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Most Email Copy Doesn't Sell. Mine Does. Why Not Do It Right The First Time?
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Here’s the real story on how to get email marketing copy that sells…


“What Are The Five Dirty Secrets
That Cheap Copywriters Are Hiding From You and How They Are Costing You Thousands of Dollars in Internet Sales and Profits?”


Dear Fellow Warrior and Internet Marketer,

Are you struggling to get your internet marketing and business off the ground or take your business to the next level?

That’s not surprising. And truth is…it’s not your fault.

For years now, internet marketers and entrepreneurs have been subjected to many copywriters and wanna-be copywriters who claim they can sell refrigerators to Eskimos and skyrocket your sales through the roof for as little as $200 or less for their copy.

These claims are just plain nonsense!

Here are 5 dirty secrets and facts cheap copywriters and wanna-be copywriters don’t want you to know:

FACT NUMBER ONE: Cheap copywriters can’t produce winning copy on a regular or consistent basis, if ever.

If that were the case, cheap copywriters would raise their prices really fast.

If they produce thousands of dollars in sales and profits for their customers, obviously they would want reasonable compensation in exchange for the success of their copy.

Who in their right mind would continue to charge only $100 or $200 or even $300 for a sales letter or email series when they were producing $10,000 or $20,000 or more in sales and profits for their customers?

FACT NUMBER TWO: Cheap copywriters don’t understand your market and target audience.

It’s simple. How much time do you really think a cheap copywriter is spending on figuring out what motivates or drives your target prospect or customer when he is not getting paid enough money to pay his monthly rent and utilities?

Clearly a cheap copywriter isn’t going to spend more than a split second in trying to understand your target prospect and market when he is only getting slightly more money than the “bag lady” living underneath the local bridge has buried in her tin cup.

This means disastrous results for you. A cheap copywriter will miss the mark or target without painstaking research about what drives or motivates your target market to buy your type of product or service…Your dreams of taking your business and sales to the next level have just gone up in smoke.


FACT NUMBER THREE: Cheap copywriters are a poor imitation of real copywriters.

Cheap copywriters only create “Frankenstein” copy. They just patch together copy from other sales letters and email copy and call it their own…copy that has more speed bumps than any road you drive on.

This means more terrible results for you. Your copywriter must know what makes successful copy successful in the first place. They only know this by studying your market and target customers in depth. But they never take the time or effort to really know your target audience. That’s just the way it is.


FACT NUMBER FOUR: Cheap copywriters don’t pay any attention to crafting an irresistible offer or find that hook that really sells your product or service.

Your email copy requires a carefully crafted offer and hook to get your prospects and customers to line up and beg you to take their money when they read your emails.

Cheap copywriters put hardly any effort into creating your offer, if any effort at all. They don’t even know what a hook is…so forget about getting a powerful hook for your copy when you use them to write your copy.


FACT NUMBER FIVE: Cheap email copywriters don’t save you money. They actually cost you thousands of dollars in internet sales and profits.

For example, the difference between a 1% conversion and a 2% conversion sounds small, right?

Wrong.

If a 1% conversion rate pulls you in $2,000 of sales a month, then a 2% conversion rate would bring you $4,000 of sales a month…doubling your revenue!

Ultimately, the difference between an “expensive” and cheap copywriter might be a 2% conversion rate compared to 1%…

But that additional 1% doubles your revenues. That’s one of the advantages an “expensive” copywriter brings to the table-an additional $24,000 a year in revenue.

Or looked at from a different angle, a cheap copywriter would throw $24,000 of your money down the drain-year in, year out.

What that in mind, is it really a smart idea to hunt around for the cheapest copywriter? I don’t think so.

Of course, if you’re just starting out and you need an email marketing series or sales letter written, I understand why you’d want to keep your costs down.

Just keep in mind that by going the cheap route, you are throwing a lot of future revenue down the drain.

If you were building a house, you wouldn’t skimp on the foundations. That would be foolish, and a little dangerous, don’t you think?

Well, your email series and sales letter is the FOUNDATION of your business. It’s what generates your sales and profits! The last thing you want to do is skimp on that.

Here’s the bottom line: The difference between a cheap and expensive copywriter isn’t just the price…almost always it will be reflected in the results.

So lay a solid foundation for your business and marketing, and don’t skimp on the very thing that is going to generate you the sales, the lifeblood of your business.

It’s like the old saying goes…you get what you pay for.

Once you accept these FIVE FACTS, you’ll understand why cheap copywriters don’t raise their prices and generally churn out copy that’s not worth the paper or computer screen it’s written on.

Reflect on what you’ve discovered so far.

It’s quite possible that you know-for the first time-that cheap copywriters and wanna-be copywriters aren’t what you thought they were.

In just a few moments, I’m going to share some little-known email marketing secrets and strategies so that your email marketing campaigns sell like crazy, but first I’d like to tell you about my copywriting and marketing background.

My name is Thomas O’Malley and I’m a veteran email copywriter. My only interest is to make your profits soar into the stratosphere with money-making emails and autoresponder series.

I have been a protégé of Gary Halbert and Dan Kennedy for many years. I have taken their incredible copywriting and marketing strategies and put them into play in my clients’ email marketing campaigns.

