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Old 01-15-2010, 02:08 PM   #1
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“You Wouldn’t Trust a Kindergartner to Drive You Around Town. So Why Would You Trust a Newbie Copywriter to Drive Profits Into Your Bank Account?”


You Wouldn’t. And That’s Why You’re About to Find Out Why Other Marketers Trust Me With Their Most Important Sales Letters… And Why You Should Too



Dear Fellow Warrior,

Stringing words together on a page like a sloppy word salad won’t impress your prospects. Nor will it put money in your pocket.

Instead, what you need is an attention-grabbing, high-response sales letter that gets your prospects to stop, read and buy.

And that’s exactly the kind of letter I’d like to put up on your site. But first, let me show you why it works like magic…

Think back to one of the first times you ever saw fireworks when you were a kid…

Maybe it was a warm night on the 4th of July. You sat in the cool grass with your friends, laughing and talking with excited anticipation. You chattered about swimming, summer vacations, baseball and everything else that filled your carefree days.

Then suddenly…

Ffffffffffffffffffft… BOOM!

Your head snaps up just in time to catch the first fireworks exploding in dazzling color.


Heads up…

Eyes widen…

Mouths drop open…


You and your friends don’t utter another word about vacations or swimming or baseball. In between bursts of fireworks you can hear the “ooohs and ahhhs” rolling over the crowd. And you sit there in rapt attention like a guard at Buckingham Palace.

There’s nothing that could rip your attention away from the show. You don’t take your eyes off the smoky sky until the last firework fades away.

So what does this have to do with you making a lot of money?

Just this: Fireworks to children are like the…

Attention-Getting, Eye-Opening, Heart-Stopping Tactics I Use to Persuade Your Hardest Prospects to Crack Open Their Wallets!


I call them “sales copy fireworks” -- or “copy works” for short.

These are the little things I drop into your sales letter to make it POP. This includes great headlines to stop busy prospects dead in their tracks, emotional hooks that reel your prospects in… and a call to action they can’t ignore.

And just like real fireworks, your prospects won’t be able to rip their attention away from your sales page. They’ll sit in front of their monitors with wide eyes, open mouths and a credit card in hand. They won’t be able to click away (much less look away) until they click your “buy now” button!

That’s exactly what you’ll get when you let me work some of my “copy works” magic into your next sales letter. You’ll get results. Real results that add more customers to your list and put more cash in your account.

Listen…

If you’ve ever had tumbleweeds blowing through your empty inbox when you expected a flood of sales, then you’ll know why having a high-response sales letter is so important!


And if you’ve not yet had that experience, just think back to a time when you were disappointed…

Maybe you were a small child who didn’t get what you wanted for Christmas. Perhaps as an adult your best friend forgot your birthday. Or maybe you had high hopes for meeting some goal and you landed flat on your face instead.

It hurts. And that’s the same kind of “punched in the gut” disappointment you’ll get if your sales letter flops.

But you don’t have to feel that way -- not as long as I stand by ready to create your high-response sales letter.

Entrust your sales letter in my expert hands – I have ten years of experience writing dozens of profitable sales letters -- and…

Your inbox will be singing a sweet tune as one sales notification after another rushes in!



Now, if you’ve read or even skimmed this far then you already know my sales copy works.

So that leads to your next question –

“How Much?”

For you – just $497.

But there’s a catch.

The only way you can claim that rock-bottom price is you agree to let me use your sales letter in my portfolio.

You see, I’ve done a lot of “behind the scenes” sales copy work with some big names. I’d commit business suicide if I even hinted about who I’ve worked with, much less if I put their ads in my portfolio. Seriously, they don’t want anyone to know I write their copy.

That’s why I need your sales letter. And I’m willing to give you the same “fireworks” copy I do for everyone else – but at a steep discount – if you let me add it to my portfolio.

Look...

You're guaranteed to get my best work because I intend to proudly show it off to the world!


Just look at WF Sal said after working with me:

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Well, this has been a long time coming...

I have hired copywriters on and off for over 6 years now.

I've paid anywhere from $47.00 to $3,997.00.

