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| TheGuruSPY.com War Room Member Join Date: Nov 2009
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Mark - First let me say, I think you're a very talented guy! Sometimes in "Copy" writing you must illustrate in words the "pain" people are in (no matter what is sold) then show them how to heal the pain. Make sense? Most people are in pain or they want to solve a problem. Remind them of the pain they are in and the healing factor your product provides. This might sound corny. But I learned this anology from a very well known copywriter. It works. Try it. Also, I agree with a few others about the Optin section and you may want to be careful with the testimonials (new FTC rules). That's all for me. |
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