I write powerful email copy that gets your prospects and customers to click open their emails and buy your product or service after they read or scan your email message.

As you pay close attention to this page, the more you’ll know that my email copy gets results.


Proven Results Email Marketing Copywriting Services


What’s amazing about my email copywriting is the vast amount of copywriting techniques and strategies…that, when applied to your email marketing will improve your results…


Dramatically…
And...Instantly!


Here’s a few of the proprietary techniques I apply to each client’s email marketing campaigns, including yours:

  • How to isolate the “core appeal” of your product or service. It’s essential for your internet marketing and business success. And, you must not guess. “Guessing” about what to feature as the main appeal of your product or service can cost you a fortune. And, anyway, it’s unnecessary. Believe or not, most of the crucial research to find your core appeal can be done quickly and easily.
  • How to work the “Sales Detective” angle, quickly and efficiently, to find the juicy nuggets of info that will become your Hook for your email marketing campaigns.
  • I have developed a dependable and high-performance process for creating subject lines. This process was developed by carefully tabulating and analyzing the relative effectiveness of all the subject lines that were used on a certain number of email marketing campaigns that created hundreds of thousands in sales! Those kind of numbers don’t lie.
  • A “Gestapo” technique that makes absolutely certain your prospects and customer will pay attention to your emails. A great subject line is essential but it’s just the beginning. Subject lines must be followed by “high-voltage” persuasive copy. The real secret of “persuasion online” is not an abstraction. No. It is a result of cold, powerful, hard-nosed methodology. Listen: Whenever I create a “salespitch online” or in emails, I always(and very deliberately) create a “benevolent ambush.” In fact, my emails are like a psychological mine field. I never give your reader a chance. Instead, I used a certain “continued flow” technique that forces him to keep reading.
  • How to clearly make your offer. Ditch the mumbling and bumbling of most email copy forever. Once you see how it’s done, you can finally position your product or service as the ONLY choice the reader wants…no matter how high your price is.
  • The “secret sauce” to creating a series of autoresponder or continuity emails that compels even your most reluctant or sceptical prospects to buy your products or services.
  • The Halbert “close the deal” formula that makes your prospects and customers say “yes” to your offer and how to make them want to do what you want them to do in your emails.
I could go on and on. What you’ve just read is only a small sample of the exciting techniques and strategies you will get when you use my email copywriting services. You need this kind of hard-nosed info. It is not a luxury. If you truly want to make some fast, serious money online, these kind of strategies are crucial!

I have treated these proprietary techniques as closely-guarded secrets for over 6 years now. But I have realized that I can help even more people by using these proprietary techniques in their email copy.

To get a jump on getting email copy that seriously increases your conversion and sales, contact me at emailcopywritingnow@gmail.com today. Time’s running out. I only have 3 spots available right now to write powerful email copy for you that sells more and more of your products or services.


Email Copy That Sells…
How To Turn Your Emails Into A Raging Cash Machine!


Clearly you can see how using my email copywriting services can make you more money now with powerful emails that pack a punch.

You’ll now make money the easy way when you use the money-making emails that I have written to send to your prospects and customers.

STOP and think of all the ways you can use your sudden flood of profits from your new emails that blow the lid off the sale of your products or services.

You may be thinking who my clients are and ask for samples of my work. I have tons of testimonials and samples but I have signed non-disclosure agreements with my clients so these remains private.

In fact, my current clients are not too happy right now since they know I’m making my email copywriting services available to a wider audience.

If you haven’t heard about my high-performance email copy, you must be a hermit living in a cave.

But here’s the bottom line: you could care less about my other clients…it’s only your money-making email copy that counts.

As you keep reading this letter, the more you realize powerful, money-making copy when you see it and read it.

You can get the same powerful, money-making copy for your email marketing when you use my email copywriting techniques and strategies.

You can start using my money-making emails by the end of this week and start making more bank deposits on Sunday or Monday.

When you use my email copy to ramp up your conversions and sales, you really become my partner. I’ll be right there in the marketing trenches with you.

As you might guess, I get emails everyday from clients asking what new projects I’m working on and what new email strategies I’m using to sell more of my clients’ products and services.

Don’t delay. I only have 3 spots available right now to start producing winning email copy and a proven autoresponder series for you. Email me at emailcopywritingnow@gmail.com now to start enjoying the benefits of increased sales and profits.

Your One-Stop Source for Email Copy That Forces
Your Prospects To Whip Open Their Wallets and
Buy Your Products or Services

It took me YEARS to develop the insights and tactics I’ll use in your email marketing series and campaigns.

During that time I must have spent thousands of dollars for my own email marketing campaigns finding out what really works to sell products and services to prospects and customers.

I want to save you all that money and effort by using the little-know email marketing secrets and strategies that I developed during those years for your email marketing messages.

I normally charge $200 for each marketing email message, $1000 for an autoresponder series of 7 emails, and $1250 for an autoresponder series of 10 emails.

But, since you get a Warrior special price, you get a profit-making email for only $75, and a winning autoresponder series of 7 emails for only $400.