Rebecca isn't the "cheapest" going around on this forum but as far as I am concerned, she one of the best I've come across in 6 years... and I don't say that lightly.

Bec, I cannot tell you what a breath of fresh air it has been to work with you.

You are a real pro who obviously cares about her business and looking after her clients.

Bec delivered on time and kept me informed every step of the way... as opposed to some others on here who have taken my $$ and dissapeared.

Oh, and the copy was also kick-ass!

This is the first time ever that I have not felt the need to change a single word.

Look forward to working with you again in the near future Bec.

Sal




Here’s What You Need to Do Next Before Someone Else Beats You To It...


This is first come, first served, so PM me right now. Tell me a bit about your product and your niche (a few lines will do).

If I agree to accept your project, I’ll send you a questionnaire to complete and you can send me the $497 fee.

It’s as easy as that for you to get a high-converting sales letter created by a known marketing expert.

But hurry and PM me right now, because this offer is only available to a handful of people who contact me soon.

I look forward to receiving your PM!

Rebecca “Becky” Hagel




P.S. You can trust me: I have a solid seven-year history on this forum and a ten-year history working with a whole host of legendary experts and JV partners – go ahead and Google it for proof. Then come back here fast to PM me before my schedule fills up.


P.P.S. Need more proof? Check out the letters I've written for others...

Five awesome samples -- including examples of some kick-ass storytelling selling that will knock your socks off.


Also, be sure to check out this unusual poker salesletter


Note: the person I wrote the above sales letter said this about me…

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Ok, first impressions... I think you're a genius!

I was a little hesitant when you said the salespage was ready in just 2 days, but you've blown me away with what you've written.

I love the headline...

Although I'd written the salespage for real mind power secrets and it converts well, I had struggled to write the poker salespage. Everything I wrote sounded too technical. This is why I asked for help ...and you've exceeded my expectations.

Many thanks for a fantastic job.

~Iain Legg





And here's what others have said about me my other writing services...

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...Her writing style is quite simply, amazing. She writes with a very unique flavor and the content is exciting, personable and carefully crafted so that from start to finish you'll find yourself reading the entire thing at once...

CV Bullard, http://www.SexyAdCopy.com


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As a writer and a teacher of writing for nearly two decades, have an eagle eye for quality content. I've hired some folks in the past who were fine writers, they just didn't understand how to write for the internet.

What's vital is content written in a voice that connects with people and makes them feel like you're not just the expert, but a friend. That's addictive writing!

Enter Becky Hagel. Connector extraordinaire. I love reading her books, because I feel as though I'm having a quality conversation with a good friend over tea. Becky's THE person to go to if you want content that will drive folks back to your site, panting for more!

Lisa Preston


And later after a I worked on a few more projects with Lisa, she added...


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...You're a master writer, that's for sure. I thank you so much for working on my projects ... Hope we can work together again - it's been the best outsourcing experience of my 4 years online. Feel like I'm working with pure genius!




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Old 01-15-2010, 03:15 PM   #2
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Here's what others are saying about me and my work:


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[Completely unsolicited!]

Ladies and gents, I have known Becky for over half a decade online I think. Let me tell you something, writing is her passion.

If she's offering an opportunity for you to take advantage of her copywriting abilities, all I can say is: You better hurry and talk to her now!

Another thing - She doesn't need my testimonial obviously. However, she's been there for a lot of us over the years and when I saw this post I just felt compelled to do it. Hope you don't mind Becky!

Thanks for listening.



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Well, this has been a long time coming...

I have hired copywriters on and off for over 6 years now.

I've paid anywhere from $47.00 to $3,997.00.

Rebecca isn't the "cheapest" going around on this forum but as far as I am concerned, she one of the best I've come across in 6 years... and I don't say that lightly.

Bec, I cannot tell you what a breath of fresh air it has been to work with you.

You are a real pro who obviously cares about her business and looking after her clients.

Bec delivered on time and kept me informed every step of the way... as opposed to some others on here who have taken my $$ and dissapeared.

Oh, and the copy was also kick-ass!

This is the first time ever that I have not felt the need to change a single word.

Look forward to working with you again in the near future Bec.

