Increase Your Sales By This Weekend or Double Your Money Back

TimCastleman · 05-26-2009, 11:33 AM

Your time is valuable so I’ll keep this brief.

Maybe your sales copy isn’t converting at the rate you think it should.

Maybe you haven’t made a sale online in so long you are putting your family up for sale on ebay.

Or maybe you just want a fresh set of eyes on your sales copy before a big launch or to start bringing in more sales.

Whatever the case may be, I can help you with a sales letter video critique.

What’s a sales letter video critique?

It’s where I sit down and go over your copy line by line on video.

I’ll give you suggestions on how to improve your copy, the offer, the pricing, and several other key areas that might be prohibiting you from early retirement.

You’ll get a copy of the sales letter critique video, an MP3 for you to listen to and any and all resources I have for you to improve your sales.

Am I going to be the first one doing this?

No. I’ve done over a dozen of these video sales letter critiques. In fact here is what some people have said about them:

You must be totally out of your mind to do this kind of review for this price! I mean it! It was very well done! You took your time and went in depth. You really wanted to help with your review and yes you did.

Thanks a ton man!

Guys if you need review of your sales page jump on it, you'll be glad you did.

-Magic
get-a-girlfriend.org

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Hello Tim,

I just want to write and tell you thank you!

Your detailed copy review was awesome... I really appreciate how you go into detail and leave nothing out.

I learned so much just from your review on how to increase the conversion and to make it flow smoother and read better

Feel free to have anyone considering your service shoot me an email and I will highly recommend your service..

Again thank you so much!

Dennis Cheesman

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Very cool.

The critique was very cool, in fact your obviously a copywriting genius.

Basiccally I listended attentively the whole way through, didn't let any of it fly over the top of my head as I was very interested in receiving a critique.

It's confusing to say the least, but if you listen to it yourself very carefully, and take it all in, at the end you'll feel like you want to create more products and hire Tim Castleman to copywrite them :-)
Intrepreneur

So what is the going rate for a copywriting genius?

Here’s the part where I tell you what a great deal you’re going to get. Because you are.

Normally copywriters range from several hundred to several thousand dollars to do one of these.

Worst of all once you get them to review your site and they get paid they fall off the face of the earth.

Not me.

Here is what you’re going to get from me:

1. A video critique of your sales letter complete with suggestions on the copy, the design, the structure, the pricing, and so much more.

2. An MP3 of the same critique so you can play it back on your computer, MP3 player, etc

3. A resource guide with any sites that I think might help you improve or track your copy

4. My personal and private email address to ask any follow up questions you might have.

Enough already.

I am launching this to the public next month for $47 per sales letter. But as a Warrior special it is all yours for just $27. Since this is a warrior special I am only offering it to the first 10 people who purchase.

One more thing

I stand behind my work. If you don’t like it, you don’t pay. If you don’t think that I give you enough ideas to improve your sales copy – I’ll return your money.

Better yet – if you use my suggestions and don’t see a noticeable improvement I’ll give you double your money back - guaranteed.

So there you have it. If you’re serious about your dreams and want your sale copy to sparkle hit the button below and lets get started.

Tim Castleman
Copywriting Genius :-)

UndeniableSpirit · 08-01-2009, 01:45 PM

Just sent a PM :-)

05-26-2009, 11:33 AM	#1
TimCastleman Banned War Room Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 803 Blog Entries: 34 Thanks: 13 Thanked 162 Times in 95 Posts	Increase Your Sales By This Weekend or Double Your Money Back - Guaranteed Your time is valuable so I’ll keep this brief. Maybe your sales copy isn’t converting at the rate you think it should. Maybe you haven’t made a sale online in so long you are putting your family up for sale on ebay. Or maybe you just want a fresh set of eyes on your sales copy before a big launch or to start bringing in more sales. Whatever the case may be, I can help you with a sales letter video critique. What’s a sales letter video critique? It’s where I sit down and go over your copy line by line on video. I’ll give you suggestions on how to improve your copy, the offer, the pricing, and several other key areas that might be prohibiting you from early retirement. You’ll get a copy of the sales letter critique video, an MP3 for you to listen to and any and all resources I have for you to improve your sales. Am I going to be the first one doing this? No. I’ve done over a dozen of these video sales letter critiques. In fact here is what some people have said about them: You must be totally out of your mind to do this kind of review for this price! I mean it! It was very well done! You took your time and went in depth. You really wanted to help with your review and yes you did. Thanks a ton man! Guys if you need review of your sales page jump on it, you'll be glad you did. -Magic get-a-girlfriend.org ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Hello Tim, I just want to write and tell you thank you! Your detailed copy review was awesome... I really appreciate how you go into detail and leave nothing out. I learned so much just from your review on how to increase the conversion and to make it flow smoother and read better Feel free to have anyone considering your service shoot me an email and I will highly recommend your service.. Again thank you so much! Dennis Cheesman ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Very cool. The critique was very cool, in fact your obviously a copywriting genius. Basiccally I listended attentively the whole way through, didn't let any of it fly over the top of my head as I was very interested in receiving a critique. It's confusing to say the least, but if you listen to it yourself very carefully, and take it all in, at the end you'll feel like you want to create more products and hire Tim Castleman to copywrite them :-) Intrepreneur So what is the going rate for a copywriting genius? Here’s the part where I tell you what a great deal you’re going to get. Because you are. Normally copywriters range from several hundred to several thousand dollars to do one of these. Worst of all once you get them to review your site and they get paid they fall off the face of the earth. Not me. Here is what you’re going to get from me: 1. A video critique of your sales letter complete with suggestions on the copy, the design, the structure, the pricing, and so much more. 2. An MP3 of the same critique so you can play it back on your computer, MP3 player, etc 3. A resource guide with any sites that I think might help you improve or track your copy 4. My personal and private email address to ask any follow up questions you might have. Enough already. I am launching this to the public next month for $47 per sales letter. But as a Warrior special it is all yours for just $27. Since this is a warrior special I am only offering it to the first 10 people who purchase. One more thing I stand behind my work. If you don’t like it, you don’t pay. If you don’t think that I give you enough ideas to improve your sales copy – I’ll return your money. Better yet – if you use my suggestions and don’t see a noticeable improvement I’ll give you double your money back - guaranteed. So there you have it. If you’re serious about your dreams and want your sale copy to sparkle hit the button below and lets get started. Tim Castleman Copywriting Genius :-)

08-01-2009, 01:45 PM	#2
UndeniableSpirit HyperActive Warrior Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 106 Thanks: 5 Thanked 3 Times in 2 Posts	Re: Increase Your Sales By This Weekend or Double Your Money Back - Guaranteed Just sent a PM :-)