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| A tale of international living gone bad ... Story of an Offshore Corporation, a Hardworking Filipina and Your Online Success!" I'm Giving Away 10 CopyWriting Packages At Deep Discount! Read on ... ================================================== ========== Dude, that copy rocks! Extremely well done. Hot Damn! Thank you! - Brian McElroy - ================================================== ========== Dear Friend, The information found on this page is of a very personal nature and intended to be shared only with my closest friends, associates and business partners. I know you value your time so let's cut the hype and just get straight to the point. For months I have been putting a lot of efforts into creating the ultimate mobile lifestyle... When I finally felt ready and with the cold canadian winter approaching fast, I decided it was time to make the leap and go spend some time where the sun always shine, the Philippines. So far, it sounds like the dream come true, doesn't it ? FAST FORWARD - Crash Landing Back Into Reality April 2nd, 2009. I'm flying back to Montreal, after 6 months of lifechanging experiences in the Philippines. My return was greeted by many and I received a warm welcome by my family. AND AN URGENCY MEETING WITH MY ACCOUNTANT. To make a long story short, my papers where a disaster. My book-keeping like the scribblings of the great pyramids - without a Rosetta Stone to shed light on their secrets. And I'm not even going to discuss the whole tax issue. Following his advice, I started moving everything under the umbrella of an Offshore Corporation, a wise decision he said, that would help me sleep better at night. June 2nd, 2009. After two months of playing the waiting game and exchanging communications with the bureaucracy, the whole shift under a corporation is still in Limbo. Once again following the advice of my accountant, most of my projects and business dealings are on hold until the corporation can operate properly. But what about Lisa? Lisa is your typical hardworking Filipina. You see, 3 weeks before my departure from the Philippines I had taken a new copywriting assistant and began her training, planning to take her on full time once I was satisfied with her understanding of the Art. By now, I am 100% confident in her skills and her ability to write profit-pulling sales letters BUT!!! I can't give here any work until I am clear to resume business, which puts us both in a bad position. If I can't give her work, she can't get paid and finding jobs even for qualified young adults is a challenge in this economy where even the call centers who used to promise good work conditions are under the shadow of the recession. And if I can't give her work, I'm losing an important member of my team and forced to let go of all the time I've spent coaching and teaching her my copywriting secrets. So in the spirit of turning lemons into lemonade... I'm not Only Giving You a Madman's CopyWriting Deal, I'm Adding so Many Bribes it Would Make the Scrooge Go Completely Berzerk! If you are not yet familiar with my services, I have gone from copywriting ZERO to charging over $1,470 just to get me to listen to your idea, within less than 6 months. The people in my books are happy to pay that and much more for only one reason - My copy converts. Now I don't have the time to take you by the hand and repeat the usual benefits of having a professionally written sales copy, bla bla bla, yadda yadda yadda .... Instead, let me tell you about this idea... A Complete Sales Letter Package: Professionally written by my assistant and then reviewed by me, your copy will convert - period. You will receive your copy along with 3 bonus headlines to split test within 14 days from receipt of your project details and specifications. A Matching Complimentary Minisite Design: Because I also specialize in minisite and promotional tool design, and because I truly want to over-deliver, I have decided to include a FREE Minisite and Product Design with 3 Promotional Banners to every order - A $197 Bribe A Free Consultation By E-mail: Because sometimes an hypnotic copy and sizzling design is not enough - we will together help define your marketing strategy, sales angle and create a true "too good to believe" irresistible offer that will make your visitors feeling guilty for not giving you more - That's another $147 bribe right there. If you're still reading at that point, it's no use telling you that you'd be crazy to pass on this offer. Please don't - I'm already crazy enough for putting that deal together, the world doesn't need any more wackos. Seriously. In bold, straight letters: This package is yours today for only $147. That's it. No gimmicks. No marketing ploys. But I don't want to sound like an hypocrite either, so let me put my cards on the table. So here's what's going to happen after you place your order today: Step 1: I will personally contact you to inquire about your project, product or service and provide you with a free consultation to ensure that your launch is a success. Step 2: ALL SUBMISSIONS WILL BE SENT TO LISA, my Copywriting Assistant. Step 3: My design slave will draw up the perfect Minisite Promotion Kit, helping you build your brand, reinforce your message and pull in more sales. Step 4: I will finecomb every piece of your Sales Letter Package and make sure everything is high-grade