You can also get a proven autoresponder series of 10 emails for only $600. That's the BEST deal most Warriors are going for. It's an incredible offer and opportunity.

If you think you can get what I have to offer from some $10.00 ebook, you are sadly misguided. If you think you can buy some course or get all this somewhere else for $30.00 to $50.00 or some such price, you are welcome to try.

However, if you sincerely want to stop messing around and finally get maximum-strength, profit-making email marketing from someone who knows the business cold…then, my friend…I’d love to help you out.

If don't take me up on this offer, you need to do yourself a favor. You need to stop reading online newsletters, and books on internet marketing and copywriting. You need to stop ordering ebooks and online courses too. You need to accept the fact that you're a "wanna-be" and a dreamer.

But then again, if you’re a “player” then you need to use my email copywriting services…and…you need to do it now!

My clients quickly find my email copy pays for itself hundreds of times over with their dramatic increase in sales and profits.

Are you beginning to see how you can use my email copywriting services to dramatically increase your sales today?

Think about making use of my proprietary email marketing strategies and techniques and you’ll begin to feel real power.

If you don’t get my powerful email copy, you could find yourself competing with other people who have the money-making benefits of my email copy working for them.

Why would you take that chance?

I’m not kidding…

Imagine, for a moment, that it’s a month from today…you wake up, take a shower, have coffee and breakfast, go sit down at your computer and see all the sales you’ve made while you were sleeping. Then you go play golf or go shopping for the day. That’s exactly the kind of day you can enjoy on a daily basis when you have cash-producing email marketing.

Don’t miss this opportunity. I have a limited number of spots (only 3 right now) available to start helping you to dramatically increase your conversions and sales with winning email copy and email marketing campaigns. Please contact me at emailcopywritingnow@gmail.com to start seeing more profits rolling into your bank account by the start of next week.

Right now, I’m inviting you to make some real money in your online marketing and business…


Here’s How We Work Together…

You pay 50% of the email copywriting fee upfront. You must also complete the questionnaire. Your success is directly dependent on the information you provide me about your product or service in the questionnaire.

When you complete the questionnaire, I dig deep into what drives or motivates your prospects and customers. As the famous copywriter John Caples explained in Tested Advertising Methods (p. 69), “there is no element in an advertisement [or email marketing campaign] more important than the appeal-the reason you give the reader for buying.”

You also send all your advertising and marketing material to me. I review this material in depth so that I get really good handle on your prospects and customers.

When I have finished reviewing your marketing material and doing any other research that helps me build a strong foundation for writing your copy, I will then write your email copy.

When I send you the first draft of the emails or autoresponder series, the other 50% is due.

Up to two revisions are included at no extra charge unless they are based on a change in the assignment made after the copy is submitted.

All revisions must be assigned within 30 days of your receipt of the first draft of copy. After that, additional rewrites may be made at a fee to be negotiated separately from this assignment.

I make my best attempt to be available to make revisions. Depending on my availability, I can sometimes turn around minor revisions in 2-4 business days; major revisions may take longer.

Just take a minute to consider how much easier your online success will become when you put my email copywriting to use.

You’d like to increase your profits and income by simply using money-making emails, wouldn’t you?

If you find yourself saying “yes” in your mind to what I’m saying to you right now, then you know it’s time you act and get my email copywriting services now.

All you have to do is contact me at emailcopywritingnow@gmail.com and I can start writing money-making emails and autoresponder or follow-up emails for you now. It will feel like you’ve added money-making steroids to your emails.

However, I would like to ask you a favor:

Please don’t contact me…


Unless You’re Really Serious About Selling More Products
and Services to Your Prospects and Customers and
Making More Profits Now with Your Email Marketing!

Why? The answer is easy. You see, demand for my email copywriting services is becoming enormous…so…for the meantime, I have decided to limit this incredible offer to people who are really serious about taking their internet marketing and business to the next level.

Listen, my friend, you have a watershed decision in front of your right now: You can either ignore this page and continue your current course…or…you can hire my email copywriting services now and…

Quickly Increase Your Conversions, Make More Sales,
And Dramatically Increase Your Profits!

Here’s the deal: You get a fast results, money-making email marketing message for only $75 and a high-performing series of 7 emails for only $400.

One thing is for sure…clearly the best deal is the powerhouse series of 10 emails for only $600.

Please don’t pass this opportunity up. I only have 3 spots open right now.

So, if you are serious about selling more products and services to your prospects and customers, email me at emailcopywritingnow@gmail.com right now. You’ll be glad you did.

Sincerely,


Thomas O’Malley

P.S. Please email me right now while you’re still reading. There’s no risk…no reason at all not to try this amazing offer for yourself…and this hot offer may never be offered again! I only have 3 spots left open right now. So don’t let this chance to dramatically increase your sales and profits with money-making email marketing campaigns slip by you! My email address is emailcopywritingnow@gmail.com. Thanks.
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Looks wonderful. Great copy Thomas. Just wanted to mention as to perhaps help - if someone buys 7 emails, the cost is $57~ per, whereas $60 each if buying 10. It should probably be the other way around, no? Good luck bud, I'm sure your service can offer some great return for clients.
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