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Please review my site - catalog of industrial products and services

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  • Profile picture of the author getsometraffic
    Looks like it could use some work ,,
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  • Profile picture of the author Jellypie Software
    It doesn't look like a finished website. It looks like basic boot strap site with some random content scattered about. What are you trying to achieve with it? I honestly don't have the faintest idea what it's about from looking at it.

    You need to spell this out above the fold to visitors. Explain what the site is simply and succinctly at the top of the page. Add some graphics and a logo. Also your domain name is truly awful for a site that purports to "Promote your industrial products and services, for free.". Why on earth would anyone want to promote their products on a site called Naive Shark? The word Shark has many meanings, all of them universally negative. I.E. "a person who preys greedily on others, as by cheating or usury."

    Anyway I hope this helps. It seems that you need it!
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    • Profile picture of the author Y N
      Thank you for the detailed answer.

      It is true; I am not good at English. Do you think that naiveshark is bad? My intent was to make it a little informal and funy. And I thought that the reference to the shark does not have such a negative connotation. For example, there are other people's sites wireshark.org (software), cheapshark.com (games) etc.

      Do you think I need to choose a more formal, official site name?


      Originally Posted by Jellypie Software View Post

      Why on earth would anyone want to promote their products on a site called Naive Shark? The word Shark has many meanings, all of them universally negative. I.E. "a person who preys greedily on others, as by cheating or usury."

      Anyway I hope this helps. It seems that you need it!
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