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| Active Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: Canton, Ohio
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| Is It True You Can Write Compelling Copy Without Using Sleazy - Manipulating Tactics? You Bet You Can... Hey Guys, Joni here... You know, I keep hearing the same thing over and over again and you probably have also; "I’m so sick and tired of reading sales copy that is so infested with nothing other than hype! It’s all B.S.” I have read some of the comments here in the forum and they are very telling. Seems like we’re all craving a different approach for the most part... one that’s credible and honest. But the sad thing is; all of us still chime in and buy a product or service, based on that very reason. "Hype.” Unfortunately, it plays into our DNA. We all want something exciting - sexy and cool. It makes us feel so good. You know...instant gratification or so we think. However, once that “feeling” wears off - what are we left with? Excuses... Excuses of why the product didn’t work. After reading such a hyped-filled piece of sales copy, our expectations are so high that when it's time to actually apply what was taught we can't believe it... Really? “I thought I didn’t have to do much...it was suppose to be push-button and cash would start flowing in instantly!” Sound familiar? Now...it’s not looking so sexy is it? I’ve gotten sucked in too many times and maybe now I just want to change the world or something, I’m not sure. Hell, maybe it’s my age. But what I look for now in copy is honesty - integrity - credibility and real solutions to whatever I need help with... With that being said, I want to offer you guys an alternative...something fresh. I feel it’s time to stop making our prospects feel like they’ve been taken on a wild ride and can’t get off... You know and I know consumers are not stupid. Our potential customers have so many options too choose from today that basically, they’re catching onto these sleazy tactics. Just like we are. Now I know that many, many copywriters and Internet marketers totally disagree with what I’m saying here and that’s fine. All I can say is keep pumping out your style of writing if it’s working for you. But here’s the interesting thing; I’ve had great success on oDesk writing for a number of clients...but - with “mixed” reactions in regards to writing “hype.” Clients have asked me to re-write “hype-filled” sales letters after they’ve seen my style, while one other client commented that my style wasn’t “hypey” enough. "It doesn’t look like all the rest..." Go figure... Believe it or not, consumers are starting to pay attention... So if you’re curious about where I’m coming from, check out this Free 11- page report, “Persuasion Power Secrets, The Building Blocks For Writing Persuasive Copy Without The Hype” now to find out how to start applying something different in your copy. ![]() . |
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| SocialVani Join Date: Dec 2011 Location: India
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Hey, got the second WSO too. Will read it soon. I am sure it will be as wonderful as the first one |
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| LocalSocialReputation Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: Cape Town, South Africa
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Hey Joni Its the hype that does all the selling. I agree with you that most copy is the same. All claiming to cure cancer if you know what I mean. |
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