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Valentine · 04-26-2009, 01:47 PM

This wso is closed, because I'm planning a relaunch.

Jeff Henshaw · 04-26-2009, 08:51 PM

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Ah. You also get your traditional 100% Satisfaction Guarantee. First you will have one revision and if you still wouldn't like it I will refund you straight away.

It's usual to offer two or three revisions, rather than one.

In case I missed the link in your offer, I would like to see examples of your work. Could you please post a link to your portfolio. Again, sorry if it was posted and I missed it.

Regards,
Jeff.

abo28 · 04-26-2009, 11:02 PM

Hmm. I'm not a copywriter pro, but I know a few things about it. Here's my opinion...

Your salesletter doesn't have a headline that feature a strong benefit for your prospects. Starting a sales text with "hello... I am... my background is..." is not the happiest solution possible.

So:

* start with a benefit (in your headline)
* go on with 2-3 more benefits (in the opening paragraphs)
* then tell waht you have to offer, exactly (the features)
* at the end, restate your main benefit and put a strong call to action

Another suggestion: break your text with 2-3 subheads. It's easier to read this way.

Hope it helps...

Kevin Lam · 04-27-2009, 12:49 AM

Valentine, you can say as much and as little as you want, but your kind of WSO needs to include examples of your work. Your designs/graphics will speak for themselves. Once they see that, THEN they'll go looking for what they can get and for how much. So even if you scaled down to half of the text you have up, as long as you have what I said, you'll be alright.

And yeah, have at least 3 revisions or unlimited revisions. However, if you're going past 3, you're doing something wrong not the client. I'm not saying the client is always right, but you need to ask and see what the client wants first and then bring it to life with your skills. If they're unsatisfied and constantly need revisions, it means you are not communicate well or not interpreting his ideas good enough. Just a thought.

Valentine · 04-27-2009, 05:59 AM

Thanks everyone for your kind comments!

I've edited my offer, now you will have 3 free revisions and also I've added some samples. Those samples are not minisites, but you still will see the quality of design and graphics.

Regards,
Valentin Sptitsyn

Kevin Lam · 05-01-2009, 05:17 PM

Wow, that's some very impressive work. I hope people recognize your talent and book you asap.

bhuff85 · 05-01-2009, 09:11 PM

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Originally Posted by Valentine

If you like what you see, you will also like the price. Only for Warrior Forum and it's members I offer 5 custom minisites for 50% discount, and leave you at a RAW PRICE of $95 for a standard package

Let me know if I'm reading this right (and I may be wrong), but from the looks of it, you're offering 5 mini-site designs for just $95?

If that's not right, what is the price for a mini-site? If you ARE doing 5 mini-site designs for $95, I'm definitely in!

Valentine · 05-01-2009, 09:40 PM

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Originally Posted by trippmarxx

Let me know if I'm reading this right (and I may be wrong), but from the looks of it, you're offering 5 mini-site designs for just $95?

If that's not right, what is the price for a mini-site?

Whops

My bad.

The price is $95 for one mini-site package, but I only take 5 orders.

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Originally Posted by trippmarxx

If you ARE doing 5 mini-site designs for $95, I'm definitely in!

How about 240 for two?

bhuff85 · 05-01-2009, 10:28 PM

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Originally Posted by Valentine

Whops

My bad.

The price is $95 for one mini-site package, but I only take 5 orders.

How about 240 for two?

$240 for two? Or did you mean $140? It should only be $190 for two (at $95 per mini-site, anyway).

Kevin Lam · 05-01-2009, 11:34 PM

He means $190 for 2 ($95 per mini-site design). I don't know why he said $250.

Didier Faucher · 05-02-2009, 02:02 AM

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Originally Posted by Kevin Lam

He means $190 for 2 ($95 per mini-site design). I don't know why he said $250.

He never said $250 either.

Thank you for the laugh. This thread is amazing.

Good luck with your offer Valentin. Nice work.

Didier

Kevin Lam · 05-02-2009, 10:19 AM

Hahaha, we ALL need to sleep more often! Valentine is obviously not the only one losing his mind. It's my birthday so I'm gonna go relax, folks!

Valentine · 05-02-2009, 04:23 PM

OK, seems like we have a bit of misunderstanding here.

This WSO has only 5 places for a $95 standard mini-site package. Each place is reserved for a different person.

