Mark Kaye's MASSIVE TRAFFIC SYSTEM! Promote Your Site FREE on Radio! Read the UNBELIEVABLE Reviews!

MarketingSPY · 12-10-2009, 01:47 AM

Mark -
First let me say, I think you're a very talented guy!

Sometimes in "Copy" writing you must illustrate in words the "pain" people are in (no matter what is sold) then show them how to heal the pain. Make sense? Most people are in pain or they want to solve a problem. Remind them of the pain they are in and the healing factor your product provides.

This might sound corny. But I learned this anology from a very well known copywriter. It works. Try it. Also, I agree with a few others about the Optin section and you may want to be careful with the testimonials (new FTC rules).

That's all for me.

Mark Kaye · 12-13-2009, 07:54 PM

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Originally Posted by redicelander

This is awesome and I would love to do this..., I think I may buy it sometime but not now, how long will you keep this up?

This offer will be closing soon. I am running a new offer on:

Thursday, December 17th, 2009 and will CLOSE this offer at that time.

If you want it, get it now!!!

12-10-2009, 01:47 AM	#51
MarketingSPY TheGuruSPY.com War Room Member Join Date: Nov 2009 Posts: 131 Thanks: 0 Thanked 12 Times in 12 Posts	Re: Reach MILLIONS of Buyers FREE! Promote Your Product On Radio & TV! Read the UNBELIEVABLE Reviews Mark - First let me say, I think you're a very talented guy! Sometimes in "Copy" writing you must illustrate in words the "pain" people are in (no matter what is sold) then show them how to heal the pain. Make sense? Most people are in pain or they want to solve a problem. Remind them of the pain they are in and the healing factor your product provides. This might sound corny. But I learned this anology from a very well known copywriter. It works. Try it. Also, I agree with a few others about the Optin section and you may want to be careful with the testimonials (new FTC rules). That's all for me.