Sal



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Becky did an outstanding job on my sales copy. The text was absolutely flawless, keeping the reader engaged from the opening to the very end. If it wasn't my own product, I'd probably buy it myself after reading it : )

The order was delivered on time and no revisions were needed.

Thank you, Becky.




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Hey,

Been waiting to leave this review for a few weeks now and still i haven't finished putting it all together but anyhow am pleased to show you all a live example of her work and also leave a review too

Review:

As anyone buying copywriting i was a bit sceptical especially after being stung before for going for the cheap copywriters who seem to produce some good results (to someone like me who is no expert) but then when it comes to the crunch and sales conversions they suck!

So it is worth paying that little bit extra for a good copy as even a 1% increase on conversions means you are making more money with the same traffic!

Now in regards to Becky's copywriting skills i was really impressed, it came only a few days after my order and i was kept updated throughout it's progress.

The copy was delivered and i even got a check up email to make sure i recieved it succesfully! Great extra!

Inside the document it was all formatted nicely, styles, bold, sizes etc etc all done so i didn't have to fiddle about with it all. Plus it also told me exactly where to add in the reviews from happy client's and how many as well as the order button(s). Really made it simple!

As an extra which i was not expecting becky went out of her way to write me i think 4 or 5 extra title's to split test their results and use the one which grabs most peoples attention and also converts the best.... definatly a big bonus!

Finally because my project/product was not really definative and appeals to both buyers and sellers it was a hard task for becky but i really do think she excelled!

We talked over the possability's and which one would be easier to make a sales page for and which perspective to take and even talked a little bit about the niche too and her knowledge after just a few hours of research was amazing.

Becky even came back later with an all important 'phrase' to use in my sales copy and in my product which is completely unique and has not been used before and also actually get's searches and a perfect 'phrase' to make into a slogon related to my product (this find was worth way more than the cost of the sales copy).

Anyhow im rambling on now but really becky you out did yourself on this and i really do hope people see sense and pick you to write their copy as they will not be dissapointed.

Mark Blaze

P.S. Oh and becky i also got a $5,000 copywriter friend who has been in the business for years and years now to look over your copy once it was up and he couldn't find any problems with it and told me which of the titles that he thought would work best too (which turned out to be your first choice too).

P.P.S. Example of my site with sales letter/copywriting done by becky = The Paypal Report - Ultimate Guide For Paypal Buyers & Sellers!

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[Completely unsolicited!]

Ladies and gents, I have known Becky for over half a decade online I think. Let me tell you something, writing is her passion.

If she's offering an opportunity for you to take advantage of her copywriting abilities, all I can say is: You better hurry and talk to her now!

Another thing - She doesn't need my testimonial obviously. However, she's been there for a lot of us over the years and when I saw this post I just felt compelled to do it. Hope you don't mind Becky!

Thanks for listening.
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Can you email me, I cannot pm. xxxx

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[Completely unsolicited!]

Ladies and gents, I have known Becky for over half a decade online I think. Let me tell you something, writing is her passion.

If she's offering an opportunity for you to take advantage of her copywriting abilities, all I can say is: You better hurry and talk to her now!

Another thing - She doesn't need my testimonial obviously. However, she's been there for a lot of us over the years and when I saw this post I just felt compelled to do it. Hope you don't mind Becky!

Thanks for listening.
Hi Shoaib,

Aww shucks, thanks for your very kind words. I appreciate them. And you.

Cheers,
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any review specials?
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any review specials?
Hi selcor,

Thanks for your interest.

I'm not sure exactly what you're asking...

Are you asking about review articles? If so, check out some of the ghostwriting ads, as a ghostwriter is more likely to write review articles.

Or are you asking about specials in general? If so, the price in this ad is the special (heavily discounted) price.

Please clarify and I'll be happy to answer your question. Thanks!

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yes, a discount; when someone new is getting started on the warrior forum, they usually give either free or almost free services to 1 or 2 people in exchange for reviews to prove to others of the quality of work and "build up " momentum and buzz...
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yes, a discount; when someone new is getting started on the warrior forum, they usually give either free or almost free services to 1 or 2 people in exchange for reviews to prove to others of the quality of work and "build up " momentum and buzz...
Ah, gotcha.