marketing that is guaranteed to work for you. Step 5: You profit and hit me up if you ever need more assistance. I'm feeling confident about making this offer because I k-n-o-w that Lisa's got everything it takes to write converting sales copy for training her myself. And remember, I usually charge 10 times that amount just to gain access to my schedule book. ================================================== ========== Dude!!! These are definitely not good... ...they're absolutely AMAZING. I mean I was yelling at my computer. I gotta put you on speed dial! Fantastic work. - Rob "The Genie" Toth - ================================================== ========== Be warned that this offer is not for everyone. If you're looking for the TOP QUALITY, MILLION PULLING, BIG DOGS copywriting... you're barking at the wrong tree. On the other hand, you'll want to jump right in if you are: 1. An internet marketing newbie. 2. An experienced marketer succeeding with accessible products. 3. A PLR creator or collector in need of a new face for your products. Because you want your next launch to be a success but can't afford to take a second home morgage just to make your first sale... No worries, the sales copy you will receive is professionally crafted to attract your visitor's attention and convert into sales. No jedi-mind tricks or sneaky voodoo tricks involved. Just the barebone that sells. What are you waiting for? Hurry up before it's too late! I would have never thought I'd share my new copywriting secret-weapon with anyone, but my misadventure is your gain! I will only be taking 10 new clients at this rate - just what I need to get Lisa busy for a while and ensure a steady cashflow for her and stay afloat until she resumes work on my own personal projects. And not one more. I expect these to sell out extremely fast ... Looking forward to working with you, ![]() P.S: Remember, not only you are getting a steep discount on my regular rate, you are also getting over $300 in FREE bribes that are guaranteed to help boost your conversion even more- my way of saying thank you for helping me out of that bind. P.P.S: Even if, after reading through this whole letter, you are not 100% convinced that this offer is right for you at this time I ask you please to pass it forward. Thanks a million. |
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Hi Alex, Sounds like a great deal, tell me if I ordered 2 sales letters would they still be ready in 14 days with the mini sites or would that be 28 days. I'm not trying to put any pressure on you or your copy writer but trying trying to know what is a realistic time frame so I could plan ahead. John |
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John, yes, the 14 days delay is per sales letter, regardless of how many you order, from the moment we agree on your project details and I forward the information to my assistant. Because I know that not everyone submits their project details right away and that some need more help coming up with the details than other, it gives us some buffer time to complete research and write copy. Meanwhile, we let other projects "season" before giving them a review with a clear mind and some distance. Thus the 14 days process |
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Hi Alexandre, Can you show us some samples pls? Thanks! |
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Davion, Sending you a PM right away. Thanks. Alex. |
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I would like to see some samples as well. Thank you, Peter |
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Sending you a PM as well Peter. Due to disclosure agreements I can not post them here publicly. Alex. |
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Bryce, check your PMs in a few. I'm getting flooded with requests and with the 300 second wait between PM's I'm getting a bit behind, but we're getting there ![]() Alex. |
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Hey Alex, I'd like to see some samples as well. Thanks!
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Ben, PM sent!
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Hi Alex , i know you rock and have paid you 10x more for letters in the past ive booked one can i book more ? thanks buddy |
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Wah, Sure, you can book as many as you want, but once those 10 spots are gone, the offer is gone, and I already made a few sales already so you might want to be quick about it ![]() Alex. |
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Just bought one, look forward to hearing from you! Helene Malmsio - Strategic Services |
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Helene, How's life in Australia these days? I got your order and will be getting in touch with you by e-mail today! Alex. |
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Please pm me some samples (writing and graphics) as well. Thanks, Neal |
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Still got room for a few more at that price but I don't know how munch longer the offer will last. Hurry if you're still sitting on the fence and hit me up if there's anything I can help with. Alex. |
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Just wondering if anyone has any feedback on the sales letters? Considering purchasing but wouldn't mind getting a bit of feedback first.
