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Old 12-22-2008, 07:15 PM   #1
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Default INCREDIBLE Copy Deal, Simply Cause I'm Bored - TAKE ADVANTAGE WHILE YOU CAN!

Your Copy IS Awful!

Alright so maybe your copy isn't awful, but I'm willing to bet all the money I make in a year it can be better!

I will keep this simple and to the point, and trust me you're gonna wanna keep reading.

Everyone is gone for the holidays, and unfortunately for a work-a-holic like me that's HORRIBLE I Am Incredibly Bored!

So I have decided that for the next week or so, possibly longer, I am going to Improve Your Copy! Not only that but I am going to do it for a ridiculously low price.

Now before I tell you how i'm exactly going to do that i'm sure you're wondering what makes me qualified to do this.

I've Written for lots of very high converting products; for example:
The Retired Millionaire
New Age Millions
Project G Formula
Many squeeze pages for random clients
Etc.

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Here are some clickbank results showing the hoplink conversion

http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/6308/proof1cv2.gif

Now That's Between 1/25 & 1/35 Hops conversion between just those two products, and that's with over promoted JV traffic! (not that high quality of traffic)
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Without trying to put myself too high up on any sort of "copywriting pedestal", I will say I read A LOT about copy, and am VERY KNOWLEDGEABLE in what works and what doesn't in the internet world simply from experience and practice!

So over the next week, during the holiday season I am going to be insanely bored, so if you help me by giving me something to do I will help you in return!

This Is What I'm Offering

Tell me the product copy you want improved, I will then either change the text myself and send it to you, or I can simply give you a list of what to change and what to change it to (it's your decision), heck even if I feel some of the images are hurting your copy I can spruce em up for ya.

And I will do this for somewhere in between:
$20 - $50!

This obviously will depend on the size of the copy, if it's a squeeze page I will obviously charge $20 where as a 15-20 page copy will be more towards $50.

There are only three more things that I need to cover:

1. I WILL INCREASE YOUR CONVERSIONS!

2. I Guarantee It! If You aren't happy with the changes I do/tell you to make you have two options, you can either have a FULL REFUND! or I will try and change it again to your liking!

3. The turn-around on my work will be crazy fast, so if you wanna use my boredom to make you money then please do it!

Now warriors i'm not kidding when I say I charge 1 - 2 grand for sales copy work generally! I truly am doing this because I need something to do for the next week until I can go back to normal work when the new year hits!

So if your intersted you need to PM me NOW!

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And remember I am NOT writing you complete new copy, I am simply making your already existent page convert better, 100% Guaranteed, and for a very cheap price!
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Old 12-23-2008, 10:48 PM   #2
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Default Re: INCREDIBLE Copy Deal, Simply Cause I'm Bored - TAKE ADVANTAGE WHILE YOU CAN!

This is absolutely insane deal!

Btw, what niche are you cover in?
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Old 12-23-2008, 11:09 PM   #3
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Default Re: INCREDIBLE Copy Deal, Simply Cause I'm Bored - TAKE ADVANTAGE WHILE YOU CAN!

I have just make the following payment to you:

Transaction ID: 58S39164FJ3216813
Item Price: $25.00 USD
Total: $25.00 USD
Order Description: Copy for steveniam

Please give me a good copy so that my conversion rate will shoot up to the sky as a Christmas present for me.
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Old 12-24-2008, 06:08 PM   #4
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Default Re: INCREDIBLE Copy Deal, Simply Cause I'm Bored - TAKE ADVANTAGE WHILE YOU CAN!

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Originally Posted by Mantero Cantrow View Post
This is absolutely insane deal!

Btw, what niche are you cover in?
If you mean what niche can I write for? Pretty much anything, in the time this WSO has been up ive done weight loss, blogging products, marketing review page, etc.
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Default Re: INCREDIBLE Copy Deal, Simply Cause I'm Bored - TAKE ADVANTAGE WHILE YOU CAN!

Recieved my first order. Looks great. It's got to improve conversions. Is your offer still open? I've got another site I'd like you to do if so, send payment link again.

Thanks!
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Old 03-04-2009, 06:23 PM   #6
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Default Re: INCREDIBLE Copy Deal, Simply Cause I'm Bored - TAKE ADVANTAGE WHILE YOU CAN!

Hey guys,

If you've got a sales letter, whether it's making sales or not, this is a great offer that is well worth the small investment.

Destin knows sales copy, and just one or two things he points out can make a big different to your conversion rate an overall sales - and at the price of this WSO, in most cases it just takes one extra sale to cover the critique and anything else is pure profit.

Besides giving me a great critique, Destin is one of the more generous Warrior's I've met.

I'd recommend grabbing this offer while it's still available so you can take full advantage of your traffic.

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Old 03-04-2009, 09:55 PM   #7
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I just wanted to stop by and let anyone know that the quality of work that Destin provides i top notch. The price is great and the turn around time is fast. Don't miss out on this one.

Thanks again Destin,

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