The price I'm offering on this forum is the discounted price. As you can see by looking at my profile or even searching my name online, I'm neither new nor just getting started.

Thanks for the question and subsequent clarification.



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Thanks to everyone for your interest! My project calendar is filling up, so PM me now -- no obligation -- if you're even slightly interested. I'm tentatively estimating that I'll suspend this offer as early as today, or perhaps a bit later this week, depending on how quickly the remaining spots fill up.

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Update on Feb 2nd: This offer is now open again...

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Hi Becky,

I can't PM yet. Can you please let me know how I can contact you regarding your services.

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Hi Craig,

Thank you for your interest.

Although I prefer PM (since those little guys aren't as likely to get lost or hidden in a flood of spam), those who can't PM can email me:

rhagel [~~AT~~] rhagel [~~DOT~~] com

Thank you!

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Hi Becky,

You have some great testimonials. I would be interested to hear a little more about your services.

My family's publishing company, Home , has a wide range of non-fiction books which I am charged with turning into information products over coming months and years.

I actually have a sales letter (for a soon to be launched ebook) that I would like to have re-written.

Perhaps we could discuss this. Are you on skype?

Thanks,

Trent





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“You Wouldn’t Trust a Kindergartner to Drive You Around Town. So Why Would You Trust a Newbie Copywriter to Drive Profits Into Your Bank Account?”


You Wouldn’t. And That’s Why You’re About to Find Out Why Other Marketers Trust Me With Their Most Important Sales Letters… And Why You Can Too



Dear Fellow Warrior,

Stringing words together on a page like a sloppy word salad won’t impress your prospects. Nor will it put money in your pocket.

Instead, what you need is an attention-grabbing, high-response sales letter that gets your prospects to stop, read and buy.

And that’s exactly the kind of letter I’d like to put up on your site. But first, let me show you why it works like magic…

Think back to one of the first times you ever saw fireworks when you were a kid…

Maybe it was a warm night on the 4th of July. You sat in the cool grass with your friends, laughing and talking with excited anticipation. You chattered about swimming, summer vacations, baseball and everything else that filled your carefree days.

Then suddenly…

Ffffffffffffffffffft… BOOM!

Your head snaps up just in time to catch the first fireworks exploding in dazzling color.


Heads up…

Eyes widen…

Mouths drop open…


You and your friends don’t utter another word about vacations or swimming or baseball. In between bursts of fireworks you can hear the “ooohs and ahhhs” rolling over the crowd. And you sit there in rapt attention like a guard at Buckingham Palace.

There’s nothing that could rip your attention away from the show. You don’t take your eyes off the smoky sky until the last firework fades away.

So what does this have to do with you making a lot of money?

Just this: Fireworks to children are like the…

Attention-Getting, Eye-Opening, Heart-Stopping Tactics I Use to Persuade Your Hardest Prospects to Crack Open Their Wallets!


I call them “sales copy fireworks” -- or “copy works” for short.

These are the little things I drop into your sales letter to make it POP. This includes great headlines to stop busy prospects dead in their tracks, emotional hooks that reel your prospects in… and a call to action they can’t ignore.

And just like real fireworks, your prospects won’t be able to rip their attention away from your sales page. They’ll sit in front of their monitors with wide eyes, open mouths and a credit card in hand. They won’t be able to click away (much less look away) until they click your “buy now” button!

That’s exactly what you’ll get when you let me work some of my “copy works” magic into your next sales letter. You’ll get results. Real results that add more customers to your list and put more cash in your account.

Listen…

If you’ve ever had tumbleweeds blowing through your empty inbox when you expected a flood of sales, then you’ll know why having a high-response sales letter is so important!


And if you’ve not yet had that experience, just think back to a time when you were disappointed…

Maybe you were a small child who didn’t get what you wanted for Christmas. Perhaps as an adult your best friend forgot your birthday. Or maybe you had high hopes for meeting some goal and you landed flat on your face instead.

It hurts. And that’s the same kind of “punched in the gut” disappointment you’ll get if your sales letter flops.