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Sheryl, I am still waiting for the project details of a few people who placed their orders over the week-end and the rest have just been sent to my assistant, so I'm afraid that feedback may be limited for now. I have sent a reply to your question by PM, including links to some writing samples, one of which reportedly converts up to 11% into sales (but to be completely honest and in the spirit of full disclosure, I have no idea how "hot" the prospects are when they reach the salespage, although even just half that percentage is more than respectable.) Alex. |
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Hey, This looks like an awesome offer but i had one question. Is there a guarantee on how well the pages will convert? Because if you give me a sales copy that looks awesome but doesn't convert whats the point? Abdoue |
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The truth is: There is absolutely no way to know in advance how well your copy will convert and no serious copywriter would make any claims otherwise. From a personal point of view, MY task is to make sure that my customers get the BEST piece of copy that I can craft to make their target market burn with desire to BUY NOW. But other factors will always come in when it comes to conversion, such as the source of your traffic, how well it is targeted to your offer, and other factors which are out of any copywriter's control. Let me know if you have any more questions about my service. Alex. | |
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Hi Alex, I was just wondering if this offer is still available? Warm regards, Bina. |
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Hi. I just ordered 1 letter. Now waiting for confirmation..
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Bina, Yes, I'm taking 2 or 3 more projects for this month, but you might want to reserve your place soon before I bump this offer back to the top of the WSO forum. Lorenz, I sent a reply to your PM. Alex. |
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Ordered. Just waiting for you to contact me . I hope Lisa knows what she's doing.P.S. I have an outline of the sales letter template that she can take a look at, plus *some* of the headline & benefits are on the "test" page at: Sales ~ Best WordPress Template Test Test page = page I used to test the layout/output of that product .Anyway, hope to hear from you soon. |
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Second, the WSO went up earlier than I planned and I'm heading out for the day, but I'll contact you by e-mail asap to obtain more details and discuss your project with you. Talk to you soon. Alex. | |
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Is this only for IM or does it apply to 'Real' businesses as well? Say if I wanted to build a salespage for a machine-shop could you do it plus banners/logos?
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Delta, Please contact me by PM with more details to discuss your needs. Alex. |
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Alex - looks like a great deal - including the minisite graphics is quite a bonus! Just picked one up - Transaction ID: 7GP319706U0763803 waiting for instructions on where to send the details! Cheers, Maria |
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Maria, Thanks for claiming your copywriting package! Sending a reply to your paypal address right now with instructions. Alex. |
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Can you pm me some samples? Thanks |
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Johnny, samples on their way. Alex. |
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Sorry to be yet another, but would like to see some samples as well. I am a little confused. Is this offer for a ground up sales letter or a re-work? Also, what if one did not want a mini site, but just a sales letter? Thanks. |
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Sending you a PM right away. As for the offer, it is from a sales letter written from scratch (unless you would rather have a rewrite but that would be up to you) by my assistant. The offer is the same whether you need the design or not as it is a thank you gift I have thrown into the offer and not in any way calculated in the service price. Let me know if there is anything else I can help with. Alex. | |
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Alex, sounds like a great deal, and you're obviously a skillful writer. I have a project that would definitely benefit from a re-write from a woman's perspective. Would LOVE to see a couple samples. I'm highly motivated to do this.
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Just purchased however can you send the details to tombrite09@googlemail.com rather than my main paypal email! Was good speaking with you on skype before i ordered too! Now to work extra hard on getting my ebook completed quickly LOL Tom Brite |
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Hi Alexandre, Do you have any sample that I can look at before I order? Thanks |
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@ Tom: Will be contacting you very shortly to get your project details! @ Colleen: Yes, I have room for a few more this month, but I expect those spots to fill within the week. |
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All who have asked for samples should have received information by PM. Please let me know if you feel I have skipped you. Alex. |
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Alex would you send me a sample please via pm too? thanks colleen |
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Colleen, An email has been sent to your PP address with instructions to submit your project details. Let me know if there's anything else I can help with. Alex. |
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