Can I get some feedback on my landing page?

by ttados
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Hey guys,

I am launching a service based business and I was wondering if I could get some feedback on my landing page.

pixelguard.co
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  • Profile picture of the author savidge4
    Originally Posted by ttados View Post

    Hey guys,

    I am launching a service based business and I was wondering if I could get some feedback on my landing page.

    pixelguard.co
    All in all not to bad.... The call to action "Join Beta" I would without question test. As a business owner do I want to place my site on a "test" server?

    The image... not so sure a bar scene is inline with small business tech. and the image is flipped - I have an eye for that kind of stuff, "SOUPS" backwards immediately caught my eye. again testing should be in order.

    Again with the image, everyone is looking away from the call to action itself. its kind of a "Best Practice" to have the folks looking in the direction of the call to action.

    Down in your opt-in box "Price" might be nice, you currently have "Pice"
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  • Profile picture of the author Business Cat
    I like it but you should change some colors, use the Testimonials background color in the Hosting plans (or even more, change the whole block) and in the "Read more" button. You should also insert a menu in the top-right. Use a blue-dark color for the live chat.
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  • Profile picture of the author Rembo
    I'll be brutally honest here.

    1) You might do a split test with a page that has more vivid colors. Vivid colors bring out a 'happy' feeling in some customers. Like there is light at the end of a tunnel. In your case you're taking away a burden from small business owners, I think vivid colors will emphasize that relieved feeling. Worth testing.

    2) Way too much text on your landing page. Less = More. Keep it as short as possible. Be straight to the point. Don't waste your visitors time. If people want to read more they will click the link Learn More.

    3) Article info on a landing page is a waste of real estate and completely useless. Remove 'December 27, 2014/0 Comments/in Beginners, WordPress '.
    In fact, I recommend you remove 'posts' altogether from a landing page.

    4) Although English is not my native language and I'm far from being a good writer, I did notice a couple of odd sentences in there. For example: "I might be a little bias, but I think WordPress is the best website options for 99% of small businesses." There are at least two erros in that sentence. Have it proof read by someone that is good in English. (US or UK, you choose).

    5) Words like test and beta should be avoided. Get rid of them.

    6) If you want to sell the advanced plan you could consider adding a 3rd, more expensive plan. This is a psychology hack. It makes people feel good choosing the second (not most expensive but also not the cheapest) option.

    7) I presume that the text 'Website' in the form means 'Domain Name'?

    Hope this helps.
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  • Profile picture of the author ttados
    Thanks for the responses! I'm definitely looking into changes some things based on what I see here.
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  • Profile picture of the author sunoy14
    Its good in my opinion. Some colors might make it even better.
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