But you don’t have to feel that way -- not as long as I stand by ready to create your high-response sales letter.

Entrust your sales letter in my expert hands – I have ten years of experience writing dozens of profitable sales letters -- and…

Your inbox will be singing a sweet tune as one sales notification after another rushes in!



Now, if you’ve read or even skimmed this far then you already know my sales copy works.

So that leads to your next question –

“How Much?”

For you – just $497.

But there’s a catch.

The only way you can claim that rock-bottom price is you agree to let me use your sales letter in my portfolio.

You see, I’ve done a lot of “behind the scenes” sales copy work with some big names. I’d commit business suicide if I even hinted about who I’ve worked with, much less if I put their ads in my portfolio. Seriously, they don’t want anyone to know I write their copy.

That’s why I need your sales letter. And I’m willing to give you the same “fireworks” copy I do for everyone else – but at a steep discount – if you let me add it to my portfolio.

Look...

You're guaranteed to get my best work because I intend to proudly show it off to the world!


Fair enough?


Here’s What You Need to Do Next Before Someone Else Beats You To It...


This is first come, first served, so PM me right now. Tell me a bit about your product and your niche (a few lines will do).

If I agree to accept your project, I’ll send you a questionnaire to complete and you can send me the $497 fee.

It’s as easy as that for you to get a high-converting sales letter created by a known marketing expert.

But hurry and PM me right now, because this offer is only available to a handful of people who contact me soon.

I look forward to receiving your PM!

Rebecca “Becky” Hagel




P.S. You can trust me: I have a solid seven-year history on this forum and a ten-year history working with a whole host of legendary experts and JV partners – go ahead and Google it for proof. Then come back here fast to PM me before my schedule fills up.


P.P.S. Need more proof? Check out these samples…

Hydroponic gardening sample

Firesale Sales Letter (This one pulled in so much cash that I didn’t just send my folks to Italy– I sent them on a luxury vacation to Rome and Paris!)

Cheating sales letter

Pickpocket sales letter

An unusual poker salesletter


Note: the person I wrote the above sales letter said this about me…








And here's what others have said about me my other writing services...









And later after a I worked on a few more projects with Lisa, she added...






Go ahead and PM me now. Let's see what we can do for you. But hurry, because the last time I opened this thread the offer sold out in just three days!
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Hi Trent,

Thank you for your interest!

I'm not on Skype. However, this might be easier via text any way.

If you'd like, please email me the letter you mentioned in your post. You can send it to:

rhagel [~~AT~~] rhagel [~~DOT~~] com


I'll look it over and give you a sense of what types of changes I'd make to it. No obligation -- it's just a place to kick off our discussions. It's also a good way for you to tell if we're on the same page (so to speak).

I look forward to hearing from you!

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hey i cant send any pm, my post is still below 50.

im interested for a sales letter, its only a 600 words sales letter from the headline to the p.s part. its a weight loss niche. can u quote me your best price & turn around time. thanks.
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Hi duatiga,

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This offer is now re-opened! Please PM me at your earliest convienence -- let's get some sales rolling in for you!

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To the person with the initials "J T" who emailed me with a Yahoo email address -- I sent a reply but I got an error. Please send me an alternate address or, if possible, please PM me.

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I have a project that I'm interested in getting you to take a look at. Its in the real estate field. Email me @
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Warrior Forum member Mark Blaze posted this unsolicited testimonial -- Check it out here.

Warrior Forum member Rob Fore says I write kick butt copy -- see it here.

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Hi Becky - just sent a PM. Looking forward to hearing from you and possibly working together.
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Got it and replied! Many thanks for getting in touch.

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Well, this has been a long time coming...

I have hired copywriters on and off for over 6 years now.

I've paid anywhere from $47.00 to $3,997.00.

Rebecca isn't the "cheapest" going around on this forum but as far as I am concerned, she one of the best I've come across in 6 years... and I don't say that lightly.

Bec, I cannot tell you what a breath of fresh air it has been to work with you.

You are a real pro who obviously cares about her business and looking after her clients.

Bec delivered on time and kept me informed every step of the way... as opposed to some others on here who have taken my $$ and dissapeared.

