeeze pages and autoresponder series:http://www.CopywritingSecretWeapon.com
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Hey,
Bought it! Great offer. My new product is not ready yet so can I just keep this spot until I am ready? Pawel |
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Hi Pawel,
Thanks for your PM and your order. Yes, that's fine. In the meantime, I'll e-mail you the link to the form that lists what I need to get started. That way you'll have it handy when you're ready to roll. Warmest regards, Paul |
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Hi Guys and Gals,
Here's a unsolicited testimonial, just received from Alan Reece - a fellow Warrior, who has now received three sales letters from me over the last few months... Quote:
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Wow - this is too good to miss! Just sent payment.
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Hi Simon,
Thanks for your order. I'm looking forward to getting the details of your project. Warmest regards, Paul P.S. UPDATE: Simon has now order a second sales letter. In fact, well over 50% of my business comes from clients who order more letters, once they've sampled the first. |
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Direct Response Wizard
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BREAKING NEWS>>>
This email has just arrived from the latest lucky Warrior to grab this... "Paul, Thank you for the GREAT job you did on the sales letter! We are really thrilled!" Silvia and Darijan Gasevic http://800photoshopbrushesmegaset.com |
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EVEN MORE BREAKING NEWS>>>
Because here's what another delighted Warrior told me, when he received his sales letter... "Thanks a lot. Great work" Paul Reid |
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Want to make money on line? Then hire the same copywriter top gun marketers sneak in to "add the magic" to their sales letters, squeeze pages and autoresponder series:http://www.CopywritingSecretWeapon.com
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Direct Response Wizard
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Yet ANOTHER letter delivered... and ANOTHER satisfied Warrior (in fact, so satisfied, I'm currently re-writing ANOTHER of his underperforming sales letters).
FAR SUPERIOR TO THE PREVIOUS SALES LETTER "Hi Paul, Thanks so much for the salesletter! I've only just had a quick glance through it but I can already see it's far superior to the previous one - brilliant!" Simon Forsyth ADI Part 3. Learn EXACTLY What You Need To Pass! |
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Direct Response Wizard
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Hi Guys and Gals,
Another delighted Warrior client just emailed me this, with a request to write two more sales pages and other stuff... "Just read the sales letter etc and it's all excellent. I'm really happy with it and I look forward to getting it online." Warmest regards, Paul |
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Want to make money on line? Then hire the same copywriter top gun marketers sneak in to "add the magic" to their sales letters, squeeze pages and autoresponder series:http://www.CopywritingSecretWeapon.com
(Psst... but Warriors can sometimes get a MASSIVE DISCOUNT ) |
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