I sold expensive computers, now i cant even sell an online magazine

I think you're having a tough time because you're trying to sell soccer memes. They aren't exactly hard to find for free, and anyone who wants to see them can find tens of thousands of them for free on Facebook and Google. You've got to offer something people are actually willing to pay money for...

This might just be the worst sales page I have ever seen.

While the sales copy isn't the best I don't think that's the reason that you aren't selling any. The product doesn't really really fit any gap in the market. As was said above; you can get football memes for free. Maybe have a rethink of your sales model; is there another product you could sell that this could be a bonus to? Or is there other products you could be an affiliate for and you could use this as a free gift to build a list?

The product could be used for something but I don't think many people would be willing to pay money for it.

Hope this helps.

i just launched the site 2 days ago


so lets wait and see

People need expansive computers
they don't need... this
to be honest, that site looks a lot like spam... Like I'd get a virus visiting it... not to mention buyyin somthing from it...
doesn't create trust at all
and it's not even a problem that you're solving

Yes colorful virus thats what the site is

I can't see anybody paying for this. The content you are trying to get people to pay for should probably be the content you are giving away for free to drive traffic to your football related site. It's the sort of thing people might click on to see more of, but nobody wants to pay for it.

I'm not sure the best way to monetize this niche from there though.

Would be better off to have a short direct optin that gets them to join your mailing list instead of trying to sell them as soon as they come onto the site. 1st impression is everything & imagine that you are seeing your website for the very 1st time & have 2 seconds to check it out. Most people won't even read what you have if it doesn't catch there attention right away

Personally, I don't think a sales page like that is the best for selling something like a magazine. I would try to more build a website around the topic of the magazine, and offer premium content as the paid option.

Good luck!

Few problems:

1) Instant positive perception isn't there
2) Sales copy sucks
3) Sales page sucks
4) You should be generating leads
5) Yeah, there's more....

All can be fixed. You mentioned the word "sexiest" in your headline... there's nothing sexy about anything on that sales page.

Do you have the rights to the images you are selling and the right to transfer usage rights to your buyers?

Collected Photos?
"Over 100 Photos: When I say awesome photos, it means awesome photos. Work of a year picking out the best Football photos from around the world."

More collected photos:
"I have compiled the best and sexiest fans from the football world right at the tip of your fingers ! Let the national pride flow!"

And this:
"Once you get this e magazine, you can do WHATEVER you want with it. You are a FREE person. Complete Label Rights from us."

It seems a little shady.

If someone started selling your e-magazine as their own under a different title would they be liable for damages if someone like Getty images sued them?

Or would the contract you have with them selling the rights make you the target of the lawsuit?

Or do you provide a valid license for the included photos?

i think the problem i see here is that....mostly spanish people are not buying it because all my hits are from latin america

i need to make a spanish sales page

i think the problem with my page is its too long (people might feel discouraged) , and its not spanish..done deal

Okay, you've got some feedback. If the main part of your market is Spanish speaking then get everything done in Spanish.

As for what you're selling being available for free, I have no idea. I'm not familiar with the market. One thing I do know is that I've sold tons of stuff that was available free over the years. I just added a lot of value to it and put it all in one nice little package. Can you do that? Since I don't understand what you're selling, I don't know.

I think the overall idea for your page is pretty decent. I think your execution is pretty awful. I do believe a comic presentation would work however, the amateurish formatting and the layout are killing you. Find a good designer (one who understands this market and speaks fluent Spanish) and let him know what you're going after.

Unlike some of the criticism here I don't think this is a total loss. But you do have a lot of work to do to make it pay. Good luck.

anyways i listened to your comments
and i made the page as simple as possible

if it doesnt sell i will hire a designer...and go from there..
cheers

I think you can get a lot of visitors for your niche. But I don't think anyone is going to pay for such stuff. Its all over the social medias for free. I think you are better off putting them up on website for free and then adding banner ads or some other products. Your product could actually be great for driving traffic.

Hey bro, not bad for a newbie, you created a good site but as what other says no one would like to buy on a site like this. Anyways that's a good start and good luck.

As a former direct sales expert, here is my advice..

you say you sold computers... ok so you know how most people buying a PC dont know anything about the hardware specs... if you try to sell them 500GB hard drive and a quad core processor and awesome video card etc then most wont have a clue you are speaking greek. But if you ask them questions like "What do you plan to use the PC for" and "how fast do you need for it to be" etc then you can tell them "yeah this PC right here is perfect for what you need and will let you stream movies and play games all at once" or something then what you are doing is you are engaging the customer's needs and wants and selling to them based on their level of what they want and what they need using terms they understand such as "here is the result or here is what you will get" with this item rather than "here is this item's specs"

anyway that is an example of how you need to sell, no matter the product or service, catering the the customers needs and it works in an industry even magazines!! if you can apply the same method to it.

hope this helps, cheers!

Forget everything you think you know & start over with a product that makes sense.