Oh, and the copy was also kick-ass!

This is the first time ever that I have not felt the need to change a single word.

Look forward to working with you again in the near future Bec.

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I am interest in a short sales copy for my self improvement website.

Please contact me at ans.pasha@gmail.com
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I am interest in a short sales copy for my self improvement website.

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I emailed you earlier this morning. Thanks for getting in touch!



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Becky did an outstanding job on my sales copy. The text was absolutely flawless, keeping the reader engaged from the opening to the very end. If it wasn't my own product, I'd probably buy it myself after reading it : )

The order was delivered on time and no revisions were needed.

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Becky,

Can you send me an e-mail please with your prices? I am looking for the sales copy for a WSO and auto responder. My e-mail is patjeans@hotmail.com I appreciate your time.

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The first sales copy WSO I've read which didn't have me
yawning within the first two paragraphs.

Also checked out your Shark site, I like your style.

A proper copy writer in a sea of folks who just know how to be
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The first sales copy WSO I've read which didn't have me
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Also checked out your Shark site, I like your style.

A proper copy writer in a sea of folks who just know how to be
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I'll keep it in mind...

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Becky did an outstanding job on my sales copy. The text was absolutely flawless, keeping the reader engaged from the opening to the very end. If it wasn't my own product, I'd probably buy it myself after reading it : )

The order was delivered on time and no revisions were needed.

Thank you, Becky.
...This was too cute and funny! Loved it! Yes, Becky is most certainly the REAL deal, Holyfield! Keep up the good work, Beck! The testimonials are awesome!
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HI Becky

Just sent you a PM.

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Becky - so are you guaranteeing a conversion ratio of any sort? I know such a question is somewhat silly, but curious. Also, about how many words are we talking? Or did I miss that?

Your price seems good (to say the least). And spot on opener! Love your style so far.

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Becky can you pm me the price for short sales page? ( 1000 words 1200 words) and time frame?
It is for wso so i also want catchy thread title also.
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Morning folks,

Glen and tamilseo -- I'm working through my PMs and email right now, so you can expect something from me shortly.

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Becky - so are you guaranteeing a conversion ratio of any sort? I know such a question is somewhat silly, but curious. Also, about how many words are we talking? Or did I miss that?

Your price seems good (to say the least). And spot on opener! Love your style so far.
Thank you for the kind words!

As for the bit about conversion rates (which isn't a silly question)...

The answer is no, I cannot guarantee a conversion rate. That's because there are too many factors out of my control that come into play. For example, the quality of traffic is a big one. Whether someone is even offering a product that the market wants (i.e., the right offer at the right time) is another. Price is yet another factor that heavily influences conversion rates.

However, I do brainstorm with folks about how to improve conversion rates, which includes how they're approaching their marketing.

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Thanks for everyone for the questions and PMs. You'll get an answer shortly!

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I have sent you a PM regarding my front page. Please have a look and let me know whether you can help me. Thank you.

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Look for a reply within about the next 10 minutes or so. Thanks for getting in touch!

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Thanks link8. Look for a reply shortly.

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what is the turnaround time?
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Hi newnew29,

Thanks for the question.

The only way to get a good estimate of my turnaround time is to contact me when you're ready for a letter and let me know what you need. Be sure to tell me about your product or service.

The reason I say this is because my turnaround time varies greatly depending on:

1. My current project calendar. This can change at a moment's notice, especially if someone sends a big project my way suddenly. Or if priorities shift on a project, I may suddenly have an opening. For example, turnaround time might be one week right now, but if someone comes along and books a big project an hour from now, I could suddenly have a full calendar for the next month or two.

Indeed, that's usually what happens.

2. How big your project is. I might be able to squeeze in a small project like a landing page for a short report, even if I'm otherwise busy. So much depends on what you need.


Again, just contact me when you're ready and I'll give you an timeline based on current conditions. Also: If you already know you'll need a letter in the future (such as in a couple months), then contact me early so I can reserve space on my project calendar.


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Hi Becky,


I cannot pm so I sent you an email. Please look for the "Copywriter needed" title.


Thanks!
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Thanks Freebby, I got it and you'll have a reply within minutes!

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