Every other order is $189 per standard mini-site package. So feel free to grab your 50% discount copy.

Valentine · 05-02-2009, 04:28 PM

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Originally Posted by Kevin Lam

Hahaha, we ALL need to sleep more often! Valentine is obviously not the only one losing his mind. It's my birthday so I'm gonna go relax, folks!

Happy Birthday Kevin!

Wish you health, love, wealth .. and the rest you'll buy

04-26-2009, 01:47 PM	#1
Valentine Active Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Helsinki/Finland Posts: 79 Thanks: 20 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Contact Info	Closed This wso is closed, because I'm planning a relaunch.

04-26-2009, 11:02 PM	#3
abo28 Bogdan Anastasiei War Room Member Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Romania Posts: 245 Thanks: 249 Thanked 19 Times in 15 Posts Social Networking Contact Info	Re: Minisite Design AT HUGE DISCOUNT, Only 5 Offers Available Hmm. I'm not a copywriter pro, but I know a few things about it. Here's my opinion... Your salesletter doesn't have a headline that feature a strong benefit for your prospects. Starting a sales text with "hello... I am... my background is..." is not the happiest solution possible. So: * start with a benefit (in your headline) * go on with 2-3 more benefits (in the opening paragraphs) * then tell waht you have to offer, exactly (the features) * at the end, restate your main benefit and put a strong call to action Another suggestion: break your text with 2-3 subheads. It's easier to read this way. Hope it helps...
	Last edited by abo28; 04-26-2009 at 11:03 PM. Reason: spelling errors... oops

04-27-2009, 12:49 AM	#4
Kevin Lam Dare To Dream War Room Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 986 Blog Entries: 2 Thanks: 179 Thanked 229 Times in 154 Posts	Re: Minisite Design AT HUGE DISCOUNT, Only 5 Offers Available Valentine, you can say as much and as little as you want, but your kind of WSO needs to include examples of your work. Your designs/graphics will speak for themselves. Once they see that, THEN they'll go looking for what they can get and for how much. So even if you scaled down to half of the text you have up, as long as you have what I said, you'll be alright. And yeah, have at least 3 revisions or unlimited revisions. However, if you're going past 3, you're doing something wrong not the client. I'm not saying the client is always right, but you need to ask and see what the client wants first and then bring it to life with your skills. If they're unsatisfied and constantly need revisions, it means you are not communicate well or not interpreting his ideas good enough. Just a thought.

04-27-2009, 05:59 AM	#5
Valentine Active Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Helsinki/Finland Posts: 79 Thanks: 20 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Contact Info	Re: Minisite Design AT HUGE DISCOUNT, Only 5 Offers Available Thanks everyone for your kind comments! I've edited my offer, now you will have 3 free revisions and also I've added some samples. Those samples are not minisites, but you still will see the quality of design and graphics. Regards, Valentin Sptitsyn

05-01-2009, 05:17 PM	#6
Kevin Lam Dare To Dream War Room Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 986 Blog Entries: 2 Thanks: 179 Thanked 229 Times in 154 Posts	Re: $189 Custom Minisite Design. AT 50% DISCOUNT !! Only 5 Offers Available. Order Yours Now. Wow, that's some very impressive work. I hope people recognize your talent and book you asap.

05-01-2009, 11:34 PM	#10
Kevin Lam Dare To Dream War Room Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 986 Blog Entries: 2 Thanks: 179 Thanked 229 Times in 154 Posts	Re: Professional Quality Mini-site Design - Graphics That SELL! He means $190 for 2 ($95 per mini-site design). I don't know why he said $250.

05-02-2009, 10:19 AM	#12
Kevin Lam Dare To Dream War Room Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 986 Blog Entries: 2 Thanks: 179 Thanked 229 Times in 154 Posts	Re: Professional Quality Mini-site Design - Graphics That SELL! Hahaha, we ALL need to sleep more often! Valentine is obviously not the only one losing his mind. It's my birthday so I'm gonna go relax, folks!

05-02-2009, 04:23 PM	#13
Valentine Active Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Helsinki/Finland Posts: 79 Thanks: 20 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Contact Info	Re: Professional Quality Mini-site Design - Graphics That SELL! OK, seems like we have a bit of misunderstanding here. This WSO has only 5 places for a $95 standard mini-site package. Each place is reserved for a different person. Every other order is $189 per standard mini-site package. So feel free to grab your 